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Sonata Jets

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  1. Hi, your probably really busy but if you get a spot open, could you draw Ivory please?
  2. Sonata Jets

    request shop Small pixelated ponies

    Finished Done, sorry that took a while
  3. You have to press the upload files/more reply options button. I think it's available to muffins User below draw the phantom of the opera
  4. Curse my lack of art skill. Nice oc!
  5. Sonata Jets

    request shop Small pixelated ponies

    Sure! Yeah I can do that!
  6. Sonata Jets

    request shop Small pixelated ponies

    Thanks for your guys patience! These were so fun to work on!
  7. She would grab a bat (get it) and would see if your oc was friendly. Your OC is the owner of all of Equestria's orphanages, since that business is doing great they become rich over night. What do they do with the money?
  8. Sonata Jets

    request shop Small pixelated ponies

    Hi everyone, I haven't been on the computer lately I didn't realize requests were coming in, I'm actually going to be without computer for about a week or two to go somewhere, I've been running through stores and packing so I haven't had much time to check things. I will get to work on all of these, just they won't be posted as quickly as they usually are. Thanks for requesting, I'll do all of those, Have a great day! Welcome back, sure thing Thanks, sure I can. Blank flanks are totally cool no worries. Sure! May have to adjust the base a bit, but it should turn out well! Sure. Of course. I can do it. Sure!
  9. How tough am I? I used the Tumblr app on an ipad and only threw it across the room 32 times
  10. Absolutely! I've been hoping for people to request!
  11. 3 questions 1. Whats the blue on your legs, is it socks or part of you 2. So do you have a special somepony? If you do, watch things do you guys like doing together? 3. How do you style your mane, it's fab!
  12. You filled in pretty much everything, it all makes sense and is very well put together The things about the potion and what it is capable of makes sense The way Pisces could do everything, it makes sense The reason why the map called both of them, makes sense The love thing, again makes sense, and wow it's pretty deep (in a good way) It sounds like a great episode, or fanfic if you make it that, and honestly I really hope someone animates it or points it out to Hasbro or something, because it would be awesome to see that made.
  13. I really do like the idea of this episode, and think it could pass as a real episode with some adjustments. I wrote some things that stuck out to me when I read it, and yes I know this isn't completely detailed yet, so a bunch of these probably won't matter, I'm just pointing them out. (Some of these are things that stood out that I liked, some are minor problems, some maybe suggestions and some are just questions.) -I like the idea of Rarity and Twilight since it's magic and magic, but it should be more apparent why both of them were there. -I like the idea of Applewood because I love seeing places that are parody's of real cities. -The wanna be film maker is a good idea, especially since it's so different from the usual actor or actress wanna make it in da big city. So that's great. -With the potion thing, that might draw some attention, but it could be a great moral about addictive substances and how they ruin peoples lives. A pretty bold moral, but episodes with those morals are usually the best. Also the potion should have a name. -Okay wait never mind that line above, after reading the whole thing it seems this was not going in the direction I thought. Which is kinda confusing, just slow it down a bit to show what's actually going to happen and that should be fine. -Pisces like the zodiac sign? Neat, especially since that sign is stereo typically depicted as an imaginative type sign, so him being imagined and being named Pisces was a good touch. -So they get sucked into the film, while it seems a bit too magic, but it sounds very interesting and I wouldn't mind it. But can you explain how he did it? -The Pisces thing where he disappears and declares his love and she rejects him, in my mind is perfect, but you really gotta make us really feel what both of them are going through. Like the surprise Shooting is feeling, since apparently she didn't know and the feeling of sadness and heartbreak that Pisces is feeling. -With shooting going back to Manehatten, it seems a little well not as strong, I was under the impression that she deeply wanted to be in Applewood since Pieces materialized there, maybe instead she should book tickets for her family to visit her. So overall, I like the plot and most of the characters, and you said this was your first time writing child type stories, well then I gotta say it was pretty darn good, because I can barely write an mlp type story, since there are so many unspoken rules to it. You did a great job and would make a great guest writer for mlp.
  14. I love how the quote sounds so desperate, like "Hey buy our album" "Why?" "It's really a good one"
  15. (Okay I'll admit this is pretty dark, but it's also kinda interesting right?) Battle of the century Ponies line carefully Fillies watch tearfully As they drop like flies Unicorns are brusin But the princess is snoozing So honestly here's where Everyone dies Guards line the castle Mares start to cry Pegisi flying We're are own bad guy The leader The rebel The killer for the cause Walks over bodies, doesn't even pause She messed up her life And caused herself greif Her time was nearly over Her time was brief She sat in a throne all covered in red The battle is over Their queen Is Dead -To the person below, rap about Tumblr
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