nooneimportantwashere 705 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 (edited) 8tddutusiuzyeyezyeizydzydzdyydz Edited February 10, 2022 by nooneimportantwashere 16 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainblow H. Ash 5,091 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 Aw yeah, Lyra in da house! *Ahem* This picture is really good and I think you did a fine job on this! I'm no expert artist or anything, but I'd say your shading looks fine and the lighting makes sense on her, although it is a little rough around the edges. But like you said, this is your first time doing it like this... even then, it still looks really good. 2 #bringbackmerriwetherwillaims Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dashabel 381 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 Aww that's cute. Really nice. What program do you use to do this, I if may ask? I've only got an online drawing thing and it's good, but it's not AMAZING, whereas this is! 1 Signature banner made by Champion RD92 You can't have a rainbow without a little rain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quilava 1,290 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 Wow....speechless... Very good work on the shading. Loving the depiction of her face, very soft and friendly. My only critique, is that her neck seems a bit thick (barely noticed this until I started at each part). Other than that, you're colours came out wonderful, mane, coat, and eyes are just awesome. Wonderful job for first time shading~ Hope you post more stuff like this 1 ^~Signature by Me~^ ~^Click on the Image above for already made signatures/graphics^~ Request A Signature | Have a Question? | Signature Tips/Tricks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinx 2,292 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 I really like how this one turned out, but I'm biased towards Lyra. You've got a really good art style though, and I do like it. The shading feels a little off, but that will only improve from more practice. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiki 5,855 April 10, 2013 Share April 10, 2013 (edited) I'll have to agree with that the neck seems a bit thick in comparison to the rest of the body. Her left eye also seems a bit too far over. At least, I think so. I would have personally drawn it a bit larger to give off a less spaced apart feel. However, it's your own art style, so you can do whatever you want. It's not like there's rules or anything to follow. You art and art style are very pleasant. Good job. The shading on my tail is my favourite part of the shading. It kinda gave it texture as well. The shading on her legs is a bit iffy, though. Or, no, I shouldn't say that. It's just that her legs are rather cylindrical, so the shading transition would be a bit smoother. You've got a very clear-cut line on it, and it kinda makes her legs look as if they're angled or pointing out or something. But other than that, positively marvellous. Edited April 10, 2013 by Plummeh 2 You'll be entranced by me ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gear Head 25 April 11, 2013 Share April 11, 2013 Great job, shading is almost perfect. It was a really nice touch how you curved the cutie mark to conform to the muscles of her flank while moving A+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nooneimportantwashere 705 April 11, 2013 Author Share April 11, 2013 (edited) grsesgersegrgrsesegrgersgser Edited February 10, 2022 by nooneimportantwashere Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vexx3 1,540 April 11, 2013 Share April 11, 2013 That is quite an excellent drawing there! Apart from the neck, which has already been mentioned, it looks like you forgot the eyelashes. Also, looking through your dA, I can tell that you have been making drastic improvement. Keep up the great work! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalRose 636 April 11, 2013 Share April 11, 2013 Gorgeous! I love your style and aside from the aforementioned points you've done really really well! I'd like to see more of your work! ~DeviantArt~ ~ Taking commissions ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyLittlePonyTales 273 April 11, 2013 Share April 11, 2013 (edited) Woah, that's a neat pony! Do you take any commissions? I like Lyra is one of my favorite background ponies. I think this drawing is awesome and beautiful! Edited April 11, 2013 by MyLittlePonyTales "Reality is a lovely place, but I wouldn't want to live there." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeverAgain653289he32 285 April 11, 2013 Share April 11, 2013 What a great drawing for a first attempt with that style of shading and it still looks amazing! An overall great portrayal of best pony with an fantastic pose! The only thing that looks a bit off is the neck (As stated above), but I still would give it a fifteen out of fifteen lyres Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Dreams 1,893 May 5, 2013 Share May 5, 2013 This is great. For some reason she looks kind of masculine though. I think it's the lack of eyelashes.... But other than that, I can't find anything else to help with. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~PrincessLuna~ 53 May 5, 2013 Share May 5, 2013 I dont care what anyone else says, This is my favorite drawling I have seen so far in this forums :3 it is truly amazing! I would love to see a Luna ^^ Heyaa there! I hope you enjoy your stay at the forums! *Thanks to Doctor-Whooves for this picture (: ~Lunaa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SparkBrony 379 May 5, 2013 Share May 5, 2013 Wow, amazing job! I wish I could draw and shade like that... Anyway the lighting and shading is wonderful, even the way you did the text is awesome! Nice! ~SparkBrony The Brony Who Does Way Too Much Stuff! Check me out on Fimfiction! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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