Couple <3 OCxOC

[Sensuna 138]

Ok well here is another drawing of me and today I got something special for you guys

I made an OCxOC
So this is an Shooting Star (My oc)xThunder Star (Yea I know coincidence, Friends OC)

So I just wanted to have some fun and this was born
It was hard for me to do it since it was the first drawing of me ever with 2 ponies on it instead of 1
And I really want critique

What I used: Mouse, Paint tool Sai

That's all and remember Enlarge is win

Still not entirely happy but I'm never entirely happy and I'm pretty exhausted... 
 

Edited February 9, 2013 by Sensuna

[ParsoOfEquestria 1,490]

I'd say that her right eye is the same colour as her coat and that Thunder Star has sort of a rape face going on XD, but its good, i like the whole wing over shoulder thing

[Sensuna 138]

I'd say that her right eye is the same colour as her coat and that Thunder Star has sort of a rape face going on XD, but its good, i like the whole wing over shoulder thing

haha, thanks for the comment and he wouldn't do that his personality happens to be kinda dark and sometimes he acts douchery (His OC I mean) That's why

[Fanglore 141]

very nice.   especially for your first try with more then one pony. 

 

ok now for the critic... shooting star is the only one with a shadow. if you look below thunder star you see that he is missing his shadow... unless he is a ghost then its ok

[Sensuna 138]

very nice.   especially for your first try with more then one pony. 

 

ok now for the critic... shooting star is the only one with a shadow. if you look below thunder star you see that he is missing his shadow... unless he is a ghost then its ok

I noticed that just now I'm going to fix it right now but thanks for the critique like always and the kind comment (Ugh limit of characters)

[DiscordAnarchy 770]

I enjoy the coloring contrast between the two of them but more importantly is that you were able to get the expressions down very  well. I don't see him having rape-face, more of a very serious protective face.

[PonyEcho 1,610]

awww so cute 

 

Its so nice to see OCxOC as its tons better then any other (apart from UPS)

 

anyway its a  good drawing (wow you did that with a mouse) would kind have liked to see some love from the stallion tho

Edited February 9, 2013 by PonyEcho

[Shaky Novel 72]

Aw, that's really cute. I love how your OC is all shy and... just just... d'aww. /)^3^(\ However, I'm impressed with your work. It's dificullt to draw with a mouse, but you seem yo handle it just great.

[Sensuna 138]

awww so cute 

 

Its so nice to see OCxOC as its tons better then any other (apart from UPS)

 

anyway its a  good drawing (wow you did that with a mouse) would kind have liked to see some love from the stallion tho

I just wanted to let him be the kind of "cool" guy like actually his personality is 

 

Aw, that's really cute. I love how your OC is all shy and... just just... d'aww. /)^3^(\ However, I'm impressed with your work. It's dificullt to draw with a mouse, but you seem yo handle it just great.

Thanks a lot

I don't know why but mouse is just a thing that fits me well

 

 

I enjoy the coloring contrast between the two of them but more importantly is that you were able to get the expressions down very  well. I don't see him having rape-face, more of a very serious protective face.

Thanks for the comment

[kirbyboi 588]

This is a super cute drawing! D'aaaw...

 

Just make Thunder Star a bit taller, and a little work on the wing. But other then that, it's just simply adorable! Also, a suggestion is to maybe have your OC have green eyes, or another color besides that one. It'll make her stand out a bit more! But it's really good!

[Sensuna 138]

This is a super cute drawing! D'aaaw...

 

Just make Thunder Star a bit taller, and a little work on the wing. But other then that, it's just simply adorable! Also, a suggestion is to maybe have your OC have green eyes, or another color besides that one. It'll make her stand out a bit more! But it's really good!

I actually really like the idea of green colored eyes since green colored eyes are my favorite color of eyes you have I might try that thanks!

 

This is a super cute drawing! D'aaaw...

 

Just make Thunder Star a bit taller, and a little work on the wing. But other then that, it's just simply adorable! Also, a suggestion is to maybe have your OC have green eyes, or another color besides that one. It'll make her stand out a bit more! But it's really good!

Is it better now with green eyes? I wonder or just 1 eye green and the other blue? what you think 

 

(bla bla bla not enough characters)

[kirbyboi 588]

I actually really like the idea of green colored eyes since green colored eyes are my favorite color of eyes you have I might try that thanks!

 

Is it better now with green eyes? I wonder or just 1 eye green and the other blue? what you think 

 

(bla bla bla not enough characters)

 

 

yup! Shooting Star looks cute! The eyes before were cool, but I wanted you to try a different color from her coat. But awesome job! :3 Your a really good artist, and I love your style of drawing ponies!

[Sensuna 138]

yup! Shooting Star looks cute! The eyes before were cool, but I wanted you to try a different color from her coat. But awesome job! :3 Your a really good artist, and I love your style of drawing ponies!

Thanks again but I gonna leave the eyes blue I think the green clashes to much and I'm not that good at drawing ponies there are much better artists aroundhere