my art

[princess_snowcap 4]

ok this is the thread for my art work if you wanna see it go here http://alexyota.deviantart.com/ thanks

 

please comment on my artworks

 

ug the 100 min is so freeking annoying im only writing this part to get to the 100 so ignore it thanks  

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Wow! That is a very nice drawing! I loved the style you used, although the one thing that's kinda bugging me is Tavi's tail. It just seems so stiff and not as free as Vinyl's tail. 

[dedacct6 2,591]

Hmmm... anatomy looks off. 

-Octavia's snout off, snouts usually perk up a bit, and should be a little smaller

-As for vinyl, her snout perks up too much, making her face look off

-The ponies are too big for their legs, the legs need to be angled better

-Octavia's flank is big in comparison to her leg, even it out a little bit

-Colours are off, Octavia's mane is black, not brown. and Vinyl's mane is blue and light blue, not teal and purple.

-Octavia's tail is very stiff, unlike vinyls, it doesn't look like it naturally flows like Vinyls

-I can say your linework is good and you are getting there, just enhance your anatomy to look more accurate

 

I'll suggest a pony anatomy chart, if you don't have that, you'll be blindly free handing. learn it, remember it, and draw it.

It'll be a bit tedious to learn anatomy at first,  but you will get the hang of it, and it's definitely worth it

[vanished 46]

Looks like you just started arting. Without going into the anatomy mumbo jumbo I'd like to say arting can be pretty stressing, or not depending on who you are.

 

I'm also really new to art, I just started this year and the big help I got was watching 'Drawponies's tutorial on anatomy and using undersketching to help place certain parts where they need to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pv5Bt1CtrI&feature=youtu.be&t=3m53s

 

Practice practice practice, I used to think practice was a myth till I started to see improvement, I'm no artist but I can surely give tips

[FruitRiver 355]

Looks like you just started arting. Without going into the anatomy mumbo jumbo I'd like to say arting can be pretty stressing, or not depending on who you are.

 

I'm also really new to art, I just started this year and the big help I got was watching 'Drawponies's tutorial on anatomy and using undersketching to help place certain parts where they need to: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-pv5Bt1CtrI&feature=youtu.be&t=3m53s

 

Practice practice practice, I used to think practice was a myth till I started to see improvement, I'm no artist but I can surely give tips

Well if you aren't thinking about being an artist as a job, or you really love drawing its not stressful. Or at least, for me it wasn't. Also, if you draw, you are an artist. You don't have to be a professional to be an artist.

 

About the drawing: Good job! It looks pretty good. Keep practicing, and I promise you will see yourself improve! Honestly, I think if you keep practicing you can teach yourself, although tutorials can help. But after you get the basics, than adding your own style and touches is a lot of fun!

Edited November 13, 2013 by FruitRiver

[princess_snowcap 4]

ok i saw most of the things and heres my explanations as to why

 

ok octavias tail is straight becuase her character unlike vinyl is very classy and very lovely while vinyl is a wild child which is why her mane and tail flow and are well wild

 

the thing with vinyls hair yeah i didnt have the correct colors if i did i would have made it the right colors

 

 as for octavias mane being brown wlel the pic i found depected her with brown hair and honestly i love brown hair

 

i have many more peices

 

ok i have two peices both drawn by me with diffrent art styles one being serious and detailed and the other being cartoony i enjoy the cartoony style of art work cause it goes well with my drawing style 

 

and if you lvoe drawing with a passion it wont be stressful but well be fun see i enjoy drawing heck when im inspired i have to draw my heart tells me so