ooc new lands ( a discovery of new lands adventure rp)

[Midnight_Aurora 571]

Ok am going to sleep soon. Night yall.

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

night! morning!

[Ochre_Dust 329]

Sparkle, a note on your grammar and spelling (it helps with immersion), 

 

to > I have to go to the washroom.

 

too > I have too many washrooms in this house.

 

two > I have two washrooms in this house.

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

hey im in bottom english expect less from me also whats it with you and washrooms?

[Ochre_Dust 329]

Parallel structure of lessons. The fewer differences between examples, the easier it is to point out the fundamental point.

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

oh you word good real good

[Midnight_Aurora 571]

Sparkle, Your first language isn't English, is it? I can usually tell. That is why I haven't said anything. Heck, I am not really good at spelling and grammar.

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

Yes I am 2/4 English 1/4 Irish and 1/4 welsh

[JonasDarkmane 19,785]

Common Spelling Mistakes

There, They're, Their: "There" is a place, "they're" is short for "they are," and "their" is something that belongs to someone.
Examples:

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Your, You're: "Your" refers to something that belongs to you, "you're" is short for "you are."
Examples:

 

• "There's Ponyville!"
• "They're being really jealous."
• "I don't think you should take their pie.

 

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• "Your tea, madam?"
• "You're ridiculous."

 

It's, Its: "It's" is short for "it is," "its" refers to something that belongs to something.
Examples:

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• "It's quiet in here..."
• "The dragon flexed its claws."

 

Then, Than: "Then" refers to a time when something happened, "than" is used to compare things.
Examples:

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• "Then a giant cupcake crushed the ponies!"
• "I'm 20% cooler than Rainbow Dash.

 

Who's, Whose: "Who's" is short for "who is," and "whose" refers to something that belongs to someone.
Examples:

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• "Who's there?!"
• "Whose blanket is this?"

 

 

 

Borrowing this from here https://mlpforums.com/topic/6539-a-general-guide-to-roleplaying/

 

I think you are rather fine even if there are some spelling errors, as long as you are understandable 

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

I GET IT OKAY?!

[Nom de Plume 29]

Sorry!  I wound up house-sitting for my brother last night while he went to go see his wife.  What's happened in the RP while I was gone?  My phone kept saying there was some kind of internal server error, so I'm a bit behind.  The fight ended, Ochre joined, then what?

 

@Sparkle Sword, I think Jonas was just trying to help all of us.  They are common mistakes, after all.  No need to get up in arms over it.  No one's chastising here, just trying to help.

Edited June 3, 2015 by Nom de Plume

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

captain ran off, white slapped sparkle and yeah 'bout it unless im missing something

[Nom de Plume 29]

Wait, why did that happen?  Context, please?

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

the captain got angry because white tryied too help her. white slapped sparkle 'cause he was talking with lunara

[Nom de Plume 29]

Ooo...kay?  Hm.  Thanks for the info, I'll go figure out what Treasure's doing.

[Midnight_Aurora 571]

Posted. For both.

[That pony 32]

Hi i would like to see if i could join this Roleplay? Heres my character:    https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/william-smith-will-for-short-r8361

 

application sheet

NAME: William smith

OCCUPATION: Explorer/Map maker

HOMETOWN: Cloudsdale

RACE: Pony

GENDER: Male

AGE: 20

BACKSTORY: In link

CREW POSITION: Mapper (ex: charting the X and Y Axis's and Writing the location of the islands and other landmasses)

Edited June 4, 2015 by That pony

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

@@That pony, 

isn't doing stuff with maps like the navigator's job 'cause we've got a navigator already but i don't mind if you want too change your position because nom de plume is navigator

[Midnight_Aurora 571]

Actually a mapper in my book is someone who makes maps. He could record a map of the areas we discover that aren't on the charts Tech got for our navigator.

[That pony 32]

@@That pony,

isn't doing stuff with maps like the navigator's job 'cause we've got a navigator already but i don't mind if you want too change your position because nom de plume is navigator

Sorry guys i didnt know you had a guy who does that already. Edited June 4, 2015 by That pony

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

ohh so you can join!

[Pucksterv 4,508]

@

 

What kind of ship am I sailing? Old school sailing? Cruise ship? Something else?

[The Pixelated Pony 883]

sailing ship

sail + ship

[Ochre_Dust 329]

@ @That pony

 

You might want to introduce your character fairly shortly. I think the group will be casting off soon!

[Midnight_Aurora 571]

Hey guys. I am sorry but this RP is becoming too confusing for me to continue. I am sorry but I will have to withdraw both of my chara's.

Edited June 4, 2015 by Midnight_Aurora