offering critique Oc advice

[Minty_The_Sweet 20]

I have written 1 published mlp fiction (And have many sketches and side projects) and I do feel like I am pretty good with making ocs. I can help with backstory, name, personality, talents, and a few things. Feel free to ask me any oc advice

[P-Jay 1,987]

oh? well, im just gonna flip this around, and ask you about your oc's, if i may. XD

[Minty_The_Sweet 20]

I have many but my favourite is Minty Sparkle

She was my first ever pony Oc and when making her I couldn't decide weather to make her a pegasus, Unicorn, or earth pony. I made her a Alicorn and in one of my fan fictions it explains why (Very complicated story involving a cloning spell and Celestia and Luna). She was stolen out of her crib and brought to peace valley, a place far from Equestria where this pony though she would be safer. As she grew up she was often bullied by other ponies because of her strange appearance. In peace valley most ponies consider Alicorns to be very dangerous beings who should not be trusted.

 

Minty is very easily distracted and tends to get involved in her studies of magic and alchemy to the point where she might pass out during an experiment and wake up with strange side effects. She also can be too trusting and easily gives in to peer pressure because she wants to be accepted.

 

I do have many better ones but she is one of my first ever OCs so I feel a special connection with her.

[P-Jay 1,987]

I have many but my favourite is Minty Sparkle

She was my first ever pony Oc and when making her I couldn't decide weather to make her a pegasus, Unicorn, or earth pony. I made her a Alicorn and in one of my fan fictions it explains why (Very complicated story involving a cloning spell and Celestia and Luna). She was stolen out of her crib and brought to peace valley, a place far from Equestria where this pony though she would be safer. As she grew up she was often bullied by other ponies because of her strange appearance. In peace valley most ponies consider Alicorns to be very dangerous beings who should not be trusted.

 

Minty is very easily distracted and tends to get involved in her studies of magic and alchemy to the point where she might pass out during an experiment and wake up with strange side effects. She also can be too trusting and easily gives in to peer pressure because she wants to be accepted.

 

I do have many better ones but she is one of my first ever OCs so I feel a special connection with her.

oh, cool.  alicorn oc's are really very hard to pull off; id like to read your story, sometime. 

 

but for now, i would like to ask exactly how many oc's you have. and how long you've been writing/roleplaying. 

[Minty_The_Sweet 20]

Well Iv wanted to write since primary but I only started writing last year with a Fnaf fanfic. After that I got into MLP and started making my OCs in my story. to answer your question I don't know how many but if they top of my head I can list the names of my MLP OCs

 

Minty, Pepper, Red, Hannah, Spike, Atlantia, (5 un-nameed OCs), and I have made some future OCs for a sequel to my MLP fiction

Crystal ball, Odd ball, Loose screw and a few that I have forgotten the names of