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Hey, I've been watching this thread for a while and I couldn't help but notice you need a new member for this little shin-dig. I was wondering if there's any way I could join at the last second. If so, I'll put my character sheet up in a few.

Galdly. Im kinda traveling right now, but ill read the character sheet and see if its acceptable.

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Ok, here it is. If there's anything that might need tweaking, don't hesitate to tell me. I could always use some more constructive criticism.

 

OC:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/domino-r6445

Well... We were missing a character like this. Domino is basically a self-centered arsehole with an ego, right? Ive found those characters tend to hate Soul, and so it would be a good addition. Ill add you to the OP when i can, but for now, feel free to make your intro post in the RP.

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Ok, here it is. If there's anything that might need tweaking, don't hesitate to tell me. I could always use some more constructive criticism.

 

OC:http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/domino-r6445

I'm not Grapz, but I'll throw in my two bits for some constructive criticism

 

This character sounds like would be interesting, he really does. But the problem is I don't see how he could work in the context of this RP. They way your wrote this character's personality seems like he hates other ponies in general. So I don't see why he would be part of a group if he can't tolerate other ponies in general. Add on to the fact that he would have to take orders from Lone Survivor and it would be very much out of the character you've written for him to be in the group. This very much seems like the character in a zombie movie that says he doesn't need anypony's help and goes off on his own.

 

And also, why would the others want to keep him in the group as well. I'm sorry for being so blunt, but this character seems like a complete flankhole. I get the notion that he wouldn't try to help anypony and would just laugh if they were in danger. If it came to the fact that I needed to push somepony into a hoard of zombies to survive, I would choose Domino with NO hesitation. And I'm pretty sure any group would leave a character like this behind the first chance they got, if they somehow decided to take him along that is. 

 

But all these things could make for an interesting story line, idk. It's all up to Grapz in the end.


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Yeah, see, that was kind of the point of his creation. He's basically the foil to the rest of the group members. While they are out trying to help others and survive, Domino is taking what he wants and capitalizing on people's emotions. He's not doing things out of the goodness of his heart, he's doing it to survive and prosper.


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@Domino And I get that, but I'm wondering why would they let him stay? Aside from his smarts (which if I'm not mistaken we already have two or three ponies with that quality) why would anypony put up with his personality?


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@Domino And I get that, but I'm wondering why would they let him stay? Aside from his smarts (which if I'm not mistaken we already have two or three ponies with that quality) why would anypony put up with his personality?

For survivors. Soul is interested in having a group of survivors that can stay alive, and There is always that one a-hole who pisses everyone off but are stuck with.

Besides, Soul wouldnt like him, but he wouldnt leave him to die, either. He'd see that as "stooping down to his level."

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Just so you guys know... I plan on having the camp eventually become overrun by zombies.

 

Oh how evil can I be? :D

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@@COBLoneWolf,

can't really do that, though. I put as his description in the OP:


 

COBLoneWolf---Lone Nomad

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/lone-nomad-r4474

<>A Unicorn who was at the center of the infection, He's gone slightly insane from the amount of death he's been forced to witness.

Because you didn't give me much to work with on how he could be helpful in a zombie apocolypse

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