Judge your OC

[NekromantiaFox 270]

I'm sorry if what I said aggravated you. I swear that I wasn't trying to rush you and I acknowledge that you owe me nothing. I was simply asking if the project was still going, and I'm curious about a timeline.

 

Yes, the project is still going on. I have stuff to do on the side aswell, s that msut be taken into consideration (Pony Pile: http://mlpforums.com/topic/37959-pony-pile/ < for example). I'm trying to do everything in order here though.

[Eternal_Eclipse 28]

Application form:

 

Name: Princess Hallow Skye

Race: Batacorn (Unipeg or Alicorn with bat likeappreance)

Age: Mare (maybe 17 or 18)

Gender: Female

Appearance: Long curly locks of pink with hues of red at the ends. Almost black coat with a hint of purple. Bright pink/crimson eyes. Light purple eyeshadow and white marks under her eyes. Cutie mark is a full moon with purple clouds and a bat. She is as tall as Princess Cadence or Luna. Adorns silver jewelry with gemstones.

Reference (images):

http://princess-hall...e/39679766&qo=3

 

http://princess-hall...e/39679766&qo=8

 

http://stalkerpony.d...e/52356355&qo=1

 

http://tripperwitch....e/52356355&qo=3

 

Personality: Having trust issues from past events causes her to recluse herself to most other ponies. She stays quiet until the need to speak arises. She is a very determined mare when it comes to her friends and family, giving her heart and soul into helping them. She is the jealous type when someone spends time with her little sister Shimmer Wing. Deep inside she is full of hate for most other ponies because no one saved her when she needed help the most. All in all, she is a nice mare, not wanting to hurt anyone's feelings. She hides her true self and puts on a smile for she can carry on with her life.

 

Backstory: Princess Hallow Skye derives from my story Lunar Requiem (VERY VERY VEEEERRRRY GRIMMDARK.) At the time, she was a simple Princess, dealing with her daily duties of learning how the kingdom runs in Eternia. Her kingdom is soon taken over and she is forced to bear the new Prince of Eternia for Abyss Armor. (rape). Long story short and for no more spoilers, she has had a very rough time for being so young.

Edited November 4, 2012 by Eternal_Eclipse

[Chann3l Chas3r 367]

You sir should make that thread

 

If it hasn't been made yet, I could host it. The requirement for receiving constructive criticism on an OC you post would be posting constructive criticism on someone else's. I think that might work.

Edited November 5, 2012 by Lagtim3

[ThatBronyGirl 49]

You know, this sounds fun. As long as we get to see this fanfic

Name: Honey Swirl

 

Age: 20

 

Gender: Female

 

Appearance: Light brown hair with orange streaks runing through it. There are kinks at the end of her mane and tail. She is a light yellow pegasus with golden brown eyes. Her cutiemark is a caged white wing with honey pooled underneath it and running down.

 

Refrence (image): http://smilebud.devi...Swirl-335577324 http://smilebud.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d5k33r0

 

Personality: Stubborn and free spirited. She is lazy when it comes to herself, but will be responsible when others depend on her. Kinda. She hate ponies telling her what to do. In fact, she will activly do the opposite of what you tell her to, even if she's wrong. She will only argue if somthing comes up that realy bothers her, like hitting fillies or drugs. She has a soft spot for small children and animals. She is nice to everyone until they give her cause to be nasty. She trusts everyone at first as well. She is almost always happy go lucky, and laughs at everything. Positivity is her forte.

 

Backstory: Honey Swirl was born in Fillydelphia and lived peacefuly until she was 4. After first starting school it was discovered that she was a loud and talkitive filly. All during elementry school she struggled with her mouth shut. After getting kicked out of a few schools for being ''disruptive'' she eventualy dropped out at 14, still without her cutiemark. Her parents decided to send her to Luna's School for Disadvantaged Youngsters (http://www.fimfictio...432/School-Daze) in Old Canterlot. She spent 4 years there trying to find her calling, with no sucess. After graduating she couldn't find a job, as nopony wanted to hire a pony with an unknown talent. She eventualy joined Luna's Royal Gaurd. After her first mission to rescue a young colt from an abusive household she finaly got her cutiemark, which stands for freedom for the innocent. She has a pet female rat named Note. She lives in Canterlot part time and is single with no foals.

Edited November 5, 2012 by ThatBronyGirl

[NekromantiaFox 270]

I was serious when I said this may take a while XD I can't even start untill money because I also get a bit (small amount) of feedback from Lexi (brony), Cheyenne (supporter non-brony) and Jordyn (supporter non-brony).