OC Reviews By Minty! :D

[Ihei 713]

@@Josh Riordan, 

 

Cutie Mark - Bit more descriptive about the cutie mark appearance?

 

Appearance - Um.. you kind of explained everything already. There's nothing I can say here.

 

Personality - He sounds like a bit of a Gary Sue and looks like he has a lot of fears. Care to put some weaknesses?

 

Backstory - This is kind of too dramatic. There should be a little bit of hope for the little guy.

 

Other - Can you find somepony to proofread..? I didn't get a lot of it. 

 

Rating - 8/10

 

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Cutie Mark - She likes drugs.. ? I guess that's.. cool?

 

Personality - Again, drugs? o.o 

 

Backstory - Drugs.. seriously.

 

Other - Please make her have GOOD qualities. She's not much of a OC if her life is drugs.

 

Rating - 5/10

 

@@Shame, 

 

Just by looking at your OC reminds me of my OC, Moonshower. They could be a possible match. It'd be interesting to see him in a RP. Anyway, onto the review.

 

Cutie Mark - Does he have a cutie mark? Or is it just his scar?

 

Appearance - It really confuses me where it says that he's a pegasus, but in the picture he's a unicorn and it says "power." Can't wait to read the backstory. :3

 

Personality - Uh, is he EVER happy..?

 

Backstory - Was he just born with the scar or did he achieve it since he's Shame?

 

Rating - 8/10 Very interesting.

 

@@Grand_Finale, 

 

Cutie Mark - Ooh, a acting cutie mark. :3

 

Appearance - Pretty. Looks like a Canterlot Elite. Not too sure if the colors red and green go together, though.

 

Personality - A true actress. :3 Does she have much friends, and can you include how much plays she's been in?

 

Backstory - Can you describe how she grew up?

 

Rating - 8/10 

[Fender 1,283]

@,! I have created two more OC's both in need of reviews! (Also I have an updated picture of Candy Spirits now!)

 

The ones in need of reviews are Cherry Pie, and Star Snare. :3

Edited July 29, 2013 by Becker (Fender)

[Shame 23]

1. His 'cutie mark' is old scripture of his birthname, it melds in with his scars

2. May have been a misclick/typo, they're all unicorns XD

3. Happy wouldn't be the right word, it's mostly just shades of gray when it comes to emotions. That being said, he DOES smile from time to time, but rarely out of pure happiness. 

4. The scars were a byproduct of the extensive experiments that were run on all three of them.

 

I'm glad you found it interesting, and feel free to message me about that possible Roleplay if you ever feel the desire. ^^

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Could you do my OC Melody Breeze. I really would like to get some feedback because I might start a roleplay with her being the main character, which I might need to tweak a bit. 

 

Link: http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/melody-breeze-r3875