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Aria has fallen into aggressive apathy is currently contemplating her existence. She shall be with you momentarily, I hope.

Is there anything we can do to help her, Tavi?
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When this war is over, we all gotta sing this song.

(I don't know if it's Equestria's national anthem but I like to think it is)

 


I'd like to develop Jay more as a character, but I can't really think of anything cept for one thing... which requires Twilight. You see, Jinx sent her out before performing the spell, so maybe I could have her find the dungeon where Twilight is and speak to her? Sounds difficult to do but Jay's magic is all over the place cuz of what happened to her and doesn't do what it's supposed to do. Subconsciously, she could be focused on her lack of a cutie mark, so when she tries to use her magic for another thing, it instead teleports her to the pony who knows everything there is to know about the subject.

I've though about this for a long time. I'm fine with it on a few conditions. I know that Jay's magic being all over the place is her thing but I'm still gonna ask if you would hold this to the minimum. I'm not saying it can't be there but just not too extreme. Second thing, rather of Jay teleporting to Twilight, she just happens to stumble into the dungeons.

 

Also, don't expect Twilight to give any good advice. She's probably worn out, broken both mentally and physically.

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@@Pucksterv, That's fine. Jay doesn't like to use her magic very often at all, cuz of the unexpected effects, so she wouldn't use it at all unless it's for something minor. And yeah, she can accidentally stumble upon Twilight; the advice doesn't matter as far as usefulness goes, but maybe Jay could go and see Twilight more than once?

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@@Pucksterv, That's fine. Jay doesn't like to use her magic very often at all, cuz of the unexpected effects, so she wouldn't use it at all unless it's for something minor. And yeah, she can accidentally stumble upon Twilight; the advice doesn't matter as far as usefulness goes, but maybe Jay could go and see Twilight more than once?

sure thing.

 

One more thing. One of those times, Jay has to sneak Trivy with her someway. For whatever reason that would be. (otherwise I can never get the things I've planned for Trivy done)

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@@Pucksterv, Yes, she can do that; maybe risk a spell that turns her invisible? Tho she might reappear wearing a silly costume or something... O_o

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@@Pucksterv, That would be lol. XD Maybe afterwards, at a time when Jay and Trivy are alone together, Jay could mention that she saw Twilight, and Trivy could suggest that she go again and take Trivy along too? Jay would be reluctant to try the spell but she'd cave if Trivy put pressure on her.

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@@Pucksterv, That would be lol. XD Maybe afterwards, at a time when Jay and Trivy are alone together, Jay could mention that she saw Twilight, and Trivy could suggest that she go again and take Trivy along too? Jay would be reluctant to try the spell but she'd cave if Trivy put pressure on her.

sounds good

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@@Pucksterv, Shall I make the post showing Jay finding Twilight now then?


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deciding that it wouldn't do any harm if she wandered about the castle
 

 

I just want to remind you that this is Sombra's castle. Not Jinx's. So I want you to be sure about what you are posting since if Jay is found wandering about unchecked, she can get into big trouble. 

 

Just letting you know :) 

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@@JonasDarkmane, Yes, she knows. This is a plot idea so that Puck can have Trivy meet Twilight; she won't be doing this too often cuz she's afraid of the King. That's why I put that she's avoiding them. She won't be doing it too often tho. O_o

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@@JonasDarkmane, Yes, she knows. This is a plot idea so that Puck can have Trivy meet Twilight; she won't be doing this too often cuz she's afraid of the King. That's why I put that she's avoiding them. She won't be doing it too often tho. O_o

I am talking about Jinx's decision to let Jay wander about, not about Jay herself. 

 

However, I would want a PM with you so that we can work out better with how things go about within the castle. I am foreseeing most of Sombra's forces (in other words, representing them), so a bit cooperation would be nice :)

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@@JonasDarkmane, Jinx isn't letting ~Jay wander about, as such; she just sent her outside her apartments. I probably worded it wrong; I'll read it over again and edit it to make it clearer. Jinx would be really angry if she knew what Jay was doing!

 

Edit: Sorry, I re-read it and realise that I didn't word it properly. I didn't mean that Jinx allowed Jay the run of the castle; just that bit outside her apartments. Since all Jay has done before is walk up and down outside, that is what Jinx expects her to do.

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Jay entered the cell, using her magic to unlock the door; it worked, but feathers mixed with rose petals scattered all over the floor as she entered.

 

Sorry but since it's Twilight and it's a room full of Sombra's greatest enemies, I would assume it wouldn't be that easy to unlock the cell door. I should have said it before you posted sorry. Could jay perhaps have a conversation with Twilight without Jay entering the cell?

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@@Pucksterv, Yeah, I will edit to have her speak thru the door instead; I'd assume there was a door grill to let in air to stop Twilight suffocating. She can speak thru that.

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I didn't intend for the cider to be alcoholic... :/ just figured everypony could use a nice memory of home when the cider was bountiful. I didn't want it to be an alcoholic drink since it is just early in the morning and the grand ranger should be there soon. Everyone should be of sound mind and body... The cider was just a nice warm drink, like coffee... :/ sorry if I made it seem otherwise..

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@@Pucksterv, Yeah, I will edit to have her speak thru the door instead; I'd assume there was a door grill to let in air to stop Twilight suffocating. She can speak thru that.

yeah it's just a cell made out bars but protected with a magical barrier

 

I didn't intend for the cider to be alcoholic... :/ just figured everypony could use a nice memory of home when the cider was bountiful. I didn't want it to be an alcoholic drink since it is just early in the morning and the grand ranger should be there soon. Everyone should be of sound mind and body... The cider was just a nice warm drink, like coffee... :/ sorry if I made it seem otherwise..

I didn't realize xp Sorry.. I would want to change it but it seems a bit too late

 

Or I could just play it off like it's non alcoholic cider but winter doesn't know x3

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Kind of? I guess... since Stardust will be the bearer of the element of laughter, figured since we were basically told that all the elements are on the island then the element of laughter is close enough to have a tiny effect on her. idk. I can take it out if need be. 

Nah, I was just wondering. But I will leave that to Puck to judge. 

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