fan fiction Twilight's Best Friend

[Blueshift 26]

I know many of you will have read this, but for those who havn't, may I present my Twilight Sparkle vs Crappy Hasbro Recolour smackdown fic!

 

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/5708/

 

Based on the lazy Hasbro recolour of Twilight Sparkle. One dark and stormy night, Twilight Sparkle is visited by a strange pony. But this pony knows a lot about Twilight Sparkle; in fact, she might just be Twilight's number one fan. And that couldn't be a bad thing, right?

 

[Kodiak 431]

Wow, I've just gotten past the first chapter and you've got me hooked. I especially liked how you notioned that there's no such thing as "murder" in Equestria; that it was just something make-believe. There were a few misspellings and puctuation errors that I noticed, but it didn't take away from the feel of the story. Great job with this!

[Blueshift 26]

Wow, I've just gotten past the first chapter and you've got me hooked. I especially liked how you notioned that there's no such thing as "murder" in Equestria; that it was just something make-believe. There were a few misspellings and puctuation errors that I noticed, but it didn't take away from the feel of the story. Great job with this!

Thanks. If you could maybe pm any errors I'd be grateful, I couldn't find any after a sweep with Word and reading through it several times, but then my mind tends to fill in what the story SHOULD be rather than what it IS when I read my own work!

 

Do remember though I am British so use British spelling!

Edited January 23, 2012 by Blueshift

[Kyreth 193]

I love the sound of this! I'll read it all tonight.

 

Yay British spelling! Haven't seen that in a fanfic for a while.

[Kodiak 431]

Thanks. If you could maybe pm any errors I'd be grateful, I couldn't find any after a sweep with Word and reading through it several times, but then my mind tends to fill in what the story SHOULD be rather than what it IS when I read my own work!

 

Do remember though I am British so use British spelling!

 

No prob

[Shankveld 4,945]

Sounds awesome! Definitely going to read this when I have time (: ~

[Blueshift 26]

Sounds awesome! Definitely going to read this when I have time (: ~

Woop woop!