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Liam inspected her back and noticed two blue markings near her shoulder blades, almost like wings. "Yeah, actually there are. By your shoulder blades there are two blue marks, almost like wings. They look natural, so I'm pretty sure they aren't tatoos, and I don't think it's any kind of rash, either.  I'm surprised I never noticed them yesterday.

Star shrugged. "Weird...I guess they're like my cutie mark." She said, standing up and turning to face Liam. "Some dream huh. It was...quite...eye opening." She said, walking around the bed. "Is it okay with you if I have a quick shower to wake myself up ?" She asked, glancing at the door before looking back at Liam with a smile...still very naked.


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Star shrugged. "Weird...I guess they're like my cutie mark." She said, standing up and turning to face Liam. "Some dream huh. It was...quite...eye opening." She said, walking around the bed. "Is it okay with you if I have a quick shower to wake myself up ?" She asked, glancing at the door before looking back at Liam with a smile...still very naked.

 

"Cutie mark? What's that?" When she stood up, Liam once again fell into the state he had spent much of last night in, staring at her naked form and blushing intensely. "Um... yeah, go ahead. Are you going to need my help walking again?" Liam got up, and at that point remembered that he was naked too, causing him to blush even more. What made him think that was a good idea?


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"Cutie mark? What's that?" When she stood up, Liam once again fell into the state he had spent much of last night in, staring at her naked form and blushing intensely. "Um... yeah, go ahead. Are you going to need my help walking again?" Liam got up, and at that point remembered that he was naked too, causing him to blush even more. What made him think that was a good idea?

Star shook her head. "No thank you, I can manage. And that's a cutie mark." She said, gesturing to the picture on her hip before walking out of Liam's room, using the wall for support. She opened the bathroom door and walked in. She turned on a bath and climbed in after the tub had filled, sighing as the hot water soaked through her hair.


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Star shook her head. "No thank you, I can manage. And that's a cutie mark." She said, gesturing to the picture on her hip before walking out of Liam's room, using the wall for support. She opened the bathroom door and walked in. She turned on a bath and climbed in after the tub had filled, sighing as the hot water soaked through her hair.

"Oh." Liam said plainly, still trying hard to focus on anything other than her nakedness. Ordinarily he never got dressed before taking a shower, but right now he was eager to relieve the awkwardness in any way possible, and getting dressed was probably a good start. He quickly put on his usual plain, unremarkable clothes, and went out into the kitchen to make breakfast. Usually he would just have a quick bowl of cereal or something, but he figured since he had a guest he should do something a little better than that. After thinking for a little while, he started making pancakes. It was relatively quick, and it was on the fairly short list of things he could actually cook well.


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Star finished her bath and drained the water before shakily walking into Liam's room. She grabbed her towel...which took a couple tries, but after managing to pick it up, she dried herself off and put it on like she had it the other day before walking down the hall towards the kitchen. "Hey...is there anything I can help with ?" She asked.


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Star finished her bath and drained the water before shakily walking into Liam's room. She grabbed her towel...which took a couple tries, but after managing to pick it up, she dried herself off and put it on like she had it the other day before walking down the hall towards the kitchen. "Hey...is there anything I can help with ?" She asked.

Liam shook his head. "Don't worry, I can handle making breakfast. Just relax until it's ready. You're my guest, after all, I want to make sure you're comfortable. And once we've eaten breakfast, I can take you to the laundry room to wash you clothes. We should also probably buy a few more outfits for you later."


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"Well, Rainbow Dash is a really weird name, unless you're a cosplaying... What're they called? Bronies?? Anyway, I'll be needing your human name... And your phone number's just one??" Colette asked. "What happened to the other nine digits??" Looking over to the girl, raising an eyebrow. "I'll just put mine down for now. And you're stuck with the name Rachel Dawson until you give me your real name."

 

When Rainbow Dash finally gave her a street name and a town, however, Colette smiled. Finally, she was getting somewhere! Wait... Moose Lake?? "You live in Minnesota?? When'd you get out here?? Is there anyone you can call to pick you up?? I don't wanna drive that far!"

 

Looking to Rainbow Dash again, she noticed she was still in bed, looking back at her, as if she was expecting some sort of reaction. Something was really up with 'Rainbow Dash'. She sighed, looking away again. "Nurse Lurch's gonna be back any minute. Why don't you get up and get dressed? While you're at, maybe I can call one a' your folks or friends... Gimme a number so I can dial 'em up! " Colette said, picking up her phone.

 

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Rachel fumbled with the keys to her apartment.

"Man, what a long day..." she mumbled as the door gave way. She quickly made and ate spaghetti, cleaned up and decided to retire to her room to work on designs for a company that had made an offer the day before.

She walked down the hallway and opened her bedroom door to see some random guy standing there, looking out the window. She was shocked, but it would have been out of character for her to scream.

"Uh... Hello?"

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"Thats the magic of television. The show was produced by Hasbro Studios in the US. Hasbro selected animator Lauren Faust as the creative director and executive producer for the show. There have been 3 seasons of the show so far, each containing 26 episodes except for the third which only had 13. Thats a total of 65 episodes. Fluttershy, your whole world was created by a human being. The entire thing thought up by hum-" he said until Aly interrupted him. "Alex, shut up! Fluttershy, the only thing we would need to change is your hair color, then you would seem like any other normal human... also maybe a bit of a change in wardrobe. Also, slavery is illegal. Animals are the only thing we buy and sell, and currently you're a human" Aly told Fluttershy and opened the door slowly as to not accidentally hurt her. "We promise to help you get home no matter what. We need to get to work soon though. Magneus should be home any minute"


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Liam shook his head. "Don't worry, I can handle making breakfast. Just relax until it's ready. You're my guest, after all, I want to make sure you're comfortable. And once we've eaten breakfast, I can take you to the laundry room to wash you clothes. We should also probably buy a few more outfits for you later."

 

Star nodded and sat down at the table. "Kay. Can I try playing your guitar again ?" She asked, glancing into the other room. She smiled at the guitar sitting in the corner before looking back at Liam with a hopeful look in her eyes. "You don't mind do you ?" She asked.


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Rachel fumbled with the keys to her apartment. "Man, what a long day..." she mumbled as the door gave way. She quickly made and ate spaghetti, cleaned up and decided to retire to her room to work on designs for a company that had made an offer the day before. She walked down the hallway and opened her bedroom door to see some random guy standing there, looking out the window. She was shocked, but it would have been out of character for her to scream. "Uh... Hello?"
 

 

Diliges, who was preoccupying himself looking out the window at the various strings of random emotions that played across the sky like a miss colored aurora borealis, jumped slightly at the sound of another voice. He turned around at a normal speed, having got over the initial shock in an instant. Military conditioning and all that. He watched her closely, examining her in one quick sweep of his turquoise eyes, "Hello..." He says, furrowing his brow in slightly confusion, which slowly melts into curiosity. He waves a hand slowly through the air, temporarily forgetting the Rachel was watching him.

 

To her it might have looked like he was slightly out of it, waving his hand as if to dispel a cloud of smoke when there wasn't one. To Diliges however, he was toying with the ray of emotion that emanated from her. Despite his amusement, he doesn't make a show of it  physically, keeping it all in his head, "You're scared, but yet you do not scream. Strange. Most people would have if they found a random stranger in their home. That is assuming this is your home, and you yourself aren't an intruder?"

 

He looks her in the eyes, "No, this is your home, the look in your eyes is enough to tell me that." His voice was very calm as he spoke, "I apologize for the intrusion Ma'am, this must all be very strange for you. Would you happen to know how I may have come to be in that closet over there?"

 

On the outside Diliges wasn't showing any emotion other than curiosity. On the inside however he was kicking himself for getting distracted for so long. By rights he should have hidden himself, waited to see if there was a human living here and revealed himself in a better way than this. He'd have a hard time thinking of an excuse for being in a closet in someone's home, which he figured wasn't considered normal behavior if these humans were anything like the races of Equestria. This was going to be interesting.


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Star nodded and sat down at the table. "Kay. Can I try playing your guitar again ?" She asked, glancing into the other room. She smiled at the guitar sitting in the corner before looking back at Liam with a hopeful look in her eyes. "You don't mind do you ?" She asked.

 

Liam smiled. "Of course I don't mind. You're a fellow musician, so I definitely trust you with it. Feel free to use it whenever you like, as if it was your own. Anyway, I'm almost done here, so by the time you finish playing, breakfast should be on the table."

 

(Go ahead and assume that before the end of your next post breakfast is ready and Liam has called you over to the table.)

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Star nodded and got to her feet. She walked into the other room and sat down on the couch. She pulled out Liam's guitar and started playing.


A few minutes later, Star had already improved on using her finger's when Liam called her into the kitchen. She put his guitar away before standing up, adjusting her towel, and walking back into the kitchen. She sat down and smiled.

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Star nodded and got to her feet. She walked into the other room and sat down on the couch. She pulled out Liam's guitar and started playing.

 

 

A few minutes later, Star had already improved on using her finger's when Liam called her into the kitchen. She put his guitar away before standing up, adjusting her towel, and walking back into the kitchen. She sat down and smiled.

 

Liam smiled as she sat down. "That sounded great. I guess  you're really starting to get the hang of using fingers, aren't you? Anyway, I don't know if you have pancakes back home, but they're pretty much a breakfast staple for us humans. I hope you enjoy them.


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Liam smiled as she sat down. "That sounded great. I guess  you're really starting to get the hang of using fingers, aren't you? Anyway, I don't know if you have pancakes back home, but they're pretty much a breakfast staple for us humans. I hope you enjoy them.

Star smiled. "My mum would make my dad and I pancakes every Sunday morning. It was like a tradition. Every single day of my life until I moved out." She said, eating the pancakes by leaning down to the table, biting into one of them with her mouth. "Thefse are delifious." She said, half way through a mouthful.


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Star smiled. "My mum would make my dad and I pancakes every Sunday morning. It was like a tradition. Every single day of my life until I moved out." She said, eating the pancakes by leaning down to the table, biting into one of them with her mouth. "Thefse are delifious." She said, half way through a mouthful.

"Right, well I'm glad you like them." Liam said, chuckling a little as he watched her eat. "I know I said I don't care how you eat, and I really don't, but you should probably learn to eat with a fork eventually, in case you ever eat in public or something. Wouldn't want to cause a scene, you know?"


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Rachel stood there, frozen, as the boy spoke.

What the hell? How does he know that? Hmm... Probably just dumb luck.

"Yes, this is my home... "

Some kid randomly shows up in my bedroom and talks like he knows everything? OF COURSE IT'S STRANGE!

It did occur to her that he may have some mental issues, and decided to approach with caution.

 

"Look, uh... kid, I don't know what you're talking about, or why you're in my apartment. I don't know why you'd just appear in my closet. Start from the top."

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"Don't worry I can take you back to my place, so this way you can get wash up while I rest and I got shampoo at my place too." Charles saying as he was getting the bags even Rarity bags so he can take her to his place and let her wash up. Also he will send his boss a e-mail saying that they are not a threat and will find the third source of engery so he can report some more too,

 

Rarity was relieved to hear this. The moment that the car arrived back at a house which was obviously Charles' home, she was impatient to enter. She knew that she looked a state and wanted to sort herself out as soon as possible.

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"Good night," Cicada said serenely as she got into the makeshift bed prepared for her. She closed her eyes and fell asleep straight away.


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"Oh, uh..." Rainbow looked away nervously. "It's cool. I didn't really feel like going home right now anyway..." That's not where I want to get to, so it would be pointless for you to take me so far in a random direction. But you considered it. Why are you so intent on helping me?
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Nevertheless, Rainbow found herself doing just that when Colette asked for her friend's 'numbers'. Ponyfeathers, her cover was going to go? Where are the other nine digits? That makes...ten digits. Okay, so phone numbers had ten digits, but what if Rainbow gave her a random number? She got the feeling that gig would be up pretty quick.

 

"I...don't remember any of my friend's numbers." Though Fluttershy's a nine, and Rarity's a nine, and I'm a ten of course, and Twilight's a six Oh Shut Up.

 

Rainbow tried to smile sheepishly. "I'm--very forgetful! So, yeah, sorry about that." She tried to wave it off. "But it's no big deal, I'll run into them sooner or later and I can catch up. You know, 'cause they all live....here. Wherever here is. In a generic sense--" Shut up you idiot.

 

Rainbow decided to get 'dressed'. When she groaned and managed, after several tries, to roll herself out of the bed, Colette had turned to give her some privacy, so she grabbed the clothes lying on the hoofboard. Huh--that stuff she'd been wearing before, the weird sheer junk. Hadn't been a dress, though--kinda' seemed like colt's clothes if you asked Rainbow, which made it really weird. She would have been more comfortable in a dress at this point, she decided, no matter what fru-frus Rarity came up with.

 

But when she stripped off the hospital gown she felt terribly exposed in a way she never had before. This body had no feathering hair --Rainbow could see straight to her skin. It made her shiver and want to cross her arms over herself, and she did not like the whole slew of sensations one bit, so she threw on the old clothes as quickly as possible. It took a little more time than it should have, given that she took a few tries to figure out which clothes went on which part of her, but luckily she'd worn them before, and that helped.

 

She coughed, signaling Colette that she could turn around again, and tried to turn off her un-cool blushing. "So...they got anything decent to eat around here? I don't think I've had a snack in a while." It could have been a few days--she hadn't been going to get lunch with Applejack until after beating up Queen Chrysalis.



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Fluttershy wasn't sure what to make of Alex's comment that her world had been invented--she disagreed, but Fluttershy wasn't of the type to bring it up, and instead just stared in relief at Aly when she opened the door on her.

"Okay, thanks Aly...it's okay if you have to leave, I'm used to living by myself. Don't let me get in your way. Um, but," she reached up to wrap her arms around the other girl's neck, "come back soon. Thank you," she whispered into her ear.

"I'm tired of exploring for now anyway...it's been a long day for me. I'll be fine staying here."


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Rarity was relieved to hear this. The moment that the car arrived back at a house which was obviously Charles' home, she was impatient to enter. She knew that she looked a state and wanted to sort herself out as soon as possible.

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"Good night," Cicada said serenely as she got into the makeshift bed prepared for her. She closed her eyes and fell asleep straight away.

They Arrive to Charles home, as he getting out of the driver side, then he open the door for Rarity and smiles too. "We are here, then he went to the door, unlock it for Rarity to enter and looking at her too. "Bathroom is up stares second door to the right, Gust bed room is the third door to the left and my room is first door to the left too and I will be brining your clothing into the gust room too." Charles saying as he went to get the clothing.

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Aly blushed when Fluttershy whispered into her ear. 'Did she just... flirt with me?' she wondered to herself. She shook the thought off and nodded. "Good to hear. Alex and me work as waiters for a high class restaurant. It was a pain to get a job there, but totally worth it. We will be back later tonight" she said and left with Alex.

 

Right as they opened the door they saw Magneus reaching to open the door. "I love how our schedules fit together perfectly. Anyway, you learn anything?" he asked. Aly and Alex nodded simultaneously.

"She is from a TV show called 'My Little Pony' created by Lauren Faust. We still don't know how she got here. She is one of 6 main characters. Everything she says is true" Alex told everything he knew so far. "Also, try and be gentle with her, she is from a world where conflict is almost non-existent"

"Alright. You two get to work, I'll be here doing who knows what, probably make an early dinner" Magneus said and walked past the two and into the living room. Alex and Aly left for work and waved goodbye before closing the door.

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While Moonstruck was showering, Emily hung up the girls clothes before opening her laptop. She went to her blog (Circus_girl.com (Shut up I can't be creative))

She checked a couple things before starting a knew post.

 

 

So today I met the strangest girl...she keeps saying she is from another world and I am still not totally convinced but...she appear right in front of me sooo.

Anyway, She's showering right now and...well, I finder her rather attractive. I know I know...its stupid that I am telling a whole bunch of people on the internet about who I like...but that's what a blog is for right?

 

She is somehow able to use magic...she changed the color of my bed sheets and also turned on the shower tap using some crazy magical aura. She has been here for a few hours now.

Her name is Moonstruck...I would love some advice on what had happened. Message me.

 

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She finished the post before closing her computer and walking into the kitchen to make some dinner.

Moonstruck had cleaned herself up nicely, and had turned off the shower and dried herself off by now. Naturally, as she was not provided any suitable replacement clothes, she left the bathroom stark naked, and walked down to spot Emily standing in the kitchen. Moonstruck's hand was on the wall, as she still seemed to not trust her own sense of balance.

 

"That's fine," Jack Preybird responded. "Sometimes, silence is best. Especially if you're from out of town."

Jack still wondered why Reggie kept cutting in and responding for "Adrianna Jean," and wondered what was up with Catherine putting the little heart next to her name in the address book in his phone. She was probably just being silly, he figured.

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Moonstruck had cleaned herself up nicely, and had turned off the shower and dried herself off by now. Naturally, as she was not provided any suitable replacement clothes, she left the bathroom stark naked, and walked down to spot Emily standing in the kitchen. Moonstruck's hand was on the wall, as she still seemed to not trust her own sense of balance.

 

Emily turned to face Moonstruck and turned a slight pink as she let out a small laugh. "Uh...M-Moonstruck...where are your clothez ?" She asked, turning off the stove. "Oh wait I guess zey are all dirty...'ere, you can borrow some of mine." She smiled at took Moonstruck by the hand. Emily led her down the hell to the master bedroom where Emily started rummaging through a wardrobe.



"Right, well I'm glad you like them." Liam said, chuckling a little as he watched her eat. "I know I said I don't care how you eat, and I really don't, but you should probably learn to eat with a fork eventually, in case you ever eat in public or something. Wouldn't want to cause a scene, you know?"

 

Star blushed and quickly sat up straight. "Kay...so...how do you do it ?" She asked, managing to pick up her fork between her middle and index fingers. "It's a little difficult. Do all hoomans eat like this ?" She asked, trying to poke the pancake with the fork...but all she managed to do was scrape the fork against the plate. She dropped the fork and winced. 


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Well...everyone deserve a break from work even royalty ” he said taking her back to a chair he sat down next to her pick up the fork and knife and began to cut the pancakes “you know I’ve been thinking about something...think of you being here as a vacation...I mean I don’t know what you do or what your subjects might do without you but don’t look at this negative take in as a positive, the more you think about it the worse it’s going to be” he said rising his fork “Also... you do know were from different worlds... what I mean is maybe one year here is a day in your world or something like that” he said eating a piece  

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@@Meteorite"Maybe... but i am worried and i have good reason to be. I... i need you to be seated when i talk to you about this." she says sitting next to him. "Treat others like they treat you." came in mind. David was honest with her and she needed to be the honest in what she said too. If only to protect him from what she'd already done, she didn't want him to pay for her own sins. "I have hurt a lot of others during my reign David. I have waged war against many other nations... the reason for this is not a simple one. A changeling needs "love" to survive, it needs the actual emotion to be felt on his body be it willingly or drawn by magical force from the mind of others. Perhaps you noticed my dress has some holes on the lower parts? Imagine these on our bodies... growing each passing day, eating us from the inside. You know how this ends... massive internal organic failure." she grunts with the pain of the images coming to her mind of the words she speaks. "Thats why i must find the ones that came with me. Luckily we changelings possess a link, a mental ability which allows us to communicate with each other. I have learned that Cicanda my right-hand is here in New York. I know it will be a long time before i can return home but... May i ask that you help me re-unite with her?"

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