need suggestions on improvement

[Griffen Slayer 27]

OK so this is my 7th attempt at making an oc and I would like to know if there is anything anyone can see to help me improve.

Edited August 21, 2014 by Griffen Slayer

[Solecistic Miss 20]

If there was supposed to be a picture or link, it's not showing. 

[Griffen Slayer 27]

Sorry, new to uploading pics on here modified it to show it

[Solecistic Miss 20]

Ah!  Okie doke, no problem C:  

 

As far as design goes, I like it. The colors aren't too crazy, and go well together.  I like the bit of fluffiness you added to the chest. The cutie mark doesn't look too complicated either.   I don't know the personality or backstory yet, but so far you are doing really well!

[Griffen Slayer 27]

Thank you very much. Maybe I will be able to draw decently after all lol

^-^

[Derpaholic 1,155]

You're pretty well off as far as I'm concerned.
There nothing that really sticks out to me in a bad way, which is obviously a good thing.
Honestly, I'd just tell you to keep doing what you do. You're gonna figure this stuff out by yourself, anyway.
I can tell by this one drawing alone.

If you'd like some advice on art in general, feel free to PM me. I'd be more than happy to share what I know.

Edited August 21, 2014 by Derp My Life