My first go at House music

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

So after showing the music teacher at my school some of the stuff I've created, she want's me to be in the music night. I've come the conclusion most people attending are going to be parents and some of the older folk and I've decided that they probably won't appreciate the heavy "Doof Doof" Of my classic Hardstyle and hardcore tunes so I decided to tone it down a little bit and came up with this:

https://soundcloud.com/bass-jester/untitled-mp3

What do you guys think of it, Criticism would be great

[ParsoOfEquestria 1,490]

I like it!

 

criticism, I don't know how to make songs like this, so I feel I'm in no position to critic anything I can't do better :3