Vile Metal Liquid (Prose/poem)

[Viscra Maelstrom 3,718]

This section needs a prefix for general writing, imho. Gonna address that, myself.

 

Anyways, this is the most recent poem/prose I've made. Thought about submitting my old stuff here, so I went with my newest one to start it out with.

 

It's about a rather... unsettling experience, I hade some weeks ago, where I woke up in blood. More specifically, nose-blood. It turned out well in the long run, but had I not woken up my parents in the process, I'd stress myself out of peer pressure trying to aim-lessly fix it myself, with failure being impending.

 

But this is all boring stuff! Lets just get it over with, shall we?

 

Vile Metal Liquid

 

Blood

There was blood

Everywhere

 

Make it stop

Make it stop

Make it all

Please go away

 

Let all this bleeding

Be put to an end

Make all the pain

Please go away

 

Bleeding, disoriented,

On the white pillows

Forcing to digest

This vile, metal liquid

 

Bleeding, disoriented,

Running away

Force the flow off

This vile, metal liquid

 

Bleeding, disoriented,

It won't stop

Bleeding, disoriented,

Make it STOP!

 

Vile, metal liquid

It is everywhere

Flowing down digested

Forcing out the mucous

 

Please hear this plea

This call for help

Put an end to

This vile, metal liquid

 

Make it all

Please go away

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

That is some pretty dark stuff right there... Though i must admit it's very well written