writing Happiness

[Finesthour 7,287]

At last, the light at the end of the tunnel.

I have reached it.

No, it is not the light of the heavens.

It is greatest for when I am alive.

For that light, the light that I have finaly found.

Is the warm fuzzy feeling that I have looked for.

From this past year, the feeling subsided, hiding under the pit of darkness.

But, as time will tell, the feeling broke a hole through the darkness.

It put it's warming touch into my heart, killing the darkness I posses.

That feeling, you see, is happiness.

I know what I want to do with my life.

I want people to be happy.

I want others to feel how I do now.

No one deserves to feel pain that I have felt, so my journey to cause happiness begins.

Starting with whoever I reach in my path.

It may be you, it may be someone else.

All I know is, I cannot wait for the adventurer of my life.

The adventure of happiness is afoot, and I am on the train.

Won't you join me?

[Inkfeather 597]

I would give you the same advice as I gave Wisdom Lace.

 

I think you should work on the structure of the poem itself.

[Finesthour 7,287]

I would give you the same advice as I gave Wisdom Lace.

 

I think you should work on the structure of the poem itself.

 

Threw it together in 5 seconds.

 

Not really caring how good it is <3

[Inkfeather 597]

I still ask this of you. Consider how the words play with each other.

 

Nice poem though.

[pondus30 152]

Nice poem Happy happy joy joy

[Wonka 39]

Threw it together in 5 seconds.

 

Not really caring how good it is <3

 

Even though you only threw it together quickly, it's still a good poem, and still better than any poem that I could think of, even if I spent hours on it.

[83awsm 234]

Threw it together in 5 seconds. Not really caring how good it is <3

Sweet poem dude! I could never do anything like that in a couple of minutes, you sir have a very creative mind!