My Fluttershy Drawing is complete!

[CaptainAsh98 20]

I did a thread called My first MLP drawing, i have since then turned that sketch into a full drawing with extra characters, a background etc. I would love some feedback!

 

 

[False Perception 482]

Angel...

 

*STARE*

 

IT'S WONDERFUL. THE COLORS ARE PERFECTLY SHADED. Fluttershy is undeniably cute as always *squee*.

 

What I don't get is why are there TWO Fluttershys in the picture, and why I AM STILL UNDER THE STARE'S POWER.

 

11/10.

[FortyShadows 217]

lol this drawing just gave me an idea! *Bumps into light Scoot style

brohoof for you.

[~Chaos~ 3,967]

Fantastic drawing!

 

Dat Angel bunny.

[PegasisterTaco 318]

That's really nice! *stares at angel bunny* Dat rabbit.. *get out hammer and brings it do-* Oh hey Fluttershy! *hits the ground instead*

[Ezio Auditore 702]

What I don't get is why are there TWO Fluttershys in the picture.

 

 

 

But seriously great drawing =D

[Taco Horse 116]

Tha'ts a really good job on the picture. For some reason Fluttershy seems to be the hardest to draw for me, I thinks it's the hair.

[False Perception 482]

You should totally add Dash flying in from the right to the left, leaving a rainbow trail that crosses behind the two clouds, and she's flying parallel to the ground.

[CaptainAsh98 20]

You should totally add Dash flying in from the right to the left, leaving a rainbow trail that crosses behind the two clouds, and she's flying parallel to the ground.

 

I thought about doing rainbow dash, but then i thought maybe it would be better if the focus was just on fluttershy. Thanks for the feedback too! :3

[PonyEcho 1,610]

nice picture, i like how you did the wings, i cant draw them that well.

 

Edit: wait im a Parasprite now, yay im moving up in the food chain

Edited July 10, 2012 by PonyEcho

[Azura 1,107]

Fluttershy's eyes could be a little bit bigger, but other than that it looks great!

[Jokuc 8,174]

It turned out great!

[Azura 1,107]

It turned out great!

 

Agreed.

[BobCoffin56 20]

i love it! i wish i could draw Fluttershy that well

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Fluttershy's forehead seems to broad. You might wanna experiment with moving her hair line around. Her legs seem a little bit skinny. Next time drawing her, you may wanna pay closer attention to anatomy

Keep drawing!

 

Angel...

 

*STARE*

 

IT'S WONDERFUL. THE COLORS ARE PERFECTLY SHADED. Fluttershy is undeniably cute as always *squee*.

 

What I don't get is why are there TWO Fluttershys in the picture, and why I AM STILL UNDER THE STARE'S POWER.

 

11/10.

 

No offense, but this is not an 11/10. I'd say 4-5/10.

[Finesthour 7,287]

My critique:

• The clouds seem out of place. You should draw them but more flat, as of now, they look like floating cotton balls.
• The tree is not really needed, nor are the birds..
• You did her eye way too tiny for her head.
• Speaking of the head, you made it way too huge.
• Her hair goes in front of her head.
• Her wings look... misshapen.
• Her tail starts to look like Rarity's hair at the end, twisted and misshapen.
• Her hooves are way too flat.
• Why are angel and Fluttershy standing on water. Why.
• The shading and coloring is something I enjoy about the picture, however.

This is a nice picture at a glance, but has many flaws.

2/5

Edited July 12, 2012 by Crona The Critic

[CaptainAsh98 20]

My critique:

• The clouds seem out of place. You should draw them but more flat, as of now, they look like floating cotton balls.
• The tree is not really needed, nor are the birds..
• You did her eye way too tiny for her head.
• Speaking of the head, you made it way too huge.
• Her hair goes in front of her head.
• Her wings look... misshapen.
• Her tail starts to look like Rarity's hair at the end, twisted and misshapen.
• Her hooves are way too flat.
• Why are angel and Fluttershy standing on water. Why.
• The shading and coloring is something I enjoy about the picture, however.

This is a nice picture at a glance, but has many flaws.

2/5

 

it was actually supposed to be road, i just realised how much it looks like they are in a river :/

[False Perception 482]

Fluttershy's forehead seems to broad. You might wanna experiment with moving her hair line around. Her legs seem a little bit skinny. Next time drawing her, you may wanna pay closer attention to anatomy

Keep drawing!

 

 

No offense, but this is not an 11/10. I'd say 4-5/10.

 

You realize it was a joke right?