Help me brainstorm some ideas for Rainbow Burger

[Kel_Grym 1,917]

I got this fic called Rainbow Burger. It's worth checking out. Time keeps slipping by and it's getting harder to find time to work on it. When I do have time to work on it, I'm starting to come against a wall with jokes for the fic.

 

So this is an open invitation to help me brainstorm some ideas. You might want to read the fic, to get an idea of what's going on, if you want to help with jokes and gags.

 

I'm really better at situational comdey than anything else, but when it comes to more subtle things, I think I'm lacking.

 

Right now I'm in the middle of rewriting parts of chapter 2. I'm at this one part where Pinkamena is taking an order to the table of two humans that are in the middle of a discussion...

 

Not sure what the discussion should be about though. I want to use it as a chance to do some more world building, and as a device to tick Pinkamena off. I'm drawing a blank though.

 

Your help is appreciated.

[Button_Mash 16]

Introduce a new character? Doing that can usually help out, if you know what you're doing.

[Wardaddy 470]

"Welcome to Rainbow Burger, home of the Rainbow Burger. May I take your order?"

 

LOL, but seriously, I got nothing. The thread reminded me of Good Burger and I'd thought I'd drop by.

[Sunny Shimmer 259]

Good Burger! Awesome movie.

 

But anyways I will read it and get back to you.

[ghostfacekiller39 23,860]

"Welcome to Rainbow Burger, home of the Rainbow Burger. May I take your order?"

OP, you should throw that reference in there!! That's an awesome movie, and you'll get major brownie points with anyone who catches the reference Maybe Pinkamena can say it somewhere...?

Edited May 2, 2014 by ghostfacekiller39

[Kel_Grym 1,917]

OP, you should throw that reference in there!! That's an awesome movie, and you'll get major brownie points with anyone who catches the reference Maybe Pinkamena can say it somewhere...?

 

I already got the reference in. Lyra says it.

[Dattebayo 2,850]

"Buck you, buck you, buck YOU...you're cool, and buck you, I'm out."

Edited May 2, 2014 by Dattebayo

[Jorguil 54]

Well I must be evil but I actually thought someone was making a equestria girls parody of cupcakes 

[Kel_Grym 1,917]

Well I must be evil but I actually thought someone was making a equestria girls parody of cupcakes 

 

Lol. Yeah, lot of people think something like that at first.

Introduce a new character? Doing that can usually help out, if you know what you're doing.

 

that is something I could do, however, I'm in the middle of a chapter rewrite, and I already got a lot of characters to work with.