fan story in development - offering OC positions in the story!

[Bastion 414]

So your interested, guess that is why you click on the thread. here are the details.

 

Story - main aspect.

Set in the era of Equestrian history where Discord first took control of Equestria, a team of ponies trained in samurai combat are chosen to bring Harmony by defeating Discord, Each pony selected are unique in their abilities and suit the job greatly, Hyper and Eice are the first ponies chosen for this task.

But when fighting chaos you are not going to remain the same afterwards. 

everypony has their secrets, their weaknesses and their breaking points; chaos will reveal them to us even if it needs to be revealed in fire, blood and anguish.

 

above is the jist of it, if you want the full detail then you can see a little extract of the opening here!

 

 

 

Equsetria, a land of peace and harmony, a place where anypony could be safe without a care in the world. Or at least that is what we hoped for, a creature of chaos has taken control of the world, our guardians are not strong enough to defeat the creature, we are trapped under it's influence, day and night are out of control, crops that kept everyone in perfect shape are dying at a rapid rate and many ponies are starting to fend for themselves, turning against each other in a desperate attempt to get what they need, we have called this creature “Discord”.

While the chaos is spreading across the land, there is one part of Equestria where the effects have been limited greatly, ponies still lived as normal as if they had not known of the current events that was right outside their lands, but they still knew they needed to prepare, foodstuffs were gathered and preserved in case of a poor harvest in coming years and many residents, especially newborns were to be trained to defend their land.

 

Welcome to Eastern Equestria.

 

In this landscape, there was a small town, this town was specialised in the training of soldiers to defend the land, they were taught by the greatest fighters in Equestria, I'm sure this town was called Kushiro; in this town held two specific families, both of these families were dedicated to protect and serve, which had been kept for more than 8 generations, these families were the Bastion family and the Seathe family.

These two families gave us two ponies who would do more than serve the Eastern Region, these ponies were known as Hyper, and Eice.

 

 

 

 

 

Story - Time and place

Details on time and place are as listed.

 

Time - Equestria's early years when Discord first ever had full control.

Place - Equestria as normal, starting in Eastern Equestria and then following the regular setting

Place 2 - The afterlife, the world Necra controls, ponies here are ones who have died.

 

Story - Current primary characters

-Hyper - a samurai pyromancer who is selected for the mission

-Eice - a samurai cyromancer, a friend to Hyper who is also selected for this mission

- Amber Aura - a ghost that serves as the team's scout.

 

-Princess Necra - guardian of the afterlife, has special connections to a certain pony in the team

-Princess Celestia - Guardian of Equestria, the mind behind the mission and researcher of the Elements

-Princess Luna - Guardian of Equestria, Commander of Canterlot's royal military unit.

 

-Discord - Evil ruler of Equestria, must be stopped at all costs!

 

 

Story - Current Secondary characters

- Diane - family friend to Hyper, motherly attitude and uplifting smile.

- Griffin - Teacher of alternate magic, taught Hyper and Eice their abilities

- infinity - Combat advisor and secondary commander of Canterlot's Royal military unit.

 

-Your OC could be this one!

-Your OC could be this one!

-Your OC could be this one!

 

Other placements

If your OC does not fit into any of the two categories above there are placements for other encounters, these encounters are only short term and will not be sen throughout the entire story, these characters can include

 

- hostiles - ponies and other creatures that the team have to combat, these can be full out fighters or drunken brawlers.

OCs in this listing

 

 

- Citizens - Ponies and other creatures who live in the secure towns as normal, interactions with the team are brief.

OCs in this listing

 

 

- The Dead version 1 - regular dead, killed by hostiles for example, they are used for purposes such as atmosphere builders or moral messages.

OCs in this listing

 

- The Dead version 2 - residents of Necra's world, ponies already passed and their spirits live out new lives in this special land.

OC's in this listing

 

those are the primary details, now onto submission rules

 

- OC must be listed in the character log in the roleplay section, and linked with the application

- OC must match time and setting, no point having a modern pony trapped in time plot along with the current story

- OC must be your own! dont post other OCs that are not yours!

 

Other notes on submissions

Do not post them in this thread, you must private message me your applications or they will not be read or accepted!

 

Well that's about it everypony, submit if you wish and you can also support the story in development by posting constructive criticism bellow as I will be posting little extracts from the work in progress as it goes!

 

Character OC links and credits

Amber Aura

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/amber-aura-r4039

Is owned by

http://mlpforums.com/user/7077-celtore/

 

Hyper Bastion

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/burning-h-bastion-r5178

Is owned by

http://mlpforums.com/user/17815-hyper/

 

Eice, Princess Necra, Diane, Griffin and Infinity are all characters created By Hyper for use in this story

http://mlpforums.com/user/17815-hyper/

Edited March 3, 2014 by Hyper

[SnipSnap 432]

I'm interested, because I am working on my OC right now. Is there a deadline or something for this?

[Bastion 414]

I'm interested, because I am working on my OC right now. Is there a deadline or something for this?

 

Entry deadline is the story's release date, which is not confirmed yet but the sooner the better so I don't have to edit so much at a later date.

[Doc. Volt 2,561]

@,

 

if you need Volt, you can use him everything on the singature! bye!

[Bastion 414]

@@Doc. Volt, 

 

 

I wanted to but I don't think he was around in this time period (unless he was and I just don't know) so I probably won't be able to use him very well, if you got any other secondary OCs that you would want in on this story then I'd be happy to check those out.

 

and don't worry, If I make another story or Sequel to this one then I will probably include yours (with your permission)

Edited March 2, 2014 by Hyper

[Doc. Volt 2,561]

@,

 

it's ok i don't want to be in at least if you don't need me, and no, i have only this oc yet, if you need me for anything else, just ask! i will be honored!

[Elements of Power 12]

You may use Cogs. I don't have his info up on this site, so I'll describe him here.

 

Cogs is a more-than-slightly insane sadistic knife specialist. He has a black saddlebag containing exactly 100 knives and one wrench (could be replaced with another object). Each of the knives has a different power, and he has to draw them at random. The wrench/object of your choice is the 101st object, and he draws it only when death is near. It heals his wounds and causes him to be able to wield all of his knives' powers while it is out. However, in this state, if he is damaged AT ALL, he is killed.

 

NOTE: Cogs is a batpony. Here's a picture:

 

[Bastion 414]

You may use Cogs. I don't have his info up on this site, so I'll describe him here.

 

Cogs is a more-than-slightly insane sadistic knife specialist. He has a black saddlebag containing exactly 100 knives and one wrench (could be replaced with another object). Each of the knives has a different power, and he has to draw them at random. The wrench/object of your choice is the 101st object, and he draws it only when death is near. It heals his wounds and causes him to be able to wield all of his knives' powers while it is out. However, in this state, if he is damaged AT ALL, he is killed.

 

NOTE: Cogs is a batpony. Here's a picture:

 

Sorry but.

"Do not post them in this thread, you must private message me your applications or they will not be read or accepted!"

update

Primary character Slot has been filled

 

Other slots are still avalible.

Edited March 3, 2014 by Hyper