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I wrote this as a Dialog for Octavia in the image, "Sad Octavia", by http://shadow-rhapsody.deviantart.com"]~shadow-rhapsody[/url]

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You can find the Image above http://shadow-rhapsody.deviantart.com/art/Sad-Octavia-267633151"]HERE[/url]



Since I wrote this as a dialog for Octavia, I tried phrase it to match her accent and speaking style.

So, make sure you read this in Octavia's accent so that it rhymes and flows correctly.


For those of you who don't know Octavia's accent and speaking style;
She talks in an old English accent (kind of like someone from England would have)

She also likes to use sophisticated (Smart) words.

 

 



My dear Vinyl, who could have foreseen

my dear friend, how long has it been


It seems an eternity, since I've seen your face

so leaving the train, I had a quick pace


I went to our house, nopony was there

I peered inside, but found it was bare


I wondered then, what could have occurred

you leaving town, just seemed so absurd


I searched high, and ever so low

wondering still, where did you go


I asked around, nopony talked

with sad faces, away they walked


I didn't Know, I wondered why

what had I said, to make them cry


Suddenly I heard, a tune I knew

I heard it before, while I lived with you


I saw a glimmer, a spark of hope

at the top, of the grassy slope


It came from there, without a doubt

the song I heard, the town throughout


The sound you played, it beckoned to me

I followed it gladly, filled with glee


But as I reached, the top of this hill

my happiness had, all but it's fill


Sadness now came, in roaring seas

and weeping now, I fell to my knees


For at the top, where your music would boom

I found you sleeping, in your musical tomb


Kneeling here, for you I cry

still I wonder, How, when, and why


Now as your song, comes to a close

it stops for a moment, then again it goes


It made me realize, with the hint of a grin

you're alive in my heart, and the music therein


It matters not, What, Why, or when

but rather this moment, and what's done within


So I'll stand now, stand by your side

the reach of our friendship, death cannot divide


I'll pull out my cello, we'll play a duet

the likes of which, none have heard yet


You with your beat, and me with my string

together we'll make, this sad world sing


We'll take their song, so sorry and sad

we'll take it now, and make it glad


We'll fill it full, with a happy cheer

we'll show the world, there's nothing to fear


We'll play together, just you and I

a final duet, as a lasting goodbye


Goodbye to your body, but not your soul

it survives through my heart, keeping it whole


Now I'm not sad, I cannot lie

I'm just so happy, that now I cry


For Deep down, inside I know

through my music, your soul will flow


I play for you now, and with you forever

when next I'm alone, shall be never


For together we are, our music now one

with taut strings, and records spun.

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I have a bit of mixed feelings about this poem, as in I like it and hate it at the same time.
But, I think it's just the fact that it doesn't seen to flow right if you don't read it in Octavia's accent.
Maybe it's that I had to change my writing style for this piece.
Or maybe it's just all the big words I had to use.

Either way,
Let me know what you think...


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Edited by The Temporal Twins
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Some will wright and some will draw, 

some with hand or hoof or paw.

 

To all their craft, a skill within,

their hearts a home, their art therein.



-Temporal Twins

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