Ponyhunt

[Reani 176]

A while ago, I had started writing this fanfic, but I stopped working on it because I started working on a sad fanfic. I stopped being sad and went back to writing the first one. Here it is. Ponyhunt: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/101674/ponyhunt

 

Summary: Pinkamena Diane Pie suddenly finds herself forced to be part of a blood-sport/snuff film known as Ponyhunt. While she is directed by an unknown stallion who goes by name of "The Director", she is forced to kill other ponies that are actually hunting her down for sport. With each and every kill she makes, the sport gets tougher and the blood runs quicker. Nopony will be left un-scarred once the cameras start rolling. (Mature rating due to blood.)

 

 

 

Oh do I have great plans for this.

[cd_solidsnake 122]

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGH I'D BE!

 

I love Manhunt, and when I saw the this entry I'd prayed for 5 seconds that this was about it.

 

HELL YEAH! I want this <3 I'll read this.

 

Someone make a videogame.

[Reani 176]

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGH I'D BE!

 

I love Manhunt, and when I saw the this entry I'd prayed for 5 seconds that this was about it.

 

HELL YEAH! I want this <3 I'll read this.

 

Someone make a videogame.

 

I hope you like it though. I think I done goofed. I don't think I did a good job for the first chapter. However, I am going to make it intense, and I'm also going to expand the story later on.

[Pariah164 83]

The preface makes me sad and brings shades of Cupcakes to mind, so I'll pass on reading. Good idea though, and I'm sure Bronies into that sort of thing will enjoy it immensely.

[Reani 176]

The preface makes me sad and brings shades of Cupcakes to mind, so I'll pass on reading. Good idea though, and I'm sure Bronies into that sort of thing will enjoy it immensely.

This Pinkamena Diane Pie is not like the infamous Cupcakes Pinkamena Diane Pie. This is just Pinkie Pie but with her mane straight. I didn't want to put in a psychotic Pinkie Pie because.... 

1. I don't much like a psychotic Pinkie Pie and...
2. It takes away the suspense.

Pinkie Pie is forced to do this to survive, this is not her doing it for pleasure like in Cupcakes. Plus, the executions are quick, so there is no heart wrenching scenes of utter torture. Just though I'd clear that up.

[Pariah164 83]

My original statement still stands. However, thank you for taking the time to explain the differences to me. Most authors would not do that.

[Blue Moon 6,341]

This Pinkamena Diane Pie is not like the infamous Cupcakes Pinkamena Diane Pie. This is just Pinkie Pie but with her mane straight. I didn't want to put in a psychotic Pinkie Pie because.... 

1. I don't much like a psychotic Pinkie Pie and...
2. It takes away the suspense.

Pinkie Pie is forced to do this to survive, this is not her doing it for pleasure like in Cupcakes. Plus, the executions are quick, so there is no heart wrenching scenes of utter torture. Just though I'd clear that up.

Well, technically, the whole premise is utter torture. Well, for Pinkie's sake. She is being tortured, just not in the way you would think. She is being forced to kill or otherwise be killed. That is torture for her. And if you want to make it more intense, you may want to make a scene of utter torture. Perhaps as an idea, Pinkie Pie's character can be changed due to the nature of the film and she slowly goes mad and becomes more violent the more she kills. That would be dark, but pretty interesting on a psychological level.

[cd_solidsnake 122]

Finally was able to read it.

 

As a fan of the Manhunt game, I have to say that I'm pleased with this first chapter. But the pacing is kind of fast. I mean, with the first kill you could have given more details and keep it more atmospheric. It was kind of fast the way it all happened.

 

Anyway, that's just a suggestion, and I definitely enjoyed this.

 

Note: I see some ponies saying that Pinkamena Diane Pie doesn't feel like Pinkie, but remember that she's in a situation she's not used to be. When the story progresses, we'll definitely see more of her while getting acustommed to this. 

[Reani 176]

Well, technically, the whole premise is utter torture. Well, for Pinkie's sake. She is being tortured, just not in the way you would think. She is being forced to kill or otherwise be killed. That is torture for her. And if you want to make it more intense, you may want to make a scene of utter torture. Perhaps as an idea, Pinkie Pie's character can be changed due to the nature of the film and she slowly goes mad and becomes more violent the more she kills. That would be dark, but pretty interesting on a psychological level.

 

Blue Moon is awesome moon, and are you psychic? I was already planning to make a challenge that would make Pinkie Pie snap and lose it, and I have the perfect challenge to do so. AND I was also actually going to add a scene of torture. You psychic man. 

 

 

 

Finally was able to read it.

 

As a fan of the Manhunt game, I have to say that I'm pleased with this first chapter. But the pacing is kind of fast. I mean, with the first kill you could have given more details and keep it more atmospheric. It was kind of fast the way it all happened.

 

Anyway, that's just a suggestion, and I definitely enjoyed this.

 

Note: I see some ponies saying that Pinkamena Diane Pie doesn't feel like Pinkie, but remember that she's in a situation she's not used to be. When the story progresses, we'll definitely see more of her while getting acustommed to this. 

 

And yeah... I know I rushed it. I couldn't help it. And about the not enough detail, I was originally trying to push for the T rating, but no dice. So, now that means more detail. Oh and yes.... we will see Pinkamena Diane Pie break from moral and actually get creative with her kills. 

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Blue Moon is awesome moon, and are you psychic? I was already planning to make a challenge that would make Pinkie Pie snap and lose it, and I have the perfect challenge to do so. AND I was also actually going to add a scene of torture. You psychic man. 

 

 

 

 

And yeah... I know I rushed it. I couldn't help it. And about the not enough detail, I was originally trying to push for the T rating, but no dice. So, now that means more detail. Oh and yes.... we will see Pinkamena Diane Pie break from moral and actually get creative with her kills. 

Well, it seemed like a good idea in my head and I guess we think a like. Anyway, I do have a suggestion for you. If you plan on doing what I said, you will need to add more character to Pinkie Pie. Give her more personality. And make sure to go into detail and slow down a tad.

 

 

And yes, I am psychic

[Reani 176]

Well, it seemed like a good idea in my head and I guess we think a like. Anyway, I do have a suggestion for you. If you plan on doing what I said, you will need to add more character to Pinkie Pie. Give her more personality. And make sure to go into detail and slow down a tad.

 

 

And yes, I am psychic

Now that it's rated Mature, I can go into great detail. And yeah.... I'll make sure to give her more personality and of course now I'm going to slow down (mainly because of the Mature rating). Thank you.

[cd_solidsnake 122]

Now that it's rated Mature, I can go into great detail. And yeah.... I'll make sure to give her more personality and of course now I'm going to slow down (mainly because of the Mature rating). Thank you.

 

It was mature the moment you described the "blood pool" and stuff 

 

Anyway, will definitely be checking the fanfic as it progresses. Remember to post a status update when you have a new chapter (befriended you just becase ).

[Blue Moon 6,341]

So, how is your story coming along? Not trying to rush you or anything, but just wanted to know. And don't rush because of this comment. Good writing can never come from rushing.

[Raiden21 804]

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I THOUGH I'D BE!

 

I love Manhunt, and when I saw the this entry I'd prayed for 5 seconds that this was about it.

 

HELL YEAH! I want this <3 I'll read this.

 

Someone make a videogame.

Dat profile pic! I see another fan of Solid Snake and the MGS series. I never played manhunt but I heard that it is a crazy game. If Ponyhunt is similar to the game Manhunt, then I wouldn't mind reading Ponyhunt and Manhunt,