(Critique? :3)Knocked-out Showmare Digital Art

[Leafeon 2,702]

Well, I haven't actually gotten any art done in a while. So this. Which I actually think is quite good.

 

If you are nice.

 

As said in title, thoughts and critique? And uhm... compliments are nice too.

Edited January 26, 2013 by Firebolt

[The Soldier 2,044]

I don't see any blood or bruises, I'm suggesting she got knocked out by some Applejack Daniel's Apple Cider Wine? Then, again, I see no wine bottle or whatsoever.

 

The illumination is good. That's all I can say. But how many eyelashes are on a mare's eyes when they're close again?

[Leafeon 2,702]

I don't see any blood or bruises, I'm suggesting she got knocked out by some Applejack Daniel's Apple Cider Wine? Then, again, I see no wine bottle or whatsoever.

 

The illumination is good. That's all I can say. But how many eyelashes are on a mare's eyes when they're close again?

I said "If the punch smells funny, don't drink it." No one listens to me.

 

This isn't supposed to be a grimdark pic. It's just random.

 

And what do you mean by eyelashes on a closed eye? I wasn't trying for show accuracy there, in fact, I was going to give her more.

[The Soldier 2,044]

As much as it's hard  to explain, I'll show you this instead:

They have 3 eyelashes on each eye when closed. You put four eyelashes on Trixie. But, seeing you weren't going for accuracy, I'm just guessing I'm being a jackass. If you need me, I'll be riding down a hill on a cart with Johnny Knoxville.

[Sensuna 138]

I like it! especially what you did to the hair it's wonderfull also what are these lighter spots? ifyou know what I mean the dots

It adds something extra but is there any use for them I mean like can it be called something?

[Leafeon 2,702]

I like it! especially what you did to the hair it's wonderfull also what are these lighter spots? ifyou know what I mean the dots

It adds something extra but is there any use for them I mean like can it be called something?

Well, they are the stars. I forgot to add the gaussian blur filter. That's why they look so non glowy.

 

Also, thanks! The hair was actually a pain, so I appreciate the compliment!

[Sensuna 138]

Well, they are the stars. I forgot to add the gaussian blur filter. That's why they look so non glowy.

 

Also, thanks! The hair was actually a pain, so I appreciate the compliment!

Don't tell me the eyes and the hair are the things I waste the most time on when drawing it's just nice that it's a bit frizzeled

[Leafeon 2,702]

Don't tell me the eyes and the hair are the things I waste the most time on when drawing it's just nice that it's a bit frizzeled

The hardest thing for me is just eye placement, eyes themselves are quite easy to do, but placing them is what always seems to screw me over.

[Shaky Novel 72]

Amazing! The only thing that I can think of is that it's a bit dark, but that was probrably the point, soo meh. I've got nothing else to say but to keep up the good work. 

[Concord 1,982]

Hello!

 

Oh wow! This is great! I just love the boost you gave to her mane. I love it!

 

Now, what's bugging me a little, is the horn. The horn looks as if it would start from the side of her head. It may be a tad to long, but i'm not complaining about that, because it looks good

 

Awesome work! Need more!

[Leafeon 2,702]

Hello!

 

Oh wow! This is great! I just love the boost you gave to her mane. I love it!

 

Now, what's bugging me a little, is the horn. The horn looks as if it would start from the side of her head. It may be a tad to long, but i'm not complaining about that, because it looks good

 

Awesome work! Need more!

The hair is longer therefore the horn needs to be longer... :U I'm working on a cover for a song right now, so yea.

 

Amazing! The only thing that I can think of is that it's a bit dark, but that was probrably the point, soo meh. I've got nothing else to say but to keep up the good work. 

Yes, that is the point. It looked odd without darkness.

[Sensuna 138]

You made the picture darker? I swear I could see the grass much better yesterday when I saw the picture I was drunk but I don't think so :x

[Leafeon 2,702]

You made the picture darker? I swear I could see the grass much better yesterday when I saw the picture I was drunk but I don't think so :x

Nope. Doing such a thing would mean re-uploading the deviant art image. Which is stupid, and my watchers really hate the fact I do that so much.