writing In Memory

[Mephala 2,635]

Stupid Ley you thought maybe your life had turned around

But the next time that they see you you'll be six feet underground

Their silent laughter rings as the coffin's lowered down

But you can't hear their voices as it's death you've finally found.

 

 

The only things that ever loved you were the pills you took each day

And eventually they loved you enough to take your life away

The ones who lied to you will pretend to weep and say

"Oh now that she's gone our lives will just never be the same."

 

 

Stupid Ley you opened up your heart and let them see

They broke it time and time again-a fool is what you've been

On their hate their lies and deciept is on what you were weaned

You took fake love for granted and destroyed it with your greed.

 

 

They laughed at you and tortured you whenever you came near

But the tables finally turned and now it's you they fear

They run from you and hide from you whenever you appear

For the gift that you bring with you is Death's gaping leer.

[Somebody 570]

That's really sad... and beautiful at the same time. Did you lose a friend recently?

[Zerul 555]

That's a beautiful poem

[MachineGunLola 408]

You are an amazing writer.

*___*

[Mephala 2,635]

That's really sad... and beautiful at the same time. Did you lose a friend recently?

 

Actually no. I wrote this shortly before I attempted suicide. I had no idea what to call it XD

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Actually no. I wrote this shortly before I attempted suicide. I had no idea what to call it XD

 

and...how long ago was that?

[Mephala 2,635]

That's a beautiful poem

 

Really? Wow, I considered this some of the most lousy of my work. But thanks a lot for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it.

 

You are an amazing writer.

*___*

 

That is such a huge compliment since I love your work as well. I feel so honoured. Thank you.

 

and...how long ago was that?

 

This was before my second of four attempts so...maybe two months ago?

[Skullbuster 1,906]

Really? Wow, I considered this some of the most lousy of my work. But thanks a lot for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it.

 

 

That is such a huge compliment since I love your work as well. I feel so honoured. Thank you.

 

 

This was before my second of four attempts so...maybe two months ago?

 

thats rather sad

[Zerul 555]

Really? Wow, I considered this some of the most lousy of my work. But thanks a lot for the compliment! I'm glad you liked it.

 

 

That is such a huge compliment since I love your work as well. I feel so honoured. Thank you.

 

 

This was before my second of four attempts so...maybe two months ago?

 

Don't say that its great

[Mephala 2,635]

thats rather sad

 

Actually it was five. I just don't count the first one. So this was actually my first serious serious attempt.

*shrugs* It's not a big deal.

 

Don't say that its great

 

Er...whaaa? XD

[Zerul 555]

Actually it was five. I just don't count the first one. So this was actually my first serious serious attempt.

*shrugs* It's not a big deal.

 

 

Er...whaaa? XD

 

Lol xD you said it was lousy

[Somebody 570]

That is very sad, indeed... But you're still with us, and that's the main thing!

Edited July 20, 2012 by Questio