writing Hate

[Finesthour 7,287]

ANGRY POEM TIME

 

You were everything I wanted,

you were everything a girl could be.

 

Then you left me broken hearted,

now you don't even mean a thing to me.

 

All I wanted was your love,

and you returned with hate.

 

We were so happy,

then you turn around and give your love to someone else.

 

I was truly your "sweetheart",

weren't I?

 

You could so easily begin to make out with another,

when we only broke up a week prior.

 

You madam,

are a heartless bitch.

 

But guess what?

 

Now that it's over you can't hurt me,

now that it's over you can't bring me down!

 

For I now see who you truly are,

and what you stand for.

 

You only love when you are with someone,

and the love is fake.

 

All you want is to have someone to fuck,

and to make the others feel like shit.

 

I'm so glad it's over,

now I can be free of your grasp.

 

Our love is eternal,

right?

 

Bah,

I'm so happy it's over.

 

I hate you,

I hate you so damn much.

 

But,

I'm also happy for you.

 

Find your new boytoy,

I'll just be here feeling sorry for them

[Champion RD92 8,658]

Owned.

[Jokuc 8,174]

Somepony isn't very happy at his ex.. :3

uhm I don't really know what to comment on this other than it's well written as always..

[Finesthour 7,287]

Owned.

 

Very much so~

Somepony isn't very happy at his ex.. :3

uhm I don't really know what to comment on this other than it's well written as always..

 

Nope, not happy at all c:

[Sky 746]

First four lines were in the song I was listening to when I was reading this. Anyway good job I enjoyed that poem.

[Finesthour 7,287]

First four lines were in the song I was listening to when I was reading this. Anyway good job I enjoyed that poem.

 

That's the point, silly.

[Sky 746]

 

That's the point, silly.

 

This poem is made of songs?

[Titan Rising 2,156]

[Finesthour 7,287]

This poem is made of songs?

 

No, the song inspired me.

[Sky 746]

 

No, the song inspired me.

 

Well you sir have a good music taste.

[hᴀrᴍoɴy 107]

How long have you been writing?.. because every poem you write that i see is amazing to me, especially since you are able to capture peoples hearts. XD I think you could be a famous poet someday, or maybe even publish these to make a lot of money.

Edited June 30, 2012 by hᴀrᴍoɴy

[Finesthour 7,287]

How long have you been writing?.. because every poem you write that i see is amazing to me, especially since you are able to capture peoples hearts. XD I think you could be a famous poet someday, or maybe even publish these to make a lot of money.

 

Like, 8 years xD

 

And I extremely doubt it ;p

[Skullbuster 1,906]

You should write angry metal songs

[hᴀrᴍoɴy 107]

Like, 8 years xD

 

And I extremely doubt it ;p

 

Could never know One day you will look back and be like, "Wow, I never would have though I would gone this far". The beauty of life is.. mysterious. I sound so corny :3

[Finesthour 7,287]

You should write angry metal songs

 

Should I? xD

Could never know One day you will look back and be like, "Wow, I never would have though I would gone this far". The beauty of life is.. mysterious. I sound so corny :3

 

Not as corny as me, I suspect xD

[Skullbuster 1,906]

 

Should I? xD

 

Not as corny as me, I suspect xD

 

Yes, not only would you be good at it, it would also be very metal