open Ask any pony on a date!

[Alex Night 870]

(OOC: argh, so many good friends I know are leaving the forums lately... I will miss you, Pwny. Also, there are two things in that announcement that disturbs me. First is taking over responsibility for roleplaying NPCs here. Wouldn't that make you uneligible to continue dating your LI? Not that it would affect me since... I've been friend zoned here. Second is how if I should ask for fan fic concerning my character and LI, how would that work for me since I'm sort of in the toss-up with the whole blind date situation? Personally, I don't see a happy ending from my standpoint. ._. )

[My little pwny 1,392]

(OOC: argh, so many good friends I know are leaving the forums lately... I will miss you, Pwny. Also, there are two things in that announcement that disturbs me. First is taking over responsibility for roleplaying NPCs here. Wouldn't that make you uneligible to continue dating your LI? Not that it would affect me since... I've been friend zoned here. Second is how if I should ask for fan fic concerning my character and LI, how would that work for me since I'm sort of in the toss-up with the whole blind date situation? Personally, I don't see a happy ending from my standpoint. ._. )

 

I have something in mind for you that you're going to like. Let's just say it involves Twilight in a separate, but identical, universe as Mal is.

 

As far as taking over roleplaying, yeah, it will be a sacrifice because s/he can't continue to date their LI... It sucked for me because I really wanted to be roleplayed, but that's not how it works. Perhaps there can be one person that roleplays for the heir, but that's up to you guys.

 

@My little pwny, um, I have a few questions about the fanfic thing... I hope it doesn't bother you too much if I ask them...

 

#1. Are you going to start from the beginning, like, when us and our mares first met (or even a little before that to give them some background), or are you going to continue from where you left off, i.e., the last comment that was posted to you?

 

#2. Do you need a good description of the OC so that you can actually write the fanfic? Cause if so, here's mine:

(I know, not that good of a description, but hey, I tried).

 

Your Pal,

 

#1. Your fan fic will pick up where we left off from the last post of yours. I'll most likely refer to previous events and choices you've made before, but the actual story won't backtrack.

 

#2. Thanks for posting your OC. Anyone can do that if they want, but its not necessary because I already kinda know everyone's personality and choice tendency.

[Count Paradox 3,548]

I have something in mind for you that you're going to like. Let's just say it involves Twilight in a separate, but identical, universe as Mal is.

 

As far as taking over roleplaying, yeah, it will be a sacrifice because s/he can't continue to date their LI... It sucked for me because I really wanted to be roleplayed, but that's not how it works. Perhaps there can be one person that roleplays for the heir, but that's up to you guys.

 

 

 

#1. Your fan fic will pick up where we left off from the last post of yours. I'll most likely refer to previous events and choices you've made before, but the actual story won't backtrack.

 

#2. Thanks for posting your OC. Anyone can do that if they want, but its not necessary because I already kinda know everyone's personality and choice tendency.

 

@My little pwny, oh, ok, well, glad i could help.

[Octavia's Bow 2,035]

Okay, let's do this:

 

Dawnpath

INFP (Look up in types of people)

 

Dawnpath is a white pegasus, with mesy brown hair and green eyes, the smile when he does. He's a little shy, but he's extremely loyal and wouldn't do anything to intentionally hurt his love. He's the type of guy who would rather take the bullet himself then see his marefriend shot.

 

Talents;

Listening

Playing Cello

Writing

Inferencing

[Alex Night 870]

 

 

I have something in mind for you that you're going to like. Let's just say it involves Twilight in a separate, but identical, universe as Mal is.

 

As far as taking over roleplaying, yeah, it will be a sacrifice because s/he can't continue to date their LI... It sucked for me because I really wanted to be roleplayed, but that's not how it works. Perhaps there can be one person that roleplays for the heir, but that's up to you guys.

 

 

 

#1. Your fan fic will pick up where we left off from the last post of yours. I'll most likely refer to previous events and choices you've made before, but the actual story won't backtrack.

 

#2. Thanks for posting your OC. Anyone can do that if they want, but its not necessary because I already kinda know everyone's personality and choice tendency.

 

(OOC: 0_0 *looks around* Okay, good. I see the universe didn't explode right there. Still, I'll send you a link of my OC to help you like Ponydox did.)

[My little pwny 1,392]

@My little pwny, um, I have a few questions about the fanfic thing... I hope it doesn't bother you too much if I ask them...

 

#1. Are you going to start from the beginning, like, when us and our mares first met (or even a little before that to give them some background), or are you going to continue from where you left off, i.e., the last comment that was posted to you?

 

#2. Do you need a good description of the OC so that you can actually write the fanfic? Cause if so, here's mine:

(I know, not that good of a description, but hey, I tried).

 

#3. Can I elaborate on my fanfic idea? I mean, I had something good to start with...

But to me, I think I could have added a little more to give you more ideas... You know how you mentioned that hero thing, where we save our mare or somthing? Well, I was kinda thinking, seeing as Tavi was suprisingly, urm, rambunctious, I suppose, she could get into some trouble and I would have to save her. THEN we could settle down and have two kids... It doesn't matter what they are, or what their names are, you can come up with them...

 

 

 

 

And again, I don't think the forums will be the same without you here... This was one of my favorite threads... I don't know how good it'll be after you've gone, but I bet your heir will try their damndest to do a great job just like you did... But it won't be the same without you... You were the one who made me be more creative, trying to impress Tavi and stuff, and I'll miss your funny stories (like the Cupcakes Pinkie one that you just started). But, whatever it is that you have to leave to do, I wish you success in your endeavors.

 

Your Pal,

 

Okay. I am writing your Fan Fic right now. Just so everyone knows, the fics that I am writing will be mainly one sided, meaning you will have no baring on the plot turns. I hope I capture your thought process and decision making correctly, but if I get it wrong, please don't be mad Even if I do happen to screw up, I promise the ending will be satisfying.

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

@My little pwny

 

It's a real shame to see you leave, but what you're doing is a great thing to do, and I hope you'll enjoy your 2 years strengthening your relationship with God.

 

Anyways, for my story, I don't really want to have to propose to her or marry her, as I wanna try to leave it open ended. I usually like to be surprised on fanfics, so let your imagination run wild on the fanfic! Well, now that I think of it, maybe give it a tropical setting or whatnot?

Edited October 29, 2012 by La Li Lu Le Lo

[LordCooler101 9]

(Pwny you will be missed.Also im about to date Luna,how would that fanfic thing work if i just barely started this?

P.S My OC is a unicorn whose skin color is a dark shade of green.He is known for being shy but if anypony trys to hurt or disrespect his mare friend he won't hesitate to defend her.He is a very understanding and caring stallion.He is loyal and a good listener.He has a job in Canterlot as a professional baker)(Almost forgot,i was hoping this could go as far as to marriage and 1 child.)

Edited October 29, 2012 by LordCooler101

[My little pwny 1,392]

(Pwny you will be missed.Also im about to date Luna,how would that fanfic thing work if i just barely started this?

P.S My OC is a unicorn whose skin color is a dark shade of green.He is known for being shy but if anypony trys to hurt or disrespect his mare friend he won't hesitate to defend her.He is a very understanding and caring stallion.He is loyal and a good listener.He has a job in Canterlot as a professional baker)(Almost forgot,i was hoping this could go as far as to marriage and 1 child.)

 

It will work. It gives me more room to write as well

[Commander Bubbles 1,343]

Oh, and if this will help you at all, here's my OC that I just threw together. Tried to make sure he wasn't a cardboard cutout Mary Sue.

 

Name: Red Talon

Bio: A young Pegasus at the age of 22. An up-and-coming racer, he placed a respectable 3th place finish at the Wonderbolt's annual Winter Wrap-Up Open, nearly clinched the Neightona 500, succumbing to a late race incident which caused him to finish 24th, won the Canterlot Derby 2 consecutive times, and dominated the Equestrian Championship Races in Neighvada for the last couple of years. Despite his talent for flying and racing, he never was quite able to make too much a career out of racing. Due to his lack of creativity, Red Talon finds himself having a difficult time finding employment outside of racing. Until he manages to make it big racing, this young pegasus is going to be in a world of hurt.

 

Aside from his ambitions for racing, Red Talon is a kind, albeit a bit shy, fellow. Despite his kindness, he never had too many friends, possibly due to the fact that he's got quite a one-tracked mind. A serious-minded stallion, he always keeps his goals and ambitions into perspective (although when he wants to, he can be quite the jokester). Perhaps one of his biggest problems is his issues with trust. Ever since an incident he had in middle school where he was set up by his "friends" and was suspended as a result, he was always rather paranoid. The thought of getting stabbed in the back is quite frightful to Red Talon, and often, his paranoia gets the best of him. A superstitious stallion, Red Talon makes doubly sure that anypony's intentions are good, and even with that, he still often has second guesses about others, including his friends and even his own parents.

Edited November 1, 2012 by La Li Lu Le Lo

[Nicolae Carpathia 140]

@My little pwny

 

Hy if wouldn't be to much trouble i would like a fan fict wrighten about me and Celestia , on our meany adventures throughout equestira slowly falling for one another. You will be missed aloha and take care.

[Alex Night 870]

Okay, since it would too confusing to look through the character sheet for you, I'll just summarize his qualities for you here, if that's okay with you, Pwny.

 

Name: Alex Night

Species: Pegasus

Gender: Male

Age: 17 (I assume that he is around the same age as Twlight and the others. :S )

 

I won't state any history or bio for you since I'm sure what you have is beyond expectations. I'm on the edge of my seat.

[Count Paradox 3,548]

Okay. I am writing your Fan Fic right now. Just so everyone knows, the fics that I am writing will be mainly one sided, meaning you will have no baring on the plot turns. I hope I capture your thought process and decision making correctly, but if I get it wrong, please don't be mad Even if I do happen to screw up, I promise the ending will be satisfying.

 

@My little pwny, ok, cool, whatever you write will be fine with me. if i didn't like your style, i would have left this thread long ago, don't ya think?

[My little pwny 1,392]

(OOC: I just finished part 1 of your fan fic Ponydox. Please remember that in the interest of time, I am only doing one draft of everyone's fan fic, so if the story reads unsmoothly, or if I make a narrating error/ spelling error, please forgive me. I will post part two of your fan fic once you read and respond to the fan fic. Enjoy!)

 

 

Ponydox X Octavia Part 1

Everyone in the 5 star restaurant was staring at her. She had just done the unthinkable in a place where the high society of Canterlot expected peace and quiet as they ate their meal. Octavia was a minor celebrity among the citizens of Canterlot, so when she first entered the restaurant, everyone was already aware of her presence. This was not the unthinkable deed, however.

 

About 2 minutes earlier, Octavia’s sophisticated demeanor cracked. Through the stresses of the day and expectations weighing down on her over time, Tavi’s true colors finally showed.

 

“You know what Ponydox?? I'm tired of keeping this persona that I'm 'so sophisticated'! Even if we are dining here for free, let's ditch this joint. I'm tired of the 'fancy' lifestyle, and I'm tired of the 'fancy' words I have to use to seem rich. I don't care that I'm in my concert dress, I want to go on an adventure! Are you with me?”

 

It was at this point everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at Octavia. Not only were they surprised, but they were concerned that perhaps her mystery date had something to do with it. Tavi stood on top of the table, waiting for her date, Ponydox, to respond. Dox was stunned for what seemed to be the longest moment in his lifetime. Finally he said, “W-wow... really, Octavia? I would have never known or guessed that you would want to do that... It's really rather impressive, shattering that mold that others have made for you! Yes! Let's go on an adventure! Let's go out there and explore the world! I'm up for anything as long as you want to do it, Octavia!”

 

The words he chose to say absolutely flabbergasted the whole restaurant into murmuring with each other. As Octavia and Ponydox where leaving the building, they could hear the whispers, “Who is that with Octavia? He must have done something to make Octavia blow up!” “I just saw her at the concert, I thought she was just like us!” “How does a fancy mare like Octavia make a scene like that?!”

 

Despite all the neighsayers, none of the comments Tavi or Dox heard bothered them one bit. They were determined to have a true adventure. After they left the restaurant, Octavia spoke up again in her normal voice and tone. “That’s… exactly what I needed to hear Ponydox. Your are really understanding. I have a bucket list of things I’ve always wanted to do but never had the chance. Should we do sky diving, Dragon surfing, castle snooping, party crashing, or some Pranking? Or maybe you have a better idea? What should we do?”

 

Ponydox was in absolute awe. Here was a magnificent pony he just met a few days ago, standing in front of him asking if he wanted to go on an adventure with her. When Dox did finally meet Octavia, he had to summon up all his courage to ask her on a date. She was literally walking away from him when he did it, and he had no idea what the outcome would be. Octavia said yes, in a manner of speaking, because Dox asked her to attend a concert with him that Octavia actually was performing in, unknown to him at the time. Then in a unpredictable turn of events, Ponydox’s night with Octavia completely changed for the better.

 

Ponydox smiled and said, “Well, a few of the things that you suggested caught my attention. I've always wanted to go into the castle and look around a bit, so castle snooping doesn't sound too bad. Oh, and perhaps while we're there, the Princesses could be throwing a party, so if that happens, we could knock two of those things on your list out at once and crash that party! And as for pranking... *gives a sly smile* There's a certain blue pegasus in Ponyville that needs a taste of her own medicine, I think. Well, which do you think we should do first, Octavia?”

 

Tavi’s face lit up. “You really want to do this with me? You weren’t trying to save face at the restaurant? This is very kind of you. I’m… I’m ready to do this! I’m nervous, but ready!”

The two of them made their way to the castle where the Concert afterparty was still going. Octavia commented, “You know, I still have that ticket for that party we didn’t go to because we wanted to go to the restaurant. We can get into the castle that way.”

 

When a member of the royal guard stopped the two of them at the castle, Octavia showed him a ticket, and let them pass. If they were to attend the party, they would have gone into the ball room where the festivities were taking place. Instead, Tavi and Dox wandered around the castle looking for a way to ruin the party full of snobs. They walked room after room around the castle, and couldn’t figure a way to crash the party.

 

Ponydox said, “Geesh, this castle is huge! There has to be a way to do this somewhere.” Dox walked into another room, only to find the fifth parlor they’ve run into. Octavia shrugged her shoulders and said, “You know, maybe castle snooping isn’t as fun as I had hoped… Let’s take a break for a while, we can crash the party later because it goes all night.” Ponydox agreed and the two of them sat on a couch in the parlor.

 

To Ponydox’s surprise, neither of them were talking even though they were chatting it up while trotting around the castle. To him, it looked like Octavia was thinking deeply about something. He didn’t know what it was, but for some reason he was to afraid to ask. Instead, Dox found himself staring at Octavia.

 

She is a very unique kind of beauty. Tavi had the appearance of one in a million, which made her a popular musician around Equestria. As attractive as Octavia is, her talent is even more incredible. Some say she is only the concert master of the Canterlot Symphony because of her looks, but anyone who hear her perform will quickly forget that notion.

 

This is what intrigued Ponydox about Octavia, and why he was staring at Octavia at that moment of silence. Finally, Octavia caught Ponydox looking at her and asked, “Is there a problem?”

 

Ponydox shook himself out of his trance and quickly replied, “Oh! Um, no, its nothing.”

“Oh come on, you were staring at me! You can tell me, it’s quite alright.” Said Octavia, reassuring.

 

“Well, I don’t know if I should tell you right now…”

 

“If you’re not sure, then maybe I can tell you something?”

 

“Okay, what is it?”

 

“I was just thinking while we were sitting here, why did you ask me of all ponies on a date? What I mean is, I just so happened to pass by when you started to talk to me. What makes me so special?”

 

Octavia hit the nail on the head. The answer to her question was the exact thing he was hesitant to say just a few seconds earlier. Ponydox thought for a moment before answering. The last thing he wanted was for Octavia to think he was a stalker, but he also didn’t want to lie either. “I’ll be honest with you Octavia, and I hope you don’t think any less of me, but I’ve sort of…”

 

Dox paused. He really didn’t want to ruin this night they were having by pouring out his feelings on the first date. During this pause, he knew he had already gone past the point of no return. He had to finish what he was saying. Finally gathering up the courage he had, Ponydox said, “What I mean is, I sort of…”

 

*BAM*

 

Two guards barge through the door of the parlor. “What are you two doing here? You are in a private part of the castle and are trespassing!”

 

Dox and Tavi were busted. The guards found them and they were going to most likely arrest the two of them. Octavia had her hooves over her head, most likely because she had never been in this kind of trouble before. Ponydox on the other hoof, immediately came up with a plan that could possibly get them out of trouble.

 

Dox stood up, and told Tavi, “Follow me!” just as he used a magical spell to trip both guards. Before the guards could get up and chase them, Ponydox and Octavia ran away in order to get out of the castle.

 

“Keep running!” Panted Ponydox. Both of them ran and ran down the stairs of the castle and through the hallways between the rooms. 5 minutes of straight running passed when the two of them finally had the exit in sight. The problem was, they had to go through the ball room where all the guards and guests were congregated. “Just keep running!” Ponydox said again.

 

Before entering the ballroom floor, they had to run down the famous grand stairs where everyone in the room can see. As soon as they were on the stairs, every guard in the room recognized that they were the intruders. Dox and Tavi ran through the crowds of ponies, trying to weave their way between them. Dox looked up and saw six guards flying above, ready to strike once they had a clear shot. Thinking quickly, he decided to run on top of the long stretch of rectangular tables where the finger foods were being held.

 

Dox then used his magic, picked up all the food he could, and started to throw dishes and hors d'oeuvres. This have the two of them just enough time to hold the guards off for their escape. They ran outside, ran past the gates, and went into the night. Fortunately, it was raining very heavily to the point that visibility was very poor and the guards couldn’t find them.

 

The two of them started stood there in a dim part of the street trying to catch their breath while getting soaked. A moment later, both of them started to laugh, realizing how they just got out of trouble. Octavia said, “Well, it looks like we managed to crash that party, huh?” Ponydox chuckled some more.

 

Octavia continued, “Thanks for saving us with that food throwing back there. I’m not sure we would have got away if you hadn’t done that.”

 

Blushing, Ponydox replied, “Oh it was nothing. It’s all part of the adventure, right?”

 

“It is part of the adventure,” said Octavia, “that was very silly and very heroic at the same time. Well, now that we have a chance to talk again, what were you going to say before we were interrupted?”

 

Dox froze. It was only a mere 10 minutes ago that he was about to confess his feelings, and he had already forgot during their mad dash out of the castle. “Oh yeah, that. Um…” This is it. Thought Ponydox. It’s now or never. “I’ve actually seen you around a lot, Octavia. We’re both from ponyville, but I we haven’t officially met before I asked you on this date. Please don’t take this the wrong way, but I developed somewhat of a crush on you. You should have seen how nervous I was when we first talked! I thought I was going to die by butterflies…”

 

Octavia stood there for a moment, not saying anything while the rain continued to pour down on her mane. She was expressionless as she looked at Dox. The only word she used to respond was, “Why?”

 

 

Ponydox’s heart sank. This was possibly one of the worst reactions he could have received after he confessed his feelings for her. After all they went through together that night, all she had to say was ‘why’. Ponydox thought to himself again. She doesn’t like me… Why did I have to jump the gun and tell her on the first date? I lost the best chance of my life with the mare of my dreams. What do I say now?

 

“Why was I nervous, you ask?” said Ponydox, trying to remain cool.

 

“No, not that. I could tell you were nervous the second I saw you! What I mean is, why do you like me?”

 

This gave Ponydox a little hope. Maybe she does like me? Maybe all she needs to know is why I like her and she’ll reciprocate the feel? It’s worth a shot… I just hope I’m not wrong.

 

(OOC: Here's your last chance to impact the story. Tell Octavia why you like/love her. Don't hold back! The more emotional and "D'aww" moments you have in your response, the better outcome you will have in the end. Pour your heart out!!)

[Count Paradox 3,548]

(OOC: I just finished part 1 of your fan fic Ponydox. Please remember that in the interest of time, I am only doing one draft of everyone's fan fic, so if the story reads unsmoothly, or if I make a narrating error/ spelling error, please forgive me. I will post part two of your fan fic once you read and respond to the fan fic. Enjoy!)

 

 

 

 

Ponydox X Octavia Part 1

Everyone in the 5 star restaurant was staring at her. She had just done the unthinkable in a place where the high society of Canterlot expected peace and quiet as they ate their meal. Octavia was a minor celebrity among the citizens of Canterlot, so when she first entered the restaurant, everyone was already aware of her presence. This was not the unthinkable deed, however.

 

About 2 minutes earlier, Octavia’s sophisticated demeanor cracked. Through the stresses of the day and expectations weighing down on her over time, Tavi’s true colors finally showed.

 

“You know what Ponydox?? I'm tired of keeping this persona that I'm 'so sophisticated'! Even if we are dining here for free, let's ditch this joint. I'm tired of the 'fancy' lifestyle, and I'm tired of the 'fancy' words I have to use to seem rich. I don't care that I'm in my concert dress, I want to go on an adventure! Are you with me?”

 

It was at this point everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at Octavia. Not only were they surprised, but they were concerned that perhaps her mystery date had something to do with it. Tavi stood on top of the table, waiting for her date, Ponydox, to respond. Dox was stunned for what seemed to be the longest moment in his lifetime. Finally he said, “W-wow... really, Octavia? I would have never known or guessed that you would want to do that... It's really rather impressive, shattering that mold that others have made for you! Yes! Let's go on an adventure! Let's go out there and explore the world! I'm up for anything as long as you want to do it, Octavia!”

 

The words he chose to say absolutely flabbergasted the whole restaurant into murmuring with each other. As Octavia and Ponydox where leaving the building, they could hear the whispers, “Who is that with Octavia? He must have done something to make Octavia blow up!” “I just saw her at the concert, I thought she was just like us!” “How does a fancy mare like Octavia make a scene like that?!”

 

Despite all the neighsayers, none of the comments Tavi or Dox heard bothered them one bit. They were determined to have a true adventure. After they left the restaurant, Octavia spoke up again in her normal voice and tone. “That’s… exactly what I needed to hear Ponydox. Your are really understanding. I have a bucket list of things I’ve always wanted to do but never had the chance. Should we do sky diving, Dragon surfing, castle snooping, party crashing, or some Pranking? Or maybe you have a better idea? What should we do?”

 

Ponydox was in absolute awe. Here was a magnificent pony he just met a few days ago, standing in front of him asking if he wanted to go on an adventure with her. When Dox did finally meet Octavia, he had to summon up all his courage to ask her on a date. She was literally walking away from him when he did it, and he had no idea what the outcome would be. Octavia said yes, in a manner of speaking, because Dox asked her to attend a concert with him that Octavia actually was performing in, unknown to him at the time. Then in a unpredictable turn of events, Ponydox’s night with Octavia completely changed for the better.

 

Ponydox smiled and said, “Well, a few of the things that you suggested caught my attention. I've always wanted to go into the castle and look around a bit, so castle snooping doesn't sound too bad. Oh, and perhaps while we're there, the Princesses could be throwing a party, so if that happens, we could knock two of those things on your list out at once and crash that party! And as for pranking... *gives a sly smile* There's a certain blue pegasus in Ponyville that needs a taste of her own medicine, I think. Well, which do you think we should do first, Octavia?”

 

Tavi’s face lit up. “You really want to do this with me? You weren’t trying to save face at the restaurant? This is very kind of you. I’m… I’m ready to do this! I’m nervous, but ready!”

The two of them made their way to the castle where the Concert afterparty was still going. Octavia commented, “You know, I still have that ticket for that party we didn’t go to because we wanted to go to the restaurant. We can get into the castle that way.”

 

When a member of the royal guard stopped the two of them at the castle, Octavia showed him a ticket, and let them pass. If they were to attend the party, they would have gone into the ball room where the festivities were taking place. Instead, Tavi and Dox wandered around the castle looking for a way to ruin the party full of snobs. They walked room after room around the castle, and couldn’t figure a way to crash the party.

 

Ponydox said, “Geesh, this castle is huge! There has to be a way to do this somewhere.” Dox walked into another room, only to find the fifth parlor they’ve run into. Octavia shrugged her shoulders and said, “You know, maybe castle snooping isn’t as fun as I had hoped… Let’s take a break for a while, we can crash the party later because it goes all night.” Ponydox agreed and the two of them sat on a couch in the parlor.

 

To Ponydox’s surprise, neither of them were talking even though they were chatting it up while trotting around the castle. To him, it looked like Octavia was thinking deeply about something. He didn’t know what it was, but for some reason he was to afraid to ask. Instead, Dox found himself staring at Octavia.

 

She is a very unique kind of beauty. Tavi had the appearance of one in a million, which made her a popular musician around Equestria. As attractive as Octavia is, her talent is even more incredible. Some say she is only the concert master of the Canterlot Symphony because of her looks, but anyone who hear her perform will quickly forget that notion.

 

This is what intrigued Ponydox about Octavia, and why he was staring at Octavia at that moment of silence. Finally, Octavia caught Ponydox looking at her and asked, “Is there a problem?”

 

Ponydox shook himself out of his trance and quickly replied, “Oh! Um, no, its nothing.”

“Oh come on, you were staring at me! You can tell me, it’s quite alright.” Said Octavia, reassuring.

 

“Well, I don’t know if I should tell you right now…”

 

“If you’re not sure, then maybe I can tell you something?”

 

“Okay, what is it?”

 

“I was just thinking while we were sitting here, why did you ask me of all ponies on a date? What I mean is, I just so happened to pass by when you started to talk to me. What makes me so special?”

 

Octavia hit the nail on the head. The answer to her question was the exact thing he was hesitant to say just a few seconds earlier. Ponydox thought for a moment before answering. The last thing he wanted was for Octavia to think he was a stalker, but he also didn’t want to lie either. “I’ll be honest with you Octavia, and I hope you don’t think any less of me, but I’ve sort of…”

 

Dox paused. He really didn’t want to ruin this night they were having by pouring out his feelings on the first date. During this pause, he knew he had already gone past the point of no return. He had to finish what he was saying. Finally gathering up the courage he had, Ponydox said, “What I mean is, I sort of…”

 

*BAM*

 

Two guards barge through the door of the parlor. “What are you two doing here? You are in a private part of the castle and are trespassing!”

 

Dox and Tavi were busted. The guards found them and they were going to most likely arrest the two of them. Octavia had her hooves over her head, most likely because she had never been in this kind of trouble before. Ponydox on the other hoof, immediately came up with a plan that could possibly get them out of trouble.

 

Dox stood up, and told Tavi, “Follow me!” just as he used a magical spell to trip both guards. Before the guards could get up and chase them, Ponydox and Octavia ran away in order to get out of the castle.

 

“Keep running!” Panted Ponydox. Both of them ran and ran down the stairs of the castle and through the hallways between the rooms. 5 minutes of straight running passed when the two of them finally had the exit in sight. The problem was, they had to go through the ball room where all the guards and guests were congregated. “Just keep running!” Ponydox said again.

 

Before entering the ballroom floor, they had to run down the famous grand stairs where everyone in the room can see. As soon as they were on the stairs, every guard in the room recognized that they were the intruders. Dox and Tavi ran through the crowds of ponies, trying to weave their way between them. Dox looked up and saw six guards flying above, ready to strike once they had a clear shot. Thinking quickly, he decided to run on top of the long stretch of rectangular tables where the finger foods were being held.

 

Dox then used his magic, picked up all the food he could, and started to throw dishes and hors d'oeuvres. This have the two of them just enough time to hold the guards off for their escape. They ran outside, ran past the gates, and went into the night. Fortunately, it was raining very heavily to the point that visibility was very poor and the guards couldn’t find them.

 

The two of them started stood there in a dim part of the street trying to catch their breath while getting soaked. A moment later, both of them started to laugh, realizing how they just got out of trouble. Octavia said, “Well, it looks like we managed to crash that party, huh?” Ponydox chuckled some more.

 

Octavia continued, “Thanks for saving us with that food throwing back there. I’m not sure we would have got away if you hadn’t done that.”

 

Blushing, Ponydox replied, “Oh it was nothing. It’s all part of the adventure, right?”

 

“It is part of the adventure,” said Octavia, “that was very silly and very heroic at the same time. Well, now that we have a chance to talk again, what were you going to say before we were interrupted?”

 

Dox froze. It was only a mere 10 minutes ago that he was about to confess his feelings, and he had already forgot during their mad dash out of the castle. “Oh yeah, that. Um…” This is it. Thought Ponydox. It’s now or never. “I’ve actually seen you around a lot, Octavia. We’re both from ponyville, but I we haven’t officially met before I asked you on this date. Please don’t take this the wrong way, but I developed somewhat of a crush on you. You should have seen how nervous I was when we first talked! I thought I was going to die by butterflies…”

 

Octavia stood there for a moment, not saying anything while the rain continued to pour down on her mane. She was expressionless as she looked at Dox. The only word she used to respond was, “Why?”

 

 

Ponydox’s heart sank. This was possibly one of the worst reactions he could have received after he confessed his feelings for her. After all they went through together that night, all she had to say was ‘why’. Ponydox thought to himself again. She doesn’t like me… Why did I have to jump the gun and tell her on the first date? I lost the best chance of my life with the mare of my dreams. What do I say now?

 

“Why was I nervous, you ask?” said Ponydox, trying to remain cool.

 

“No, not that. I could tell you were nervous the second I saw you! What I mean is, why do you like me?”

 

This gave Ponydox a little hope. Maybe she does like me? Maybe all she needs to know is why I like her and she’ll reciprocate the feel? It’s worth a shot… I just hope I’m not wrong.

 

(OOC: Here's your last chance to impact the story. Tell Octavia why you like/love her. Don't hold back! The more emotional and "D'aww" moments you have in your response, the better outcome you will have in the end. Pour your heart out!!)

 

(OOC:@My little pwny oh... my... celestia... i... i can't even.... wow.... i may have to think of how to say it to her...)

 

W-well, Octavia... the truth is... I... I love you! I can't hide that anymore, I realise that now! I've loved you ever since the first time I laid my eyes on you. You are just so beautiful, sweet, talented... all of the things that I'm not. I never would have expected that I would have gotten to even spend a day like this with you. At first, I half expected that you would turn me down, but... but you didn't, and I was amazed that you would even spend time with someone like me. I'm not like any of your other friends that you spend time with, and yet... you saw something enough in me to trust me enoug and spend some time with me. And, during that time, it seems that I've fallen even more in love with you... you hate me now, don't you? *sighs* I... I guess I'll leave now...

 

(OOC: OHMAIGAWD THAT WAS HARD TO THINK UP!!! *ahem* well, if you think it could do any better with some parts out or add something in, go ahead and do so. i trust ya.)

Edited October 31, 2012 by Count Ponydox

[Alex Night 870]

(OOC:@My little pwny oh... my... celestia... i... i can't even.... wow.... i may have to think of how to say it to her...)

 

W-well, Octavia... the truth is... I... I love you! I can't hide that anymore, I realise that now! I've loved you ever since the first time I laid my eyes on you. You are just so beautiful, sweet, talented... all of the things that I'm not. I never would have expected that I would have gotten to even spend a day like this with you. At first, I half expected that you would turn me down, but... but you didn't, and I was amazed that you would even spend time with someone like me. I'm not like any of your other friends that you spend time with, and yet... you saw something enough in me to trust me enoug and spend some time with me. And, during that time, it seems that I've fallen even more in love with you... you hate me now, don't you? *sighs* I... I guess I'll leave now...

 

(OOC: OHMAIGAWD THAT WAS HARD TO THINK UP!!! *ahem* well, if you think it could do any better with some parts out or add something in, go ahead and do so. i trust ya.)

 

(OOC: LOL right when I finished reading that Fan fic and scrolled down to Ponydox's post, I saw his profile pic and just lol'ed my rear off thinking that was his reaction. XD )

[My little pwny 1,392]

(OOC: Here is part 2 of 2. It comes with an Epilogue, I really hope you enjoy it. I think I spent 3-4 hours on this for you!)

 

“W-well, Octavia... the truth is... I... I love you! I can't hide that anymore, I realize that now! I've loved you ever since the first time I laid my eyes on you. You are just so beautiful, so sweet, so talented... all of the things that I'm not. I never would have expected that I would have gotten to even spend a day like this with you. At first, I half expected that you would turn me down, but... but you didn't! I was amazed that you would even spend time with someone like me. I'm not like any of your other friends that you spend time with, and yet... you saw something in me to trust me and spend the evening with me. And, during that time, it seems that I've fallen even more in love with you... Wow, just look at me say these things! You must hate me now, don't you? *sighs* I... I guess I'll leave now...”

 

Tears started running down Ponydox’s face as he walked away. He figured she wouldn’t notice because of the rain, but at this point, he didn’t care either. In his mind, all hope was lost. She was the perfect mare! There is no pony in Equestria that can match the inner and outer beauty of Octavia! I’m going to die alone because I wasn’t man enough for Octavia… How could I even think I had a chance with her?

 

Just when Ponydox was at his lowest, he felt somepony tap him on the back. When he turned around, he saw Octavia with the most incredible smile he’s even seen. “Didn’t you know it’s rude not to walk a lady home?” Before Ponydox could react, Octavia lunged at him and gave him a big, damp kiss. “And didn’t you know it’s rude not to let a lady respond? Now let me tell you my feelings.”

 

What in the name of Celestia just happened? Thought Ponydox. Did I just die and go to heaven? Am I dreaming?

 

“Of all the stallions I’ve dated, and I’ve dated quite a few, I have never in my days met someone as unrefined as you. You could never survive the high society socializing here in Canterlot. Every guy I’ve been with has always been ‘refined’, but also snobbish, self-centered, and arrogant. I never wanted to believe it at the time, but each stallion I’ve been with was only dating me as a status symbol. Sure they would treat me like a lady in public, but I was always ignored when we were alone. This is why I detest the ‘sophisticated’ life style, and that is why I moved in with Vinyl Scratch in Ponyville.”

 

Ponydox was still in denial. He didn’t believe what his senses were telling him. His eyes were saying that Octavia has a look of love on him. He didn’t believe that. His ears were telling him that Octavia was never treated well. He couldn’t believe that. His nose was telling him that he could smell the pheromones Octavia was giving off was love. He wouldn’t believe that. The nerves in his lips were telling him that Octavia just kissed him passionately. He refused to believe that, and yet, there she was.

 

“Because I was treated selfishly by my previous boyfriends, I told myself I would never date ever again. Then that fateful day when you asked me on this date, I knew right away something was different about you. My instincts were right, even if I didn’t give you a chance in the beginning.”

 

She didn’t give me a chance??

 

“So this is what I think about you. You are unrefined, but you are also kind, funny, intelligent, genuine, and understanding. I don’t know your social class, but I don’t even care because what you’ve shown me today is something I thought never existed in stallions. Being a true gentleman! You stood up for me at the restaurant, you were willing to go on an adventure, and you saved us by pulling off that stunt back at the castle. If that’s not being a gentleman, I don’t know what is! And let me tell you something Ponydox, I love true gentlemen, and you are the only one I’ve ever met.”

 

Octavia once again went in for the kiss, and the two of them lock lips for a whole minute before letting go. For those 60 seconds, it literally felt like Ponydox was floating on a cloud. Her slightly damp lips perfectly slide between his own. Dox knew that she had more experience than him, so he tried to keep up by moving his lips as well. Octavia used the tip of her tongue to touch his lower lip. She then slid her tongue left to right across his lip in a very sensitive way. Ponydox’s mind was blown at how this felt. All the doubts in his mind about this not being real were gone. Not even in my wildest dreams can this feel this good. Octavia then used her mouth to suck in the lower lip of Ponydox. Once his lip was in her grasp, she very lightly squeezed her teeth around it, and started to lick it even more. Wow… maybe later I can use this on her. I hope copying her is okay… To finish the kiss, Octavia cocked her head back a little to look into the eyes of Ponydox, then she gave him a 5 second peck to the lips.

 

The two love birds stared at each other for another whole minute. Both of them cemented this moment in their minds through smiling, hugging, and holding hooves. Finally Octavia broke the silence, “Sooo… are you going to walk me home or what?”

 

Ponydox replied, “Of course I’m going to walk you home, but it’s the ‘or what’ part that I’m wondering about.” Both Dox and Tavi laughed at his comment, and he proceeded to take the love of his life back to Ponyville.”

 

Epilogue

“… Happy birthday dear Viola! Happy birthday to you! Yay!” Ponydox and Octavia sang together to their daughter Viola who just turned one. Viola has a unicorn horn, but looks very similar to Octavia as time has gone by.

 

“I’m glad she’s a unicorn, because it would be very hard for a pony to play this violin without magic!” Octavia gave Viola her present. Of course, she won’t be able to play it until she can use a special levitating spell, but Octavia thinks it’s never too early to start being around music.

 

“It’s just what she wanted, I bet you anything.” Said Ponydox just as Viola was toying with it.

 

“Thanks, I think so too, but I think I got some inspiration by our other child.” said Octavia, pointing to her pregnant belly.

 

“You really think she spoke to you huh?”

 

“I do! Mothers have intuition that fathers can’t understand.”

 

“Right… so what are we going to call him? Tuba? Xylophone?”

 

Knowing he was joking, Octavia lightly punched Ponydox in the shoulder. “I have no idea, but I think she is going to be a singer! That’s why I could hear her that one time!”

 

Ponydox smiled. “You know what, that reminds me. I’ll be right back.” Dox left the room for a moment and came back with a wrapped gift. “I know our second anniversary isn’t until next week, but I wanted to give this to you now.”

 

Octavia grabbed the gift, opened it up, and saw what was inside.

 

“Oh… oh my! How did you find this?” said Octavia, instantly recognizing the present.

 

“It took me forever to track this down. I thought they would have thrown this away, but thankfully Canterlot castle archives these kinds of things.”

 

“This is the ticket I used for the two of us to enter Canterlot Castle… The night we got away from the guards and fell in love… Ha… it seems so long ago but I can remember it like it was yesterday!”

 

“Me too, Octavia. I’ll never forget that night that I thought I lost you when I confessed my love. You were the only Mare for me in the whole world, I don’t know where I’d be if you didn’t catch up to me.”

 

Octavia sarcastically commented, “Eh, I figured you were worth giving a second chance.”

 

Both of them chuckled at her joke, just as Viola started to cry. Ponydox picked her up on his back to get her to stop. Once she calmed down, Ponydox caught Octavia staring at him. Dox then said, “Is there a problem?”

 

Octavia walked up to him and said, “Yes there is. I think I love you too much!” She then pecked him on the lips and hugged him, after which Ponydox said, “Well, it looks like we both have that problem!”

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dIg8Vs-MVZA&feature=related

Edited October 31, 2012 by My little pwny

[Glaceon 793]

Some epic stuff....

 

(OOC That........ That..... THAT..... THAT WAS AMAZING! I can't wait till you do mine...)

[My little pwny 1,392]

(OOC That........ That..... THAT..... THAT WAS AMAZING! I can't wait till you do mine...)

 

Haha... thanks! You're going to love yours, at least in the end you will. Let's just say that you are going to beg me to post part 2 as soon as I can haha

[Glaceon 793]

Haha... thanks! You're going to love yours, at least in the end you will. Let's just say that you are going to beg me to post part 2 as soon as I can haha

 

I'm going to beg you to post part one.

[My little pwny 1,392]

I'm going to beg you to post part one.

 

I'm begging myself to do it! We both love Twilight, so I'm going to write the fan fic sorta how I'd like it, but with your OC of course.

[Glaceon 793]

I'm begging myself to do it! We both love Twilight, so I'm going to write the fan fic sorta how I'd like it, but with your OC of course.

 

Then do it, you silly filly.

[Alex Night 870]

(OOC: Here is part 2 of 2. It comes with an Epilogue, I really hope you enjoy it. I think I spent 3-4 hours on this for you!)

 

“W-well, Octavia... the truth is... I... I love you! I can't hide that anymore, I realize that now! I've loved you ever since the first time I laid my eyes on you. You are just so beautiful, so sweet, so talented... all of the things that I'm not. I never would have expected that I would have gotten to even spend a day like this with you. At first, I half expected that you would turn me down, but... but you didn't! I was amazed that you would even spend time with someone like me. I'm not like any of your other friends that you spend time with, and yet... you saw something in me to trust me and spend the evening with me. And, during that time, it seems that I've fallen even more in love with you... Wow, just look at me say these things! You must hate me now, don't you? *sighs* I... I guess I'll leave now...”

 

Tears started running down Ponydox’s face as he walked away. He figured she wouldn’t notice because of the rain, but at this point, he didn’t care either. In his mind, all hope was lost. She was the perfect mare! There is no pony in Equestria that can match the inner and outer beauty of Octavia! I’m going to die alone because I wasn’t man enough for Octavia… How could I even think I had a chance with her?

 

Just when Ponydox was at his lowest, he felt somepony tap him on the back. When he turned around, he saw Octavia with the most incredible smile he’s even seen. “Didn’t you know it’s rude not to walk a lady home?” Before Ponydox could react, Octavia lunged at him and gave him a big, damp kiss. “And didn’t you know it’s rude not to let a lady respond? Now let me tell you my feelings.”

 

What in the name of Celestia just happened? Thought Ponydox. Did I just die and go to heaven? Am I dreaming?

 

“Of all the stallions I’ve dated, and I’ve dated quite a few, I have never in my days met someone as unrefined as you. You could never survive the high society socializing here in Canterlot. Every guy I’ve been with has always been ‘refined’, but also snobbish, self-centered, and arrogant. I never wanted to believe it at the time, but each stallion I’ve been with was only dating me as a status symbol. Sure they would treat me like a lady in public, but I was always ignored when we were alone. This is why I detest the ‘sophisticated’ life style, and that is why I moved in with Vinyl Scratch in Ponyville.”

 

Ponydox was still in denial. He didn’t believe what his senses were telling him. His eyes were saying that Octavia has a look of love on him. He didn’t believe that. His ears were telling him that Octavia was never treated well. He couldn’t believe that. His nose was telling him that he could smell the pheromones Octavia was giving off was love. He wouldn’t believe that. The nerves in his lips were telling him that Octavia just kissed him passionately. He refused to believe that, and yet, there she was.

 

“Because I was treated selfishly by my previous boyfriends, I told myself I would never date ever again. Then that fateful day when you asked me on this date, I knew right away something was different about you. My instincts were right, even if I didn’t give you a chance in the beginning.”

 

She didn’t give me a chance??

 

“So this is what I think about you. You are unrefined, but you are also kind, funny, intelligent, genuine, and understanding. I don’t know your social class, but I don’t even care because what you’ve shown me today is something I thought never existed in stallions. Being a true gentleman! You stood up for me at the restaurant, you were willing to go on an adventure, and you saved us by pulling off that stunt back at the castle. If that’s not being a gentleman, I don’t know what is! And let me tell you something Ponydox, I love true gentlemen, and you are the only one I’ve ever met.”

 

Octavia once again went in for the kiss, and the two of them lock lips for a whole minute before letting go. For those 60 seconds, it literally felt like Ponydox was floating on a cloud. Her slightly damp lips perfectly slide between his own. Dox knew that she had more experience than him, so he tried to keep up by moving his lips as well. Octavia used the tip of her tongue to touch his lower lip. She then slid her tongue left to right across his lip in a very sensitive way. Ponydox’s mind was blown at how this felt. All the doubts in his mind about this not being real were gone. Not even in my wildest dreams can this feel this good. Octavia then used her mouth to suck in the lower lip of Ponydox. Once his lip was in her grasp, she very lightly squeezed her teeth around it, and started to lick it even more. Wow… maybe later I can use this on her. I hope copying her is okay… To finish the kiss, Octavia cocked her head back a little to look into the eyes of Ponydox, then she gave him a 5 second peck to the lips.

 

The two love birds stared at each other for another whole minute. Both of them cemented this moment in their minds through smiling, hugging, and holding hooves. Finally Octavia broke the silence, “Sooo… are you going to walk me home or what?”

 

Ponydox replied, “Of course I’m going to walk you home, but it’s the ‘or what’ part that I’m wondering about.” Both Dox and Tavi laughed at his comment, and he proceeded to take the love of his life back to Ponyville.”

 

 

Epilogue

“… Happy birthday dear Viola! Happy birthday to you! Yay!” Ponydox and Octavia sang together to their daughter Viola who just turned one. Viola has a unicorn horn, but looks very similar to Octavia as time has gone by.

 

“I’m glad she’s a unicorn, because it would be very hard for a pony to play this violin without magic!” Octavia gave Viola her present. Of course, she won’t be able to play it until she can use a special levitating spell, but Octavia thinks it’s never too early to start being around music.

 

“It’s just what she wanted, I bet you anything.” Said Ponydox just as Viola was toying with it.

 

“Thanks, I think so too, but I think I got some inspiration by our other child.” said Octavia, pointing to her pregnant belly.

 

“You really think she spoke to you huh?”

 

“I do! Mothers have intuition that fathers can’t understand.”

 

“Right… so what are we going to call him? Tuba? Xylophone?”

 

Knowing he was joking, Octavia lightly punched Ponydox in the shoulder. “I have no idea, but I think she is going to be a singer! That’s why I could hear her that one time!”

 

Ponydox smiled. “You know what, that reminds me. I’ll be right back.” Dox left the room for a moment and came back with a wrapped gift. “I know our second anniversary isn’t until next week, but I wanted to give this to you now.”

 

Octavia grabbed the gift, opened it up, and saw what was inside.

 

“Oh… oh my! How did you find this?” said Octavia, instantly recognizing the present.

 

“It took me forever to track this down. I thought they would have thrown this away, but thankfully Canterlot castle archives these kinds of things.”

 

“This is the ticket I used for the two of us to enter Canterlot Castle… The night we got away from the guards and fell in love… Ha… it seems so long ago but I can remember it like it was yesterday!”

 

“Me too, Octavia. I’ll never forget that night that I thought I lost you when I confessed my love. You were the only Mare for me in the whole world, I don’t know where I’d be if you didn’t catch up to me.”

 

Octavia sarcastically commented, “Eh, I figured you were worth giving a second chance.”

 

Both of them chuckled at her joke, just as Viola started to cry. Ponydox picked her up on his back to get her to stop. Once she calmed down, Ponydox caught Octavia staring at him. Dox then said, “Is there a problem?”

 

Octavia walked up to him and said, “Yes there is. I think I love you too much!” She then pecked him on the lips and hugged him, after which Ponydox said, “Well, it looks like we both have that problem!”

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dIg8Vs-MVZA&feature=related

 

(OOC: this... No words I would write can express how amazing this work of fiction is, so I have this.

 

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd101/sweetsyren/Gifs%20and%20Macros/Random/IntenseHandClap.gif

 

If it was this good, I can't imagine how brilliant the others will be.

[Count Paradox 3,548]

(OOC: LOL right when I finished reading that Fan fic and scrolled down to Ponydox's post, I saw his profile pic and just lol'ed my rear off thinking that was his reaction. XD )

 

(OOC: that WAS my reaction! it was incredible, I was totally astounded! that was my face as I read it, even though most of the time I had a goofy-lookin grin plastered on my face.)

(OOC: Here is part 2 of 2. It comes with an Epilogue, I really hope you enjoy it. I think I spent 3-4 hours on this for you!)

 

“W-well, Octavia... the truth is... I... I love you! I can't hide that anymore, I realize that now! I've loved you ever since the first time I laid my eyes on you. You are just so beautiful, so sweet, so talented... all of the things that I'm not. I never would have expected that I would have gotten to even spend a day like this with you. At first, I half expected that you would turn me down, but... but you didn't! I was amazed that you would even spend time with someone like me. I'm not like any of your other friends that you spend time with, and yet... you saw something in me to trust me and spend the evening with me. And, during that time, it seems that I've fallen even more in love with you... Wow, just look at me say these things! You must hate me now, don't you? *sighs* I... I guess I'll leave now...”

 

Tears started running down Ponydox’s face as he walked away. He figured she wouldn’t notice because of the rain, but at this point, he didn’t care either. In his mind, all hope was lost. She was the perfect mare! There is no pony in Equestria that can match the inner and outer beauty of Octavia! I’m going to die alone because I wasn’t man enough for Octavia… How could I even think I had a chance with her?

 

Just when Ponydox was at his lowest, he felt somepony tap him on the back. When he turned around, he saw Octavia with the most incredible smile he’s even seen. “Didn’t you know it’s rude not to walk a lady home?” Before Ponydox could react, Octavia lunged at him and gave him a big, damp kiss. “And didn’t you know it’s rude not to let a lady respond? Now let me tell you my feelings.”

 

What in the name of Celestia just happened? Thought Ponydox. Did I just die and go to heaven? Am I dreaming?

 

“Of all the stallions I’ve dated, and I’ve dated quite a few, I have never in my days met someone as unrefined as you. You could never survive the high society socializing here in Canterlot. Every guy I’ve been with has always been ‘refined’, but also snobbish, self-centered, and arrogant. I never wanted to believe it at the time, but each stallion I’ve been with was only dating me as a status symbol. Sure they would treat me like a lady in public, but I was always ignored when we were alone. This is why I detest the ‘sophisticated’ life style, and that is why I moved in with Vinyl Scratch in Ponyville.”

 

Ponydox was still in denial. He didn’t believe what his senses were telling him. His eyes were saying that Octavia has a look of love on him. He didn’t believe that. His ears were telling him that Octavia was never treated well. He couldn’t believe that. His nose was telling him that he could smell the pheromones Octavia was giving off was love. He wouldn’t believe that. The nerves in his lips were telling him that Octavia just kissed him passionately. He refused to believe that, and yet, there she was.

 

“Because I was treated selfishly by my previous boyfriends, I told myself I would never date ever again. Then that fateful day when you asked me on this date, I knew right away something was different about you. My instincts were right, even if I didn’t give you a chance in the beginning.”

 

She didn’t give me a chance??

 

“So this is what I think about you. You are unrefined, but you are also kind, funny, intelligent, genuine, and understanding. I don’t know your social class, but I don’t even care because what you’ve shown me today is something I thought never existed in stallions. Being a true gentleman! You stood up for me at the restaurant, you were willing to go on an adventure, and you saved us by pulling off that stunt back at the castle. If that’s not being a gentleman, I don’t know what is! And let me tell you something Ponydox, I love true gentlemen, and you are the only one I’ve ever met.”

 

Octavia once again went in for the kiss, and the two of them lock lips for a whole minute before letting go. For those 60 seconds, it literally felt like Ponydox was floating on a cloud. Her slightly damp lips perfectly slide between his own. Dox knew that she had more experience than him, so he tried to keep up by moving his lips as well. Octavia used the tip of her tongue to touch his lower lip. She then slid her tongue left to right across his lip in a very sensitive way. Ponydox’s mind was blown at how this felt. All the doubts in his mind about this not being real were gone. Not even in my wildest dreams can this feel this good. Octavia then used her mouth to suck in the lower lip of Ponydox. Once his lip was in her grasp, she very lightly squeezed her teeth around it, and started to lick it even more. Wow… maybe later I can use this on her. I hope copying her is okay… To finish the kiss, Octavia cocked her head back a little to look into the eyes of Ponydox, then she gave him a 5 second peck to the lips.

 

The two love birds stared at each other for another whole minute. Both of them cemented this moment in their minds through smiling, hugging, and holding hooves. Finally Octavia broke the silence, “Sooo… are you going to walk me home or what?”

 

Ponydox replied, “Of course I’m going to walk you home, but it’s the ‘or what’ part that I’m wondering about.” Both Dox and Tavi laughed at his comment, and he proceeded to take the love of his life back to Ponyville.”

 

 

 

 

 

Epilogue

“… Happy birthday dear Viola! Happy birthday to you! Yay!” Ponydox and Octavia sang together to their daughter Viola who just turned one. Viola has a unicorn horn, but looks very similar to Octavia as time has gone by.

 

“I’m glad she’s a unicorn, because it would be very hard for a pony to play this violin without magic!” Octavia gave Viola her present. Of course, she won’t be able to play it until she can use a special levitating spell, but Octavia thinks it’s never too early to start being around music.

 

“It’s just what she wanted, I bet you anything.” Said Ponydox just as Viola was toying with it.

 

“Thanks, I think so too, but I think I got some inspiration by our other child.” said Octavia, pointing to her pregnant belly.

 

“You really think she spoke to you huh?”

 

“I do! Mothers have intuition that fathers can’t understand.”

 

“Right… so what are we going to call him? Tuba? Xylophone?”

 

Knowing he was joking, Octavia lightly punched Ponydox in the shoulder. “I have no idea, but I think she is going to be a singer! That’s why I could hear her that one time!”

 

Ponydox smiled. “You know what, that reminds me. I’ll be right back.” Dox left the room for a moment and came back with a wrapped gift. “I know our second anniversary isn’t until next week, but I wanted to give this to you now.”

 

Octavia grabbed the gift, opened it up, and saw what was inside.

 

“Oh… oh my! How did you find this?” said Octavia, instantly recognizing the present.

 

“It took me forever to track this down. I thought they would have thrown this away, but thankfully Canterlot castle archives these kinds of things.”

 

“This is the ticket I used for the two of us to enter Canterlot Castle… The night we got away from the guards and fell in love… Ha… it seems so long ago but I can remember it like it was yesterday!”

 

“Me too, Octavia. I’ll never forget that night that I thought I lost you when I confessed my love. You were the only Mare for me in the whole world, I don’t know where I’d be if you didn’t catch up to me.”

 

Octavia sarcastically commented, “Eh, I figured you were worth giving a second chance.”

 

Both of them chuckled at her joke, just as Viola started to cry. Ponydox picked her up on his back to get her to stop. Once she calmed down, Ponydox caught Octavia staring at him. Dox then said, “Is there a problem?”

 

Octavia walked up to him and said, “Yes there is. I think I love you too much!” She then pecked him on the lips and hugged him, after which Ponydox said, “Well, it looks like we both have that problem!”

 

 

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(OOC:@My little pwny *faints from epic D'AWWWWW-ness* ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshonmygosh! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE!!!! BETTER THAT I COULD HAVE EVER ASKED FOR!!!!! AMAAZING!!! oh, and also...)

 

Octavia used the tip of her tongue to touch his lower lip. She then slid her tongue left to right across his lip in a very sensitive way. Ponydox’s mind was blown at how this felt.

 

(OOC: o///o that... that was... nice... and when i read that... yea, my mind did exactly that. MIND=BLOWN)

Edited October 31, 2012 by Count Ponydox

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