writing So i tried to write a rap...

[AngelsNight 164]

Hi!

 

So i tried to make a rap and i made these lyrics.

 

I got lied to and always sat alone.

did everything on my own.

Why is it fun to break others?

every one does it from my mother to my brother.

I never wanted to lie.

Its just the feeling like i need to die.

Im not crying.

But on the inside im dying.

Stay strong they said.

They can all just drop dead.

commiting suicide is not for show.

It does not matter how long it was ago.

Memories will follow you till you go.

they will watch you grow.

Stalk you.

Hunt you down.

Make you drown.

And just as you think some thing is looking up for you EVERY thing will go back down.

You hide behind a smile just like a clown.

in the mind off a child.

that never smiled.

 

buckle down its just life.

barly stabbed some one with a knife.

Is this the life you stife?

Sad,Depressed and angry.

Thats everything i feel!

Wait calm down dude thats no big deal.

Are you for real?

Its just a life you steal.

Can't even eat a meal.

Cause of marks in my mind that will never ever heal.

 

 

But ill keep running.

My hart starts gunnin.

Thats when i feel alive.

When everthing hates me and i want to survive.

It feels like there is a drain in my vein thats making me feel pain.

My tears start to rain.

There must be a stain in my brain.

When i tought about jumping infront of a train.

Every one only wants to complain.

I never tried to flee into the sea of my own tears.

Made by all my fears.

It has been going for years.

All the hate in my ears.

That never disappears.

The scars on my arms are souvenirs from the death in my mind.

That will never rewind.

Why would i be kind?

ill just be stabbed from behind.

How could i ever been so blind?

I was just assigned by humankind to be declined.

 

 

 

Death in my eyes as i take my last breath.

Never thought it would come down to this.

writing about my life like its an endelss abyss.

Gues this classify's as my goodbye.

Sorry for the question why.

I could not face reality.

There is no way you could disagree or oversee.

I was always a nobody.

 

 

 

 

(sorry for the grammar!) Can any one give tips or even better... Try to rap it and or make a beat for it. that would be greatly appreciated. thank you for even reading till here! 

 

(just saying its a slow kind of rap and i know its short)

 

 

Edit i will try to rap it myself but if some one else would try i would still be really happy and a beat would still be needed!

Edited October 14, 2016 by AngelsNight

[Kenshiro 13,493]

You are in a very bad mood..

[AngelsNight 164]

You are in a very bad mood..

 

Yup but that is fine. Could always be worse. I just wanted to make a rap about my life and how i felt.

 

I think it worked out pretty good.

Edited October 8, 2016 by AngelsNight

[Sweet Shimmer 7]

oh well hope you feel happy i thought the lyrics were cool! in fact i might make a song about it:P

[Connie 320]

I'm sorry, but that was one of the most cringe-worthy things I've read in while.

[Kenshiro 13,493]

Yup but that is fine. Could always be worse. I just wanted to make a rap about my life and how i felt.

 

I think it worked out pretty good.

I hope the things get better

[AngelsNight 164]

I hope the things get better

Ofc, thx alot btw. life always changes.

oh well hope you feel happy i thought the lyrics were cool! in fact i might make a song about it:P

Cool to hear! thanks for the compliment

I'm sorry, but that was one of the most cringe-worthy things I've read in while.

hmm could you give some feed back in that case so i could better get an insight on why you found it ''cringe-worthy''? also hoped it made you smile from cringe  Edit: i did read it back ill give you it its cringe-worthy :3 oh well... made you cringe do.

Edited October 15, 2016 by AngelsNight