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[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih

Let's not forget that Blu's physical appearance is that of a young colt, no older than the CMC were portrayed to be in the first few seasons of the show.

As they say: "Cool motive, still murder."

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

18 minutes ago, Illiad Easle said:

@Kujamih

Let's not forget that Blu's physical appearance is that of a young colt, no older than the CMC were portrayed to be in the first few seasons of the show.

As they say: "Cool motive, still murder."

Tell that to the ants cockroaches cows chicken pigs shrimp trees vegetables fruits grass fish plants. Maybe people who I killed and might've killed or indirectly killed hahaha.....wait.

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih

8 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

Tell that to the ants cockroaches cows chicken pigs shrimp trees vegetables fruits grass fish plants. Maybe people who I killed and might've killed or indirectly killed hahaha.....wait.

???

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Have you watched goblin slayer?

The goblin slayer kills even baby goblins. Because he consider everyone a goblin a threat.

Same mindset for Alpha... Every ODT is a threat.

Sure in goblin slayer you'd be dumb to trust a goblin....but what makes you sure that all goblins are evil? And I think the goblin slayer has thought that and I believe he had a very compelling reason. I forgot but he was damn cool.

Yeah I think I made alpa into the goblin slayer...except she's an ODT slayer.

I ain't saying she's right though... She needs quite a big discipline. 

Edited March 5, 2022 by Kujamih

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Btw did I end up making your character into a foal because of how Lyra acted @Illiad Easle? Or that was your plan all along? Because Lyra is just clingy and just spoils you. But him being a filly is quite okay.

Lyra is at the middle of season 9 and last episode so somewhere in her 30s?

or 25? Let's just say this is season 11 or something 

Season 20............

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih

Blu is a colt, not a filly.

But yes, my plan was for him to be cutie mark getting age, so like 12ish physically.

Edited March 5, 2022 by Illiad Easle

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Sorry, colt ayt......

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih @Starforce

No rush on getting the story to where I can interact again, just send me a message once we get there.

 

Before you go and destroy Canterlot though, I have an idea I'd like to suggest:

You've hinted that you want to hit it with an asteroid and destroy it. But, what if instead you had Canterlot fall through a rift into a different dimension? It follows that if things can enter this world through rifts that they could also leave, and having Canterlot taken this way gives everyone an incentive to find a way to control the rifts, so they can find Canterlot and get back whoever survived, rather than it simply being destroyed. Plus it also adds the moral quandary to all the Smile agents: Given how poorly they've treated the ODTs they've encountered, how well do they think those who were in Canterlot will be treated by whoever finds them? Suddenly they may not be so gung-ho about "Every ODT deserves to die."

Just a thought, It's your story.

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Starforce

I don't see any godmodding in their most recent post, what do you mean?

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

 

@Starforce

14 hours ago, Twilight Sparkle (Universe 114A) said:

Twilight would walk back to the house at a brisk pace and enter in, looking around. When she found Lyra and Bon Bon she looked on in concern

I think that's adequately described as frazzled. Or rather, that they considered your character to be frazzled given your own description of them.

 

Personally I think the pacing is fine considering the event. You aren't always going to get the chance to respond to everything that happens in a scene, some things simply move too fast.

You can also of course use the multi-respond method, where you quote the part you want to respond to, respond to it, then quote the next part that you want to respond to.

Unless you intend to respond to a midpoint in such a way that the rest of the post would be derailed, I don't see an issue with this particular scene. Though I may be biased as the slower you two go, the longer I have to wait until I can participate again.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

16 minutes ago, Illiad Easle said:

Unless you intend to respond to a midpoint in such a way that the rest of the post would be derailed, I don't see an issue with this particular scene. Though I may be biased as the slower you two go, the longer I have to wait until I can participate again.

It's okay to derail me, I'll just adjust to it instead.

@Illiad Easle @Starforce

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

50 minutes ago, Starforce said:

@Illiad Easle

"Lyra would end up seeing you in a frazzled state." - that line there, for example. I think we should take this more slowly, too, instead of dumping the dialog all in one post, so it is better for us to handle and enjoy. 

Wait sorry it was Lyra who is in a frazzled state. Now that I read it twice I made a mistake on my construction of my sentence thanks for pointing that out @Starforce

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

The grand scheme of it all is , this Equestria is being used as a trash can/bin for other dimensions... 

And the events has changed though.

Because @Starforce didn't meet Twilight(alicorn) twilight had time to prepare. And was able to take action on the rift opening up. 

So we can put the plot you guys suggested.  The next day Canterlot disappears. ... But remember. Twilight requested discord to summon the elements, which discord did. He also said that there are surprised guests there.... (Which are the pillars the student six and Celestia and Luna. These was my plan though.)

so this'll be nice since the overpowered ponies are gone and have more reason for the weak ones to rise and take responsibility to save Equestria. And also some corrupt smile members hiding from the shadows would grab this opportunity....

 

18 minutes ago, Kujamih said:

It's okay to derail me, I'll just adjust to it instead.

@Illiad Easle @Starforce

Just avoid derailing other players

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih

So Twilight and Co. just up and left the rest of the world to suffer? That doesn't sound like something they'd do, but alright, I'm intrigued.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

2 minutes ago, Illiad Easle said:

@Kujamih

So Twilight and Co. just up and left the rest of the world to suffer? That doesn't sound like something they'd do, but alright, I'm intrigued.

I thought that's what you guys wanted  that Canterlot got dimension shifted

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

2 hours ago, Illiad Easle said:

instead you had Canterlot fall through a rift into a different dimension?

This is what happens. But twilight called them there remember... So twilight and everyone she called got lost into limbo

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Original plan.

Dusk Radiance did not meet Twilight. Twilight noticed that someone changed the flow of the Plot, so did discord, hence discord teleports to twilight to protect her.

Twilight requested discord to teleport them to Canterlot and summon the rest. Which they did.

Because twilight didn't waste her time talking to Dusk, they have enough time and brainstorming to find out what's going on. As soon as the meteor event happens. Twilight and the gang was able to counter it.

[Twilight plans to broadcast this emergency to Equestria the next day.

You guys travel to Canterlot and explain the situation.]

But because we changed the flow that Canterlot would be shifted to another dimension. The news would be, Canterlot Missing!

You guys head for Canterlot to investigate.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

@Starforce

1 hour ago, Starforce said:

Lyra would end up seeing you in a frazzled state

Changed it into...

Lyra would end up seeing you in her frazzled state.

Just 1 word error can really make a big difference...

"A" to "her"....

Never underestimate the power of words/pen.

[Illiad Easle 3,123]

@Kujamih

My idea was that a big hole would open up and swallow Canterlot, making it not the fault of those in Canterlot. Though I suppose ultimately it doesn't matter if Twilight causes the hole or if it happens so long as the rift is obviously to blame.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Since twilight is gone there's a void in power...  I don't think they'll go to war right? Maybe a meeting of nations would happen...

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

1 minute ago, Illiad Easle said:

@Kujamih

My idea was that a big hole would open up and swallow Canterlot, making it not the fault of those in Canterlot. Though I suppose ultimately it doesn't matter if Twilight causes the hole or if it happens so long as the rift is obviously to blame.

Yeah that's what happens a rift shifted them, a big hole swallowed canterlot. Probably the villain did it. Since the meteor didn't work... He saw, almost all the threats in this world in one area. The villain would then just throw the whole Canterlot into limbo hitting many birds with one dimension rift.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

Me right now: I just left to finish my work and when I got back to the RP all hell broke loose . This escalated quickly got interesting as heck.... I wonder how this world will fare?

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

She'll show up... She'd want to apologize to Lyra and the colt... But if Dusk would butt in She might change her mind about the ODT. and cause her trauma to come back on ODT. Alpha still has a very high rank in the agency.

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

@Starforce

Bonbon only let you join the Agency is so that you won't get hunted down, unlike Blu. And she owes you a lot. Poor Bonbon, you've already pointed a finger without knowing who to point it at...

1 minute ago, Starforce said:

@Kujamih

But surely a simple apology can't work like that? She tried to kill a colt, that's not something that can just be forgiven and call it good, yes?

Who said that Lyra is gonna ask for a simple apology?

[Evil Pink One 13,505]

1 minute ago, Kujamih said:

@Starforce

Bonbon only let you join the Agency is so that you won't get hunted down, unlike Blu. And she owes you a lot. Poor Bonbon, you've already pointed a finger without knowing who to point it at...

Who said that Lyra is gonna ask for a simple apology?

And if Alpha did change, I'm sure that she's not just gonna drop bye and just say sorry. We have to make the story interesting right?