Lemon Slices

Hahah! Nobody voted in no.

Thanks for all the votes on the poll ! As I see, forbidding pit-bull breeding is non-sense and opinions that sustain it is based in common sense.

Hello people. My father keeps claiming that people shouldn't breed pitbulls, because there are a lot of accidents that the dog kills children, including the owner's kids. I go against, because my opinion is that the dog's personality is molded by the owner's actions. If you treat your dog bad, the dog will be bad. People should have a certificate that allow them to breed them and take care of them.

Johnn Pack wasn't too alerted to hear Pink's steps on the stone streets. He just was interested in storing the potion. But when he realized the steam would denounce him, he needed to think fast. Oh no! I need to go away. ASAP. Instead of jumping through the window, he decided to escape from the front door, stupidly. So he saw the first living thing of the city, smiling in front of him. A pink mare, with brown mane and green-water eyes. Her name was...

Yeah, Chuck Norris' Facts still exists, and is since 2005, I guess. Because Internet. First of all, this has nothing to do with the Mary-Sue conspiracy with main characters. This is just to have some fun and share creative ideas. #1) In the episode The Return of Harmony part 1, Twilight's all-fixing magic didn't "work" just because the backstage and the animators begged her not to do. Rules Inspired by Twilight:

Blitz, you wrote pretty well here in your first chapter, and surprised me in the first place. Size, excellent grammar, well-used words, not abusing from annoying words, any beta-reader like me would appreciate your project. I think you lied when you said it was your first fanfic, that text seems that you have plenty of experience. Congratulations, and keep going on.

Well.... Make, of course, if the plot is yours... I don't think that Twilight, so pacifist that her personality is, would want to lead troops to a war. Neither would the other main chars. Let other major chars do the service, like Shining Armor instead. Ah, and let me read your fanfic, please. I am a beta-reader, I know how to judge texts.

281663 Hello... Goodbye! XD

Hmmm.... Great question. The best option I can see is putting the Celestian soldier instead. Depends of the personality. If he is meticulous, it was a great plan, that could be told to the reader piece by piece in the plot. For example... Just random ideas I had. But you can also make him have a different perspective of life, and a chance of the soldier change his side of the battle. I was about to ask you if you are putting romance on this, because you know... Just imagine, two ponies from different sides, but they love each other... Or they keep a secret, that if it's told, can kill them both. Explore that things.

Hello, Lemon Slices there. I see that lots of writers need help with their projects. I like writing, and I know where something is wrong. I can offer free beta-reading services for who is really needing. I'll make a critique of each of the chapters, including: >Bad used words (talking about words that reduce the value of your text) >If you failed at writing a character's behavior >Low description (actions, places, characters...) >And much more. Ah, and thanks for all!

Oh snap. Too loud. Johnn hasn't been careful in that moment. The screeching metal sound made in the mounting process of the brewing stand could be heard from very far, and scared a bunch of sleeping bats on the house's roof. The flapping sound scared Johnn himself, so he hid under the table until they get away. Silence... Silence... Oh no, the water! The water boiled too fast. Using the floor's extremely dry wood was a bad idea since it actually burnt faster than coal. Removing the boiler, he had to wait before putting the anesthetic herbs inside. But... the steam escaped from the roof and left a good signal in the air, showing his position. While this, Johnn did not realized. Just continued mixing and brewing. Must find a glass to store this stuff, and... Voilá! Johnn stored two brews in a tall, but thin, empty grape juice glass bottle. This probably came from Pra... Pra... The bottle label is too dirty to read, but probably Prance. Well, at least I'll have an anesthetic drink with grape flavor. Isn't it great?, said, laughing, unaware of enemies, or allies, or everything. Johnn Pack's inventory(Saddlebags):

No clock. Damn. No compass too. Damn. It would make my travel easier. Well, it was actually my fault for forgetting to put the things on the right place and the right time, but... Damn. The water bottle got full. "Okay. where is my coffee beans... Here.", he said that looking for the brewing stand's feet pieces too. After building the stand, a piece of coal were put under the bottle, in a cylindrical place, to burn and boil the healthy fluid. One of them was enough; He learnt that too much heat would make the water too hot for the mixture. In short, he needed to be careful: Stop before water becomes steam. His job were successful, although Johnn has not much expertise on that. Just forgot to crunch the beans to make the brew easier (bad luck, actually; He could bring more tools in his saddlebag, if his arrive here had not been so bad), so using the bare hooves was the actual choice. Well, these little big grains weakens the potion, but even a horseshoe would help in this. But don't worry, Johnn. Soon you'll have the relic, and tools would be less than an option... The mixture took a few minutes to get complete and fresh for storing. Johnn, one day, created a tool to close bottles, but he couldn't bring. Just checked if the liquid won't escape the bottle, and it was alright. ...Alright. Let's un-mount the brewing stand, and get out of the cave. Johnn Pack's inventory:

You read the title. So you ask yourself "WTF this guy is saying?" So, I'll explain my situation and show you why, between AOE2 The Conquerors is better than AOE2 HD: First: LAN play >Age of Empires 2 HD Edition does not have LAN TCP/IP play option. Like "I am playing with my friends and we don't have internet, but we can make a LAN. Oops, sorry, we can't, because this game doesn't allow it", that happened with my brother and my father. >Age of Empires 2 HD Edition does not have anything, anything new. I was used to play AOE 2 Age of Kings, and when I played The Conquerors, I said, "Wow, now I can garrison units in battering rams", "Wow, there's more civilizations", "Wow, new campaigns", etc. But I saw some videos in internet and... "What?! There's the same civilizations, researches, and stuff... is this the AoE2HD?" >Age of Empires 2 HD Edition is very expensive, and is not worthy if you already have the original game. 20 dollars. If you already have the original game, you can download a few mods to change quality and resolution. I mean, Aoe2HD is, in fact, more expensive and, as I mentioned before, less features. I can only see some good points: 1)You can play on Steam (only on Steam) 2)Works good on all PCs, full resolution, AoE2 TC the graphics are a bit bad, but it's easy to fix 3)Have I already said this game can be played in Steam?

OOC Here Actually, it's been a while since I got inside those walls. But seems like nopony lives here anymore. Five years were enough to make this... Look at all this decaying houses. I can even smell rotten food and see abandoned toys around. But what am I searching here? Let's read the note again to recap... Ahn... "Seek for something abnormal happening in the ghost town. Report ASAP"... Johnn Pack found a house in a heavier state of decay. The door was stuck, but nothing a buck can't do. Inside the house, along with decaying wooden chairs and a broken, old table, a stone sink. Probably an intact water, probably infected and broken pipes, he thought to himself. Anyway, since I have this brewing stand, I can boil the water and remove the possible disease from this sink water, and after concluding this, he started to set the brewing stand. Johnn Pack's inventory (Saddlebags):

OOC Here Finally. Let's see what this map says... Ok. Just turn left after the next mountain. Oh damn. Those spikes make my hooves hurt. And this dense forest has so many...Mosquitoes... I need a safe place to rest... And... Oh, there's a cave nearby. Better go there and sleep a bit; I hope there's no... scary monsters... Johnn Pack, after a five-minute walk, got inside the cave. Water was dripping from the ceiling. Since he had a bottle in his saddlebag, he thought to himself: "Oh, looks like we have clean water here! And later, something to brew!" The white stallion ran to the center of the cave room, and put the bottle to fill with the water drops. Johnn Pack's inventory (Saddlebags):