The Iron Age

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

No prefix for now. I'll add one when we get further in. Wouldn't wanna spoil any surprises.

 

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Edited July 20, 2015 by Mand'alor Dash

[Idris 241]

Well that's a rare old beast of a work, I enjoyed reading that

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

Well that's a rare old beast of a work, I enjoyed reading that

Thanks, man! What'd you like about it?

[Idris 241]

I didn't struggle to read it which is great. It just ran along. (Dyslexic)

The plane was a bit of a freeky turn, but why not? I mean, I just put the mane six in a computer server as new life forms so it's all good

Plus I'm in the middle of "fish in the clouds" so I'm big on pony flight this week.

Looking forward to some more chapters!

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

I read about 10 lines in the story, and you have grabbed my interest, my friend!

I haven't played any of the fallout games, does that make the story unreadable for me?

I will read everything when i have more time on me!

 

XOXO Blazedtime

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

I read about 10 lines in the story, and you have grabbed my interest, my friend!

I haven't played any of the fallout games, does that make the story unreadable for me?

I will read everything when i have more time on me!

 

XOXO Blazedtime

It's not related at all to Fallout. It's actually more of a historical setting.

 

You'll see.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

Ahh that's good to hear!

I will read it later, and offer you my support/feedback 

I am no writer, but i have read alot of fanfics, so i know a good fanfic when i see one.

But don't excpect me to fix any grammar issues, because english isn't my first language

 

XOXO Blazedtime

Hello friend, i'm reading through your story now, and i feel like the spiders that attacked RD and TS were not described entirey. What i mean is that i had a hard time imagining the spider (unless it's a big black spider) so add some more descriptions, like color, texture of the creature, did it have teeth things like that, and i feel that the chapter was a bit rushed. They saved the guy, and then BAM twilight is a diplomat. but i'm just neckpinching the chapter was excellent my friend. Hope to read the next chapter soon

 

XOXO Blazedtime

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

 

 

What i mean is that i had a hard time imagining the spider (unless it's a big black spider) so add some more descriptions, like color, texture of the creature,

 

They reappear later in the story. You'll see more of them then. It's kind of like a black widow the size of a pony.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

Ok, i can imagine that more clearly, are the spiders something you made up?

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

Ok, i can imagine that more clearly, are the spiders something you made up?

Yes, they are. They don't really exist in the MLP universe, to my knowledge.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

Then you have a brilliant imagination my friend!

I applaud you, it's the first time i've seen an original creature with an interesting backstory.

And i meant lf the spiders are from fallout or something

 

But i hope to see a new chapter soon

 

XOXO Blazedtime

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

Then you have a brilliant imagination my friend!

I applaud you, it's the first time i've seen an original creature with an interesting backstory.

And i meant lf the spiders are from fallout or something

 

But i hope to see a new chapter soon

 

XOXO Blazedtime

 

Like I said, there's no Fallout in this fic. Giant spiders are relatively common in fantasy, but I think the sword legs are an interesting twist on them.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

well, for me it's new.

I don't usually watch or read fantasy stories, untill now.

 

And the sword legs are pretty interesting. You should make something with their web too. If they produce web that is.

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

 

 

You should make something with their web too. If they produce web that is.

 

Oh, you're gonna love chapter 2.  

[Mand'alor Dash 2,224]

Hey guys, new chapter. Lemme know what you all think.

[Love Doctor Blaze 536]

Going straight to reading!