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(Wrote this at 12:13 PM after a night of no sleep. God, mistakes aplenty.)

 

Do you want to know why I fight so hard,

ready to put my life on the line?

 

Willing to fight for anything,

willing to let people hate my guts?

 

The reason is quite simple,

yet it is close to my heart.

 

I fight anti-cloppers for one reason,

and one reason alone.

 

I fight for the feelings of my friends,

I fight for those who are afraid to speak.

 

So many people spread their words of hate and anger,

anger directed towards many people here.

 

And in their fear of being hated,

they stay quiet.

 

They stay quiet,

fearful of the people we call friends.

 

They come to me for comfort,

come for me to help.

 

And in return,

I fight for those who are silent.

 

I am ready to make sure that the hate is stopped,

even by a small bit.

 

For my friends mean everything to me,

and their pain is my own.

 

As long as there are people who spread their hate,

I will fight for my friends.

 

No matter what,

I will fight hard for them.

 

Because no one here is disgusting,

we are all family.

 

Even if someone tries to tell you that you are different,

it doesn't mean you are.

 

You all have a friend who is there for you,

who is ready to fight.

 

I may not be the best friend,

but I will try my best to keep my friends happy.

 

So my friends,

you can stay behind me as I fight.

 

I am ready to accept all the hate,

I am ready to take the beating.

 

The hate will cease one day,

the hate will soon be gone.

 

We will go back to happiness,

we will go back to joy.

 

One day I hope,

I hope is very soon.

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Nice free verse, it keeps itself within its own limits and communicates the message quite clearly. A bit of a clean up and it could be even better. :)

 

Also, we can post poetry here? I have well over 100 I wouldn't mind sharing...


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"Let the steel of my resolve be not bested by the sum of my fears."

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Heart touching poem. IT IS SO TRUE! I meant to say something along these lines, but this is much better. You are the man, man. Everypony should read it. I would even put it in my signature, but... It's kinda long.

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well im just gona start clapping for 5 minutes.....(5 minutes later)

great poem, so true as well, however it feels like there should be a verse saying you fight because you an asshole who is willing too, but thats just me


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GD man stop making me feel SOOOO terrible! I know I've wrong those who need no explanation and I am sorry. Continue to fight for these people. Know that I will support what you do. (even though I didnt earlier)


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well im just gona start clapping for 5 minutes.....(5 minutes later)

 

I totally misread that...

GD man stop making me feel SOOOO terrible! I know I've wrong those who need no explanation and I am sorry. Continue to fight for these people. Know that I will support what you do. (even though I didnt earlier)

 

d'aaaw I have no right to judge you, but I would forgive you right here, right now if I could. :D
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well im just gona start clapping for 5 minutes.....(5 minutes later)

great poem, so true as well, however it feels like there should be a verse saying you fight because you an asshole who is willing too, but thats just me

 

I'm an asshole because I fight for my friends who are scared to speak due to the harshness of our fandom. wut.

 

GD man stop making me feel SOOOO terrible! I know I've wrong those who need no explanation and I am sorry. Continue to fight for these people. Know that I will support what you do. (even though I didnt earlier)

 

You are forgiven, my fellow brony xD It is quite alright, y'know. No need to feel so bad. I just wrote this because I needed an explosive exit xD
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I'm an asshole because I fight for my friends who are scared to speak due to the harshness of our fandom. wut.

 

 

well considering your action to post a thread that has resulted in a flame war yes you are an asshole , im all for you being an asshole, i'm an asshole i accept that rather then denying it.

last point you posted a thread for the soul purpose of saying you are right and everyone else is wrong on middle ground, (also your thread made my weak and feble laptop crash twice)


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well considering your action to post a thread that has resulted in a flame war yes you are an asshole , im all for you being an asshole, i'm an asshole i accept that rather then denying it.

last point you posted a thread for the soul purpose of saying you are right and everyone else is wrong on middle ground, (also your thread made my weak and feble laptop crash twice)

 

Making a ranting thread that got people arguing makes me an asshole. I "forced" people to argue? Lolnope.

And you sir, have no idea what the hell you are talking about. I made the thread out of anger of the stupid people who keep attacking my friends and I. Get your facts straight.


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When I first saw the topic title, I thought you were talking about actual fighting, as in fistfights and real life violence...

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Making a ranting thread that got people arguing makes me an asshole. I "forced" people to argue? Lolnope.

And you sir, have no idea what the hell you are talking about. I made the thread out of anger of the stupid people who keep attacking my friends and I. Get your facts straight.

 

lets see you did something "out of anger", and now can you rely tell me that you have never dissrespected someone or done anything else in your life that would make you seem like an asshole,

 

also Stupid people should still be considered equile because though all their stupidity there is one valid point that gets ignored by assholes


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lets see you did something "out of anger", and now can you rely tell me that you have never dissrespected someone or done anything else in your life that would make you seem like an asshole,

 

also Stupid people should still be considered equile because though all their stupidity there is one valid point that gets ignored by assholes

 

Making a ranting thread that got people arguing makes me an asshole. I "forced" people to argue? Lolnope.

And you sir, have no idea what the hell you are talking about. I made the thread out of anger of the stupid people who keep attacking my friends and I. Get your facts straight.

 

You guys are talking past each other. PonyEcho says you're asshole, but I'm sure he means you're a badass that will fight no matter what others think. He is with you, Crona, no need to get all defensive. (Sorry, just my daily 2 cents of love and tolerance, now get back to your programmed shedule (gosh, I love that one liner, thx, Zoop).

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You guys are talking past each other. PonyEcho says you're asshole, but I'm sure he means you're a badass that will fight no matter what others think. He is with you, Crona, no need to get all defensive. (Sorry, just my daily 2 cents of love and tolerance, now get back to your programmed shedule (gosh, I love that one liner, thx, Zoop).

 

actualy my point was the he is an asshole but then again so am i, if you dont stop to accept that fact to your actions and dissrespect can be seen as assholelry.

now he can take it as an insult or spend his time in denile that he hasnt doen one asshole thing in his life or he can accept it

 

edit: i ussualy dont delete things i say because i call it how i see it, but i've remover the last line out of niceness.

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actualy my point was the he is an asshole but then again so am i, if you dont stop to accept that fact to your actions and dissrespect can be seen as assholelry.

now he can take it as an insult or spend his time in denile that he hasnt doen one asshole thing in his lifeor he can accept it and keep my respect

 

He is standing behind his friends. That is not my definition in "asshollery" although I know you don't mean it as an insult.
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Just because I have insulted people, doesn't mean I am an asshole.

 

A definition of an asshole is someone who insults someone every few seconds because they love to.

 

I did not enjoy insulting people, I did it because I felt it needed to be done.

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Just because I have insulted people, doesn't mean I am an asshole.

 

A definition of an asshole is someone who insults someone every few seconds because they love to.

 

I did not enjoy insulting people, I did it because I felt it needed to be done.

 

I surely agree it needed to be done and you did it quite well, that's fo sho!
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