Fantasy Short story, In Swedish!

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Greetings, I wanted to show you something. This is my own personal Urban Fantasy short story.

 

Our protagonist is a young girl ,16 years old, (about my age) who is a dreamer. She´s loves books and to travel to another worlds through them. (Guess that MLP has influenced my work some parts of this story..)

 

PLOT

One day we found our heroine in a library picking up new books to read when she, suddenly,find a secret trapdoor. This leads her to a mysterious underground room with two big platforms. On one of them she finds a old mysterious book. After that hell breaks lose. In no time Alice (which is our heroine´s name) find herself in the middle of an demon outbreak, that she started!

In nine days she most find they remaining parts of Hild´s souls. Hild, was an Godine?God?...either way she´s in nordic belief (not to be mixed up with christian belief). If she fail, the town will be overflowed with the full demon army of Hild´s warriors and Alice´s brother will become a real demon.

 

 

This Is my first story with a story line and constant writing. So cheers for that and please if you find this intriguing or interesting, HELP ME! You can read more about this epic Urban Fantasy in the link at the bottom,Also I would gladly take criticism on my writing so do that as well.(please,pretty please XD)

 

HERE IS THE LINK TO MY STORY. "Demon Jägarinnan" OR IN ENGLISH " THE DEMON HUNTRESS"

 

http://www.kapitel1.se/philip-johansson2/demon-jagarinnan

 

 

 

(The girl on the front page don´t necessarily is Alice,who knows...

Edited September 25, 2014 by Sonicrainboom97