advanced Love story

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

I am creating a story that makes you choose every now and then until you get to the end of the story the rules are as follows:No trolling,No Nsfw,and have fun but you might want to think about youre choices or you may end up Dying

[Commander Frost 731]

Could you be a bit more specific?

[ninjamon102938 222]

what about our story that got locked, are we still continuing it?

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

Could you be a bit more specific?

You really want me to be Specific? well ok lets see if you make a bad choice you will be killed in some horrible way. And yes we are continuing it.

Edited March 28, 2014 by kyderman225@aol.com

[ninjamon102938 222]

You really want me to be Specific? well ok lets see if you make a bad choice you will be killed in some horrible way. And yes we are continuing it.

When exactly will we

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

Soon.Very Very Soon.

[Espurr 449]

Sounds good. maybe I could be in it. or maybe I could go get my OC and a bucket of SCI FI weapons because THINGS ARE ABOUT TO GET MESSY!

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

Ok sure but most of the deaths are done by my oc and his black magic,but yeh u can be in it and it is now unlocked.

[Stormbringer 346]

 

 

oc and his black magic

 

 

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

whats that mean sir?  :okiedokielokie:

[Vinyl Scratch. 604]

Perhaps you might want to add more detail and format the OOC in a more organised fashion, I'm not trying to be an asshole I'm just giving you a bit of advice

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@kyderman225@aol.com,

 

It means that your OC's a bit Mary Sue. Mary Sue means having powers to powerful for any other OC to stop them, which is why he gave you the thumbs down. If this is a love story, then there shouldn't be any crazy deaths.

 

In other words, your OC is a little overpowered.  

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

in the end almost everyone gets a lover,but my Oc is not to be toyed with but i will let people choose who they love in this story,first you must gain the trust of My oc so he doesnt kill you.then you can love or hate anyone,just saying if spmeone were to try and love Shadow Knight i hope they like Black magic.   :comeatus:

@@kyderman225@aol.com,

 

 

In other words, your OC is a little overpowered.  

Shadow Knights power comes from his hatred of people and untrust,but you get him to like you and trust you he will slowly Demenish in power and too much affection could send him to his utter Doom.  

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@kyderman225@aol.com,

 

Unfortunately, that's not gonna fly in my book either. A romance RP without some sort of overlord looking at the ponies is not really that fun at all. Besides, it just makes your OC look bad, and players will drop out quickly. Just a simple romance RP would do. Take away all of the dark and black magic, the death and all that, and I promise you, you'll get more attention.  

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

If you decide you want to be you can but my OC will Probably NOT get a lover but yeah i will take away some stuff now and then but i dont care about attention,if people decide to give it a chance they can...   

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@kyderman225@aol.com,

 

Well...it's actually better for your OC to HAVE a lover. It will make things more interesting, instead of him watching over. Because that basically putting your OC in Celestia's position, which will cause people to be uninterested.  

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

If someone decides to love my OC they can but they must the ties between him and his past... in other words his past will effect thy future... If you wanna be my oc's lover you may...    

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@kyderman225@aol.com,

 

Does that mean he's a time lord? 

[kyderman225@aol.com 6]

umm... im not sure... all i know is that he was possessed by slender... 

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

@@kyderman225@aol.com, 

 

Not sure? Well he's your OC! And being possessed by Slender? ...Nope, sorry dude. I think you need help redefining your OC before you can take it in to the RP world.