fanfic idea

[gizmo gadget 2]

Could you guys hear my fan fic idea and give some constructive criticism please. My idea is based on sonic and mlp, which contains sonaze. During a fight with eggman the team get sent to equestria and later on they find out that rainbowdash is the love child of sonic and blaze. Sorry if this isnt explained well

[ninjamon102938 222]

Dude thats creepy(and weird)

[Harmonic Revelations 8,833]

I'm going to need more than that to go off of. Can you please explain the plot in more detail?

 

While I tend to be very against cross-over fanfics in general (With few exceptions), it might not be that bad of an idea if you explain it in more detail first so I know what you're getting at.

[gizmo gadget 2]

Let me explain. Rainbow dash has a bit of sonic and blazes speed. The main colour is from the wisps that sonic had used. The pony part is s bit difficult to explain

[repsol rave 2,963]

any ideas on story progression? like how do they find out, what do they do when she hears it, when do they get sucked into equestria, etc.

Edited January 26, 2014 by repsol rave

[gizmo gadget 2]

They find out when twilight and tails become interested in the other species(anthromorphs and magicle ponies) and the do studies on the team and mane 6.when they compare the dna, thats where the find the similarities. Equestria is based in another dimension hundreds of years in the future, future sonic and blaze send rainbow there because of a huge dissaster and ponies who look like her adopt her. Her body changes over the years quickly into a pony.

[repsol rave 2,963]

oh wow, as you say it i still see massive plotholes XD tough this does sound like a fanfic i've never seen before! 

first plothole: 

if sonic send her into the future, why doesn't he know about her or even about the pony race?

[gizmo gadget 2]

Its this time thing. Im using the modern sonic of today. The one that sent her to tge future is at least 25 years later. Thanks btw

Yes my minds a bit...odd. heh

Edited January 26, 2014 by gizmo gadget

[repsol rave 2,963]

ah, so it's a paradox-ish story. interesting, this does explain a lot actually! 

so what was your idea on the whole disaster thingy?

[gizmo gadget 2]

I kinda want it to be like an apocalyptic scene, most likely caused by eggman. Still stuck on that bit. Any ideas?

[repsol rave 2,963]

you could make it like eggman destroys equestria. then sonic and his team have to help the elements out to defeat him. or something like that.

tough i feel like that is a pretty often used idea...

[gizmo gadget 2]

Sometimes over used is for the best