First Pony Picture, Updated

[ZomBrony 347]

Yes, I know I already made one, but I couldn't find it, I wanted to update my original but like I said I can't find it.

 

This is my original drawing:

 

 

And this is the closest I could get with the Pony Creator:

 

 

So if anypony wants to critique my drawing, don't be afraid to, also, what do you think of how I did with the pony creator?

[Vicke 3,189]

The lines are very shakey, noise way way to pointy and long.

Liiks like the tail is a part of his flesh making it look like some sort of an arm.

He only got on wing?