music Mad Scientists (rough draft)

[Astral Blitzen 469]

Just a rough draft of a song I am working on.

 

 

[Pinkamena-Pills 6,839]

This can use some ironing out,ive listened to your music before and i know you can rough this out well.

 

I do like what you did between 1:02-1:30,however the beginning is too much to take in 

[AppleLover 146]

I write this while I listen, and I like it. The drums are nice, and it sounds kinda soothing at the beginning. Than at 1:04 it shfts over to some other type of instrument that I kind put my fingure on. Than it's back to drums. I like this. I honestly do. but once or twice it kinda sounds like something else is trying to play. But nice either way. 

[Astral Blitzen 469]

I write this while I listen, and I like it. The drums are nice, and it sounds kinda soothing at the beginning. Than at 1:04 it shfts over to some other type of instrument that I kind put my fingure on. Than it's back to drums. I like this. I honestly do. but once or twice it kinda sounds like something else is trying to play. But nice either way. 

It's a rough draft, I just kinda loosely put ideas together

[Terminal343 12]

I like it. Could use some ironing out, though. Just needs to be cleaner, smoother, and the transitions are a bit sudden.

[Astral Blitzen 469]

this is Rough Draft #2 kinda fixed the drums

[Kookie 135]

The 2nd one is a little good than the first one but that indian style string part of the song is what made my eyebrows go low because it doesn't sync right for me. I don't know. What do you guys think?