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the changeling backed up putting a hoof on his shoulder, "her don't even think like that, I'm sure your parents are going to be just fine at least your parents will be better off then the unicorns. Besides the life of a changeling isn't so bad you'll like it." This was the first time she'd actually took a good look at his face and she noticed his sad eyes and something plucked inside her but she only shook it off and continued walking, "c'mon we need to make a shelter."

 

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At the mention of "the unicorn" she looked over at the two when they had finished talking she put words infront of Cypriss that said 'what about my parents?' her expression was that of anticipation when the changeling turned her head in the ponies direction. Cypriss had a bit of shock on her face as her jaw went slack before she whipped around and went back to trudging through the brush saying, "nothing."

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"My parents are dead. They died when I was a teen when the changelings invaded my clan." He said dryly. Looking over, he saw genuine concern in her eyes. This made him feel a little better.

 

"I don't know. It feels wring to manipulate and drain ponies." He chuckled humorlessly.

 

"Not like I got a say in the matter though." With a heavy sigh, he began collecting sticks from the ground.

 

"Might as well rest. Nothing we can do at night. We can pick up securing my slavery in the morning."


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Corkscrew begins to turn red at the mention of a date in Canterlot. "Well....Um....you see....I.....have business...yea...business to take care of with the Princess...."

Corkscrew was hoping that he didn't have to answer that question directly. He was just hoping that Celestia would be able to fix him, or at least guide him to a way to restore himself and Little Fire to normal.

 

"Well, we might as well fly there, I mean we all have wings, right."

 

And with that, Corkscrew left in the direction of Canterlot Castle, Hopeing that his friends were behind him.

 

"I just hope it's Celestia that's meeting me, and not the whole guard"

 

He approched the damaged wing of the castle, landing in the hole that he had made just a few days before. He could see Celestia waiting in the room for him, He was glad that we got there before everypony, for he had questions to ask her in private.

 

"I...I'm so sorry for what I have done. I've damaged your beatuful home, made a fool out of myself, and almost got my firends hurt or killed. I deserve what ever punishment you deem."

 

Princess Celestia

"I know why you've come. I'm glad that you finaly realized that help is aviable. You are a unique case to say the least. Only one other pony has known what you have gone thourgh, and I have summed her here to try to help you."

@,

 

Twilight and Little Fire

 

After Fire ask the question Corkscrew give a half answer to Fire. Then Corkscrew left to the castle Fire was ran he picked up pookie and he put pookie in Fluttershy bag and he try to fly but he couldn't got off the ground. Twilight saw Fire trying to fly but he couldn't she walk up to him and said  " I see you can't fly do you need help " Twilight smile. Fire look at her " Big Brother left me here way he did that" he ask Twilight. She tell him " He think you can fly I see you can't fly at all." Fire tell her " I hurt my left wing a year ago and the doctor tell me and big brother I well never fly a again" Fire said it in a sand tone.

 

Twilight put her hoof on Fire shoulder and tell him " Is ok lets go to Canterlot and see your Big Brother is doing there and you can yell at him to" Twilight stared to laugh softly. She tell him " Lets go now" she tell Fire he nodded and he jump a her back. She open her wing and stared to flying to Canterlot.

 

When they got there it look like Corkscrew was talking to Princess Celestia Twilight walk to them. But Fire ran to Corkscrew and kick him on the hoof " Why did you left me behind you know I can't fly at all" Fire said in a angry tone.

 

Princess Luna

 

Princess Luna open the doors to enter the room " Yes Big Sister did you summed me" Luna enter. Twilight look at Luna " Hello Princess Luna" she smile at her. Luna smile and said " You can call me Luna we broth are Princess now." Twilight smile at Luna and said " Yes Luna."  Princess Luna look back to Celestia " What you need for me" after she said that she look at Corkscrew only two words come out of her mouth " oh you" Luna said in a unhappy tone.

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When they got there it look like Corkscrew was talking to Princess Celestia Twilight walk to them. But Fire ran to Corkscrew and kick him on the hoof " Why did you left me behind you know I can't fly at all" Fire said in a angry tone.

 

Corkscrew

"I'm sorry. I kind of forgot what with this big mess going on. I needed to see the princess as soon as possible to figure out what's going on with me. I'll make it up to you, I'll take you for Ice Cream and Hay shakes when this is over. I promis."

 

Corkscrew's attention went back to the Princess.

 

"Isn't there some spell that you could do to fix me and little Fire there?"

 

Just then, Luna entered the room.

 

 

 

Princess Luna Princess Luna open the doors to enter the room " Yes Big Sister did you summed me" Luna enter. Twilight look at Luna " Hello Princess Luna" she smile at her. Luna smile and said " You can call me Luna we broth are Princess now." Twilight smile at Luna and said " Yes Luna." Princess Luna look back to Celestia " What you need for me" after she said that she look at Corkscrew only two words come out of her mouth " oh you" Luna said in a unhappy tone.

 

"Why hello to you too!" Corkscrew said in an upset tone. "All I want is my life back. I want to be able to feel love again. To know happyness. I can still feel darkness in me. All I want is fixed!"

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Corkscrew

"I'm sorry. I kind of forgot what with this big mess going on. I needed to see the princess as soon as possible to figure out what's going on with me. I'll make it up to you, I'll take you for Ice Cream and Hay shakes when this is over. I promis."

 

Corkscrew's attention went back to the Princess.

 

"Isn't there some spell that you could do to fix me and little Fire there?"

 

Just then, Luna entered the room.

 

 

 

 

@,

 

Little Fire

 

Fire was so happy he was going to get some Ice Cream and  Hay Shakes with is Big Brother. Little Fire look at is Brother close and some kind of memory came to him. " Corkscrew you not evil you are a good pony" and then the memory was gone.

 

Fire started to think " What was that Big Brother look Evil why was he evil" Fire said in a low tone. Making sure no there hard him.

 

"Why hello to you too!" Corkscrew said in an upset tone. "All I want is my life back. I want to be able to feel love again. To know happyness. I can still feel darkness in me. All I want is fixed!"

 

Princess Luna

 

Luna look at Corkscrew and she smile at him " Sorry want I said I got out of a talk of well ponies I all I well say."

 

Luna smile at the Fire she true her head back to Corkscrew " I can show you how to control your magic and the darkness in you. But to get your emotions back that I can't help you at all. That why you have a temporary Brother and your friends to help you there."

 

Luna said it in a tone that all ponies understand.

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Thankful that the town was quieter again, Neon nodded to Music. She pointed past Music, "A nice pony said that the town hall is over there, around the corner."
She began to walk in the direction the yellow pony had given her, hoping to see the town hall appear around the bend as she went.

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Music smile to Neon " Good lets go to Town Hall Neon and you can start to settle in Ponyville" Music said to Neon. They walk to the corner and they saw Town Hall Music ran to the building she look back to Neon " Neon lets go and make your new live here" Music smile.

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Princess Luna Luna look at Corkscrew and she smile at him " Sorry want I said I got out of a talk of well ponies I all I well say." Luna smile at the Fire she true her head back to Corkscrew " I can show you how to control your magic and the darkness in you. But to get your emotions back that I can't help you at all. That why you have a temporary Brother and your friends to help you there." Luna said it in a tone that all ponies understand.

 

Corkscrew

Corkscrew looked to Luna with a look of uncertainty. "You said control the darkness inside me. Dose that mean that it is a burden that I must live with forever?"

 

Corkscrew looked for Little Fire. "I guess you just don't stop helping me, do you?" As he picked up Little Fire and put him on his back

 

"Twilight, I guess I'm getting trained by the best," he laughed and than winked at Celestia jokingly. "After I'm done, I'm going to go after Nexis. Could you do me a favor though? When Fluttershy gets here, tell her that I lo....that I...That I made it here save and sound."

 

Corkscrew turned around and looked at Little Fire on his back. "What do you say? You ready to see your big brother screw up some magic and make a fool out of himself?"


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Corkscrew looked to Luna with a look of uncertainty. "You said control the darkness inside me. Dose that mean that it is a burden that I must live with forever?"

 

Corkscrew looked for Little Fire. "I guess you just don't stop helping me, do you?" As he picked up Little Fire and put him on his back

 

"Twilight, I guess I'm getting trained by the best," he laughed and than winked at Celestia jokingly. "After I'm done, I'm going to go after Nexis. Could you do me a favor though? When Fluttershy gets here, tell her that I lo....that I...That I made it here save and sound."

 

Corkscrew turned around and looked at Little Fire on his back. "What do you say? You ready to see your big brother screw up some magic and make a fool out of himself?"

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Princess Luna

 

Luna look at Corkscrew and tell him " Yes you do sorry but when you become Nightmare . All the anger and sadness in you become more powerful and the only thing you think is revenge. At less you stop before you regret something you will have done" Luna tell him. " Sorry I can't put you back to normal Sorry but me or my sister can't help you there." Luna said.

 

Little Fire and Twilight

 

Little Fire tilt his head to the right looking confused what Corkscrew said to him. Fire ask him ' What I have done the only thing I did is give you a big huge. And said good luck to you" Fire still confused.

 

Twilight just laugh what Fire said " Is ok Fire you do not need to know right now" Twilight pet Fire on his head. " At lest you and your Big Brother will be in some training" She smile.

 

Fire ask " Why I training to I do not have magic I not a unicorn I a pegisai" he ask her.

 

Twilight said " Well you need to fly to keep up with your Big Brother when he is flying" Twilight tell him.

 

" Oh yes I will like to fly and me and my Big Brother can fly together we can buy food and Toys too" Fire said in a happy tone. Then Fire give Corkscrew a big huge being still on his back.

 

Twilight said to Corkscrew "I do not mind to help you with your magic but I not the best if you need to know, I think Celestia know more magic I do" Twilight said to him.

 

Fire look at Corkscrew " You well not make a fool of your self You are so all some Big Brother you be so cool doing lots of magic" Fire said in a excited tone. " But do not forget your promise you tell me, we are going to get me some Ice cream do you remember" Fire said to him.

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Princess Luna Luna look at Corkscrew and tell him " Yes you do sorry but when you become Nightmare . All the anger and sadness in you become more powerful and the only thing you think is revenge. At less you stop before you regret something you will have done" Luna tell him. " Sorry I can't put you back to normal Sorry but me or my sister can't help you there." Luna said. Little Fire and Twilight Little Fire tilt his head to the right looking confused what Corkscrew said to him. Fire ask him ' What I have done the only thing I did is give you a big huge. And said good luck to you" Fire still confused. Twilight just laugh what Fire said " Is ok Fire you do not need to know right now" Twilight pet Fire on his head. " At lest you and your Big Brother will be in some training" She smile. Fire ask " Why I training to I do not have magic I not a unicorn I a pegisai" he ask her. Twilight said " Well you need to fly to keep up with your Big Brother when he is flying" Twilight tell him. " Oh yes I will like to fly and me and my Big Brother can fly together we can buy food and Toys too" Fire said in a happy tone. Then Fire give Corkscrew a big huge being still on his back. Twilight said to Corkscrew "I do not mind to help you with your magic but I not the best if you need to know, I think Celestia know more magic I do" Twilight said to him. Fire look at Corkscrew " You well not make a fool of your self You are so all some Big Brother you be so cool doing lots of magic" Fire said in a excited tone. " But do not forget your promise you tell me, we are going to get me some Ice cream do you remember" Fire said to him.

 

Corkscrew

"Well, I guess we should get started, but first I'm going to run to the Ice Cream.."

 

Princess Celestia

"I don't think so. You have a responsibility, and the sooner you get that darkness controlled in you, the better. For Equestria's sake. I shall have some brought up from the castle kitchen. Now you two get two work. Twilight, could you help Luna for me. I think it's time you two bonded."

 

Corkscrew

"Lead the way your highness, The quicker we do this, the better. My friend is in extreame danger, and I need to go help him....After your training of course."


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"Well, I guess we should get started, but first I'm going to run to the Ice Cream.."

 

Princess Celestia

"I don't think so. You have a responsibility, and the sooner you get that darkness controlled in you, the better. For Equestria's sake. I shall have some brought up from the castle kitchen. Now you two get two work. Twilight, could you help Luna for me. I think it's time you two bonded."

 

Corkscrew

"Lead the way your highness, The quicker we do this, the better. My friend is in extreame danger, and I need to go help him....After your training of course."

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Little Fire

 

Fire look at Corkscrew and started to complain " I want Ice Cream form the Ice Cream shop" He look at Corkscrew angry.

 

Twilight, Little Fire and Luna

 

Twilight walk to Fire and tell him " Your brother need to train to get better with his magic" she tell him.

" But you getting Ice Cream form the caster and it is more better then the shop" Twilight trying to make him happy.

 

Fire look at Twilight " Really it is better then the shop" He ask.

 

She said " Yes it is I promise."

 

Fire jump in Corkscrew and give him a hug " Big Brother are we going to eat the Ice Cream together are we" He look at Corkscrew with is sad little eyes.

 

Twilight look at Luna shrug her shoulders and gust walk to door.  Twilight look at Celestia and tell her yes to her and she walk to, Twilight, Fire, Luna and Corkscrew all walk out of the room where Celestia was in. They where walking for five minutes until they got to a room Luna open the door and they walk in side to room. Luna look at all of them " This were we well do your training in Corkscrew we will teach you how to control your anger and sadness inside you. And teach you some magic to" Luna tell him.

 

Twilight look at Fire and tell him " And when he is not in training he well train you how to fly."

 

Fire look at Corkscrew " Brother did you do some thing bad that why you need to train you to control you anger. Are you mad with some pony" He said in worried tone. And look at Twilight " I be happy if my brother is fine and he dose not mind to teaching me how to fly but how can I my wing is still hurts" he Said. 

 

Twilight said " No worried I can heal your wing and then you can fly" Twilight give him nothing to worried about.

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Corkscrew

 

 

Fire look at Corkscrew " Brother did you do some thing bad that why you need to train you to control you anger. Are you mad with some pony" He said in worried tone. And look at Twilight " I be happy if my brother is fine and he dose not mind to teaching me how to fly but how can I my wing is still hurts" he Said.

 

Corkscrew looked down in shame, thankful that Fire had forgotten what he had done. "I...I'd rather not talk about it, but isn't it great, you'll be able to fly again. We'll be able to fly together for the first time."

 

The shame of what he had done just a few days before was starting to well up inside Corkscrew. He knew that Little Fire was the only thing keeping him from loosing it. His eye began to twitch and with no Fluttershy around, he grabbed Little Fire and began hugging him until his sadness and anger went away for the time hoping that Luna and Twilight had not noticed the reason why.


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Neon chuckled to herself as the giddy blue pony ran into the Town Hall. It began to dawn on her that she really was making an entirely new life here, and there was going to be a lot of bumps along the road.

 

Total Neon began to edge her way over to the hall to where Music was waiting for her. The cylindrical building loomed over her like a mountain, she was but a young pony in it's shadow. She made her way through the doors and looked for a helpful-looking pony to show her the way to her new home.

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Corkscrew looked down in shame, thankful that Fire had forgotten what he had done. "I...I'd rather not talk about it, but isn't it great, you'll be able to fly again. We'll be able to fly together for the first time."

 

 

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Little Fire

 

Little Fire look at Corkscrew he notice his face expression looking sand Fire walk up to him " Brother is ok you do not need to be sand I here to give you some support" Fire was hoping it well make him happy.

Not knowing why he is so sand about.

 

Corkscrew

 

The shame of what he had done just a few days before was starting to well up inside Corkscrew. He knew that Little Fire was the only thing keeping him from loosing it. His eye began to twitch and with no Fluttershy around, he grabbed Little Fire and began hugging him until his sadness and anger went away for the time hoping that Luna and Twilight had not noticed the reason why.

 

Little Fire

 

Suddenly Corkscrew just grab Fire, he look at Corkscrew wondering why he is hugging him a little tight. Fire felt all Corkscrew sadness and anger coming form Corkscrew. Little Fire started to cry but Fire do not know why he started to cry but it felt he have to. Fire gust started to hug him back, when hugging him Fire tell him " I so sorry Big Brother I do not know why I did to make you so sand in the inside and make you mad to, but I be a good clot. To make you happy again" Fire said in him sad tone.

 

Twilight

 

Twilight was looking around the room on till she saw Corkscrew and Fire hugging each other. And she notice Fire wings was fading a little bit and come back to normal. Twilight was confused why it was doing that and why Fire was crying but didn't ask Corkscrew knowing he may need Fire to give him a big hug. Or may Fire need it a big brother hug.

 

But why Fire wings was fading Twilight thought to herself but she was looking at them. Fire wings was still fading and then they just stop fading and stood normal. She was hoping nothing was happening to Fire Twilight look at Corkscrew it look like he was crying and the same time angry to. And he was come down and he was getting happy fore now.

 

Neon chuckled to herself as the giddy blue pony ran into the Town Hall. It began to dawn on her that she really was making an entirely new life here, and there was going to be a lot of bumps along the road.

 

Total Neon began to edge her way over to the hall to where Music was waiting for her. The cylindrical building loomed over her like a mountain, she was but a young pony in it's shadow. She made her way through the doors and looked for a helpful-looking pony to show her the way to her new home.

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Music was waiting for Neon to come to Town Hall and then when Neon got to her, Neon open the door.

Neon enter to room and Music did to, Music look at Neon  it look like she was scared to ask for help. Music walk to ponies and ask then for help. And one pony walk to her and said he can help them Music grape Neon and they walk to a desk were a pony was siting at.

 

Music tell the pony and thank him and they look at the pony at the desk Music tell Neon " Well ask him he work here he may know were you my be living at" Music tell her.

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Neon nodded and turned to the stallion at the desk "Excuse me, I'd like to... well I'd like to know where my house is" she laughed nervously, the desk pony raised an eyebrow at her in response "I need a little more information than that ma'am." he stated.

Neon glimpsed at the walls of the town hall for a second, then back to the stallion. "I'm Total Neon, I bought a house in Ponyville a few weeks ago, I'm moving in today but I can't remember how to get there" She blushed and looked at her hooves.

 

"Do you have an address?" the town hall pony replied, Neon took a slip of paper from one of her luggage bags and read it to the stallion. He promptly took a map of Ponyville from under his desk and started drawing on it. He pointed between two points, "You're here, at the town hall," he began, moving his hoof along a road drawn in pen "You need to follow this road, until you get to here, and your house is on this street."

 

Total Neon sighed with relief, "Thanks for your help, I'll be on my way now." She took the map in her mouth, nodding to the desk pony, and nudged Music. "Fanks fuh ah yoh hehp Mu-" she dropped the map accidentally and blushed. Neon dragged the map along the ground with her hoof and put it into a luggage bag. "Thanks for all of your help Music, I'll be going off to my new house now. You'll be going to see your brother now I suppose?"

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Music was happy for Neon now Neon can go to her new home. When Neon tell her if she was going to see her brother Music thought for a minute and then said " I well going see my brother but I have a feeling you still need my help" Music then started to laugh.

 

Then Music look at Neon " Is not that easy to get rid of me Neon I well help you to the end In this case to your house. I am curious how your house looks like if you do not mind" Music ask her.  

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Neon smiled at Music, a little relieved. "Sure, you can come along if you like, I don't think my house will be very exciting right now though," she laughed "I haven't bought any furniture yet..."

 

Neon exited the Town Hall and took her map back out of her luggage, she stood outside the hall and started to get her bearings. After a few minutes, she started walking in what she hoped was the right direction.

Trotting along the path, a mite merrier now that she knew where her house was, Neon turned to Music. "So your brother lives here right? What does he do here?"

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Music smile at Neon and said " It know problem I can help you to get some furniture in your new home with your new life in Ponyville" Music said it with a smile and stared to laugh a little. 

 

When they where going to Neon new horse, Neon ask Music about her brother " Well yes he does live here my brother is a good no great Big Brother to have. He supported me to become a singer after I left to Music School and he left to Ponyviile  Month later I decided to see how he doing." Music smile thing of her Brother.

 

" Oh yes he work in a baking shop I think well that what my parents said to me" Music said to her. Music walking with Neon and Music ask her about her family " Well do you have a Brother or a Sister I was wondering" Music said.

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Little Fire Suddenly Corkscrew just grab Fire, he look at Corkscrew wondering why he is hugging him a little tight. Fire felt all Corkscrew sadness and anger coming form Corkscrew. Little Fire started to cry but Fire do not know why he started to cry but it felt he have to. Fire gust started to hug him back, when hugging him Fire tell him " I so sorry Big Brother I do not know why I did to make you so sand in the inside and make you mad to, but I be a good clot. To make you happy again" Fire said in him sad tone. Twilight Twilight was looking around the room on till she saw Corkscrew and Fire hugging each other. And she notice Fire wings was fading a little bit and come back to normal. Twilight was confused why it was doing that and why Fire was crying but didn't ask Corkscrew knowing he may need Fire to give him a big hug. Or may Fire need it a big brother hug. But why Fire wings was fading Twilight thought to herself but she was looking at them. Fire wings was still fading and then they just stop fading and stood normal. She was hoping nothing was happening to Fire Twilight look at Corkscrew it look like he was crying and the same time angry to. And he was come down and he was getting happy fore now.

 

Corkscrew

Corkscrew's emotions were starting to level out, though he was still clenching Little Fox.

 

"When this is all over, when I'm...We're fixed, I hope I can repay you. Having a little brother has made me the happiest I've been in a long time. Even if I'm an alicorn now, I hope that you'll always be by my side." as Corkscrew released young Fire.

 

"Princess Luna, I am ready for some basic magic training, but first I have one question. What is it you and your sister have planned for me? Am I going to be allowed to just go back to my life in Ponyville, or do you two have something else in mind?"


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Neon shook her head "I'm an only child, actually my parents weren't around very much either, so I'm not really close to anypony in my family." She looked up, watching a butterfly pass by, "it must be nice having a big brother there for you."

 

"As for the furniture, I don't have much money but I was thinking about looking in the newspaper for some second hand things." The ponies soon arrived at the house in a quiet neighborhood

 

No wonder it was cheap.

 

The house seemed to be constructed entirely of rotten wood, most of its windows were boarded up and the ones that weren't had barely any glass left. It looked as though the house had once been painted white, but the paint was chipping away leaving the building with more of a grey-brown look.

 

Neon sighed, "I guess this is the place!" A crow cawed and flew out from the attic window, a second later three more flew out with it. Total Neon groaned and started taking her luggage to the door.

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In one of the carriage of a train which was leaving for Ponyville stood Chroma, a 18 human year-old pony which was sitting in the dark, gloomy corner of the carriage." *Sigh* Why do I have to go to this lonely place called Ponyville..." Grunted Chroma to herself as she was looking clumsily around the entire surroundings.She was sent by her parents to look for her very own life and also to make a living out of it."Why...why now...why here...why not Canterlot..." Whispered Chroma and stared into space.She was starting to feel insane and often crying about it.She has been doing and questioning the same exact thing for almost the entire trip.Later, approximately around 5 minutes later, the conductor of the train shouted "All ponies leaving for Ponyville, please prepare your luggages and we will be arriving shortly.Chroma stood in silence for a couple of seconds like a pony who was frozen over a chunk of ice.She then stood up, started preparing her luggage and soon waited until further instruction.In a blink of an eye, she heard a loud screech and the train came to a complete stop, which threw her off her seat."So much for Economy Class" mumbled Chroma.She got up and soon disembark the lonesome train.

 

By the time she arrived there, all she saw was a kind and a rich-looking pony who was waiting to welcome her.


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Corkscrew's emotions were starting to level out, though he was still clenching Little Fox.

 

"When this is all over, when I'm...We're fixed, I hope I can repay you. Having a little brother has made me the happiest I've been in a long time. Even if I'm an alicorn now, I hope that you'll always be by my side." as Corkscrew released young Fire.

 

"Princess Luna, I am ready for some basic magic training, but first I have one question. What is it you and your sister have planned for me? Am I going to be allowed to just go back to my life in Ponyville, or do you two have something else in mind?"

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Little Fire

 

Little Fire wipe away his tears and look at Corkscrew he give him a confused look and Little Fire lite go of Corkscrew. Little Fire ask him " I not broken Brother" Fire tell him. " And you do not  have to repay me at all brother just be my brother and I all was well be by your side brother that way we are BROTHERS!!" Fire tell Corkscrew with a big smile.

 

Princess Luna

 

Luna look at Corkscrew and said to him " My big sister have some thing for you but she well not tell me at all you need to ask her your self Corkscrew" Luna tell him in her royal tone.

Luna look out side through the window and she turn her head to Corkscrew and said to him " If I have to choose I will put you back to normal but is end up to be my sister choice not mine" Luna said to him. Luna started to look serious at Corkscrew " Ok now to start your training and we answered your question we well start now" Luna put up a block. " I will throw the block to you and you have to catch it in mid air know worries I well not throw to hard to you" Luna tell him. 

 

 

Neon shook her head "I'm an only child, actually my parents weren't around very much either, so I'm not really close to anypony in my family." She looked up, watching a butterfly pass by, "it must be nice having a big brother there for you."

 

"As for the furniture, I don't have much money but I was thinking about looking in the newspaper for some second hand things." The ponies soon arrived at the house in a quiet neighborhood

 

No wonder it was cheap.

 

The house seemed to be constructed entirely of rotten wood, most of its windows were boarded up and the ones that weren't had barely any glass left. It looked as though the house had once been painted white, but the paint was chipping away leaving the building with more of a grey-brown look.

 

Neon sighed, "I guess this is the place!" A crow cawed and flew out from the attic window, a second later three more flew out with it. Total Neon groaned and started taking her luggage to the door.

 

Music Note

 

Music put her head down " Sorry I ask It must me lonely not to have your parents around to help you out" Music said in a sand tone. Music shake her head " Yes it is nice to have a Brother to help you out" Music smile.

 

When they got there Music was horrified how the house look when Neon said it was cheap. Then Music saw a crow just come out from a attic window Music look a Neon grabbing her luggage and put in next to the door. Music keeping look at the house and stared to think " I can not let Neon live here this house have to be fix or destroyed " Music thought to herself.

 

Music tired her head at Neon and tell her " NO YOU WELL NOT LIVE HERE AT ALL I DO NOT CARE HOW CHEAP IT WAS NO PONY SHOLD NOT LIVE LICK THIS" Music just exploded of anger. Music walk to her and said " You know what I going back there and going to order them to give you a new house or give me a house you can live in and it will be biter then this one " Music tell her with a anger tone.

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"No, no that won't do any good. I'm stupid really, I should have looked at the house first" She laughed, worriedly, "they won't let me have a new house, I signed a contract and everything..." She found her new house key and unlocked the door. It creaked as it opened, revealing a hallway leading into a kitchen. A staircase and a door were also present in the hallway. The house didn't look so bad on the inside, the floorboards weren't rotten at least. "Don't worry Music, I can get this place fixed up in time... " she dragged her luggage through the doorway and left it at the bottom of the stairs. She looked at the drab, grey walls. Some paint on the walls should get this place looking a little better, maybe even some murals... she thought to herself. She invited Music into the house and wandered into the kitchen.

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Music Note

 

She look at Neon telling her not to bother, she signed the contract. Music shook her head and put her hoof on face to. Music ask her " Why didn't you look before you buy a house Neon" Music said it in a annoyed tone.

 

Then Neon fine a key for the house and she opine it the door made a creaked sound. Music was not happy to hear that sound. And then Neon tell Music she can fix it up in time she look at her, and look at the house she look inside the house it  was not in bad shape to say less.

 

And then Neon dragged her luggage inside the house and Neon ask her to come in, Music was not excited to come in but she did. When she enter the house she saw the hallway and the staircase a door in the side of the hallway. Music walk to the kitchen were Neon was at,  the kitchen was in a ok shape. Music tell Neon " You are lucky the inside of the house is not in a bad shape."  

 

" I know you can't leave the house you sign a contract on it but you got me to help you out" Music tell her. " I can fine ponies to help you to fix this place up Neon and know worry I doing this because I see you as a friend. And friend help each other out" Music tell her with a smile.

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Fluttershy

 

It had taken a while before Fluttershy could find somepony to take care of all of her animals, but as soon as that was finished, she began her flight to Canterlot.  She knew that the princesses would be able to help her friend, but she had to be certain.

 

It seemed that she was too late to join Corkscrew in the throne room, so she paced outside, waiting for him to come out.  "Oh no!" she muttered to herself.  "What if he gets exiled for having the evil inside of him!  Will we ever be able to see him again?"  She tried calming herself, but it wasn't working.  All she could do was wait and worry.

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