Slender Pony Animation (Slender Mare)

[bronyanimstudios 63]

I guess this goes here :I I wanted to show this animation I have been working on. I am pretty impressed with myself on how it came out.

 

 

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[Naught Important 434]

Very short, well animated, but there really isn't much to it. Random Applejack and Applebloom in a forest... I'm personally someone who focuses more on story than other things, so this isn't something I enjoyed really. If I did it, I would have done the same thing, but by using comic-slides and a voice acter so I could put more into the animation. That's just me, though.

Edited March 16, 2013 by Cobalt Flytrap

[SandmanTheTerrible 27]

"he's standing right behind me ain't" . you could come up with a storyline and make it into a full length video(if you want to ). that was pretty good, i definetly couldn't do anything like that

[Derpylicious Derpy 38]

Well....the animation is too short......but i like it....But the thing that dosen't make sense i how the heck did Applejack and Applebloom get lost in a forest...work on that to get more views and likes...

Edited March 16, 2013 by Pinkie Pie Disaster

[bronyanimstudios 63]

 

Very short, well animated, but there really isn't much to it. Random Applejack and Applebloom in a forest... I'm personally someone who focuses more on story than other things, so this isn't something I enjoyed really. If I did it, I would have done the same thing, but by using comic-slides and a voice acter so I could put more into the animation. That's just me, though.

 

thanks for the tips

To me? A short animation, random Applejack and Applebloom lost in a forest, then slendercolt comes and kills them. I would suggest working on an animation that is at least 5 minutes long.

to animate a 5 minute clip, would take months to do for one Animator...that is why there are very few things like that on youtube. Double Rainboom with dozens of Animators are taking months for just a 20 minutes episode. It is incredibly impractical to make such long animations. However I do agree that this was a very short animation, I will try to make them longer in the future.

 

"he's standing right behind me ain't" . you could come up with a storyline and make it into a full length video(if you want to ). that was pretty good, i definetly couldn't do anything like that

 

Thank you

Well....the animation is too short......but i like it....But the thing that dosen't make sense i how the heck did Applejack and Applebloom get lost in a forest...work on that to get more views and likes...

well the idea with animators like this, is it is based off of a comic strip. So there is really no background story with this, but I might add background stories in the future.

[RainBoomEffect 0]

I like short, random, funny animations. You should make more or maybe even extend this one and make it another 30 secs longer. A good idea for extending it would be to have Apple Bloom to say that the Slendermare is there and AJ trying to show that there isn't and then that happens.

[WindsweptFrog 52]

Well i think it really rather well animated!! my only issue is that i just dont think its very creepy, while i did enjoy it, the applejack line was quite funny i just feel slender mare could have looked creeper, like if she stood on her back legs? dont quite know if that would work tho

[Windwaker 194]

Wow! You did great! Now, where is the first episode of my little time lord? JK! And srsly, slender mare? That's not a really original idea!

[bronyanimstudios 63]

I like short, random, funny animations. You should make more or maybe even extend this one and make it another 30 secs longer. A good idea for extending it would be to have Apple Bloom to say that the Slendermare is there and AJ trying to show that there isn't and then that happens.

I might do that I have a few other things I have to do before I redo this, but I might do that I want to finish my first PMV before I do that though