My MLP Pirate Fanfic! (WIP)

[JeanHover 326]

That's right! My fanfic is a parody of Pirates of the Caribbean. It's about Pinkie Pie and her crew setting off to get a treasure in the middle of a mysterious island while avoiding Fluttershy and her crew. It is a work in progress, so tell me how you like it or ways that I can improve!

The fanfic is based off of this song:

Ponies of the Maribbean.docx

[Clarity 3,094]

Hmm, sounds interesting. I'd like to proofread it if you'll have me! ^-^ Is this your first fanfic?

[Devious Detonation 442]

Do what you want 'cause a pony is free! You are a pony!

Yarr yarr... Etc...

Is it me or Fluttershy is the tentacle face guy?

 

Also, the music sounds alot of fun! :L

[JeanHover 326]

Hmm, sounds interesting. I'd like to proofread it if you'll have me! ^-^ Is this your first fanfic?

 

Yes, you can proofread it. That's why I put it up here. This is my first fanfic, it just appeared in my mind out of nowhere and I needed to write it down.

 

Do what you want 'cause a pony is free! You are a pony!

Yarr yarr... Etc...

Is it me or Fluttershy is the tentacle face guy?

 

Also, the music sounds alot of fun! :L

 

What you just said made the most sense out of every single post I have ever seen on this website.

 

I was kinda hoping for more critique on the writing than the song, but I guess videos are just so much more compelling.

[Devious Detonation 442]

What you just said made the most sense out of every single post I have ever seen on this website.

 

I was kinda hoping for more critique on the writing than the song, but I guess videos are just so much more compelling.

 

I usually make no sense. Why do you think my avatar is cute Mario licking Luigi?

I mean, my avi is pointless, so you can see how random I can be sometimes.

[JeanHover 326]

I usually make no sense. Why do you think my avatar is cute Mario licking Luigi?

I mean, my avi is pointless, so you can see how random I can be sometimes.

 

Yes, I love your avatar. /)^3^(

 

Oh wait, by tentacle face guy you meant Davy Jones from the 2nd and 3rd movies.

Fluttershy is more like captain Barbossa, considering Fluttershy's crew isn't a bunch of dead people recreated as creepy sea organism humanoids.

 

But yeah, I get what you said now.