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I just...  I don't even...  I'm done with writing for now. I've screwed around with this writing this intro long enough, even deleting it once, but now I'm taking a major break. Too pissed off to care right now.

 

Sorry about my generally bad mood right now, just a crap week.

 

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Good luck to you. Been tossing the idea of joining the NZ Army for a while now, guess I should really reconsider it. I'd be nice to get away from everything for a while, that and I also get to preform a civil duty, and that's always a plus.

I've had a pretty spectacular week. I'd happily share some of that good spirit with you, but I don't think it works that way.

 

Did you delete it on purpose, or on accident? I did mine on accident. I was able to redo it, though. 

 

Go blow some stuff up in Grand Theft Auto or something. Feel better, buddy!

 

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If you need help with House Everfree shtuff, I'm your guy. Deja vu, huh?

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I've had a pretty spectacular week. I'd happily share some of that good spirit with you, but I don't think it works that way.   Did you delete it on purpose, or on accident? I did mine on accident. I was able to redo it, though.    Go blow some stuff up in Grand Theft Auto or something. Feel better, buddy!
 

 

Mail some enthusiasm to me, all I got was this useless charisma and I'm not sure what to do with it.

 

It was an accident sadly.


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Mail some enthusiasm to me, all I got was this useless charisma and I'm not sure what to do with it.

 

It was an accident sadly.

*grabs envelope*

*Inserts self into envelope*

*mails self to Master's house*

*Master opens mail*

*Out pops Dezzie*

*Master smiles to see his friend*

*Dezzie orders a pizza*

*They play vidya games all night*

*They laugh together and play together*

 

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.... WTF? Discord. GET. OUT.

 

How does he know I know your address?

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I've had a pretty spectacular week. I'd happily share some of that good spirit with you, but I don't think it works that way.

 

Did you delete it on purpose, or on accident? I did mine on accident. I was able to redo it, though. 

 

Go blow some stuff up in Grand Theft Auto or something. Feel better, buddy!

 

 

If you need help with House Everfree shtuff, I'm your guy. Deja vu, huh?

Doesn't the system automatically save your content on that URL? Of course, if that's only if you're using a desktop...

 

Of course, I do occasionally lose my work; my best advice to prevent this is that every thousand letters, I save the words onto a Word Document or simply copy the whole thing. Directly writing on a Word Document works too.

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.... WTF? Get out of here, Discord. That's just gross.

 

How does he know I know your address?

 

R-right...  that's our Discord I guess. Thank you...  for the enthusiasm. I mean, I had fun, it was great, and...  eep.

 

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On the subject of ponies killing from a conversation that I had no part in due to timezones, I'm pretty sure the reason you never see a pony use lethal force is because, well... It's a children's TV show. They're hardly going to show mortal combat between changelings and the Royal Guard, especially if one considers the abundance of pointy objects used.

 

Anyways, yeah, good luck with applying for the Reserves, @@Windbreakersmile.png  Also, do any of the long-time mods (ie: Anon, The-Master) have any tips for writing intros? The Earthborn one's done but I think it could be improved.

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Doesn't the system automatically save your content on that URL? Of course, if that's only if you're using a desktop...

 

Of course, I do occasionally lose my work; my best advice to prevent this is that every thousand letters, I save the words onto a Word Document or simply copy the whole thing. Directly writing on a Word Document works too.

I know mine doesn't. I've been trying to get into the habit of typing out my posts in Word first, but there's always that ONE TIME that I forget, and the entire website crashes. 

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Standoff's going to be in House Everfree, but at the start of the RP he won't actually have been adopted. Or even seen any members of the faction. So that's gonna be fun.

I've talked about this with him, and I approve of his just joining Everfree. Should be interesting for an outsider, fresh joined, to see what goes on. But of course, his story has to match, and I'm not the one judging those.

 

The plan is for him to just now be entering the forest as the RP starts, and basically be immediately assimilated. So he hasn't officially joined yet. 


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I've talked about this with him, and I approve of his just joining Everfree. Should be interesting for an outsider, fresh joined, to see what goes on. But of course, his story has to match, and I'm not the one judging those.

 

The plan is for him to just now be entering the forest as the RP starts, and basically be immediately assimilated. So he hasn't officially joined yet. 

Well since you are the mod for Everfree, I suppose this means he is close to approval. I was gonna say add more about joining Everfree but since he just joined I can't really ask that.

 

Its needs more though, more detail. I can't really specify what. I will say this though. Since you made there is a bit of an issue. You said he he went to Everfree a year after the disappearance. Yet you also say he just joined. That's a contradiction seeing the sisters have been gone for 15 years. He must of done something in that 15 year time span. Maybe he stayed in Fillydelphia longer or something. Just expand more on what hes done after the princesses disappeared and what lead him to go to the Forest. Other than that just add more detail. Maybe his opinions on the other houses maybe or just expand and go more in depth.

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Well since you are the mod for Everfree, I suppose this means he is close to approval. I was gonna say add more about joining Everfree but since he just joined I can't really ask that.

 

Its needs more though, more detail. I can't really specify what. I will say this though. Since you made there is a bit of an issue. You said he he went to Everfree a year after the disappearance. Yet you also say he just joined. That's a contradiction seeing the sisters have been gone for 15 years. He must of done something in that 15 year time span. Maybe he stayed in Fillydelphia longer or something. Just expand more on what hes done after the princesses disappeared and what lead him to go to the Forest. Other than that just add more detail. Maybe his opinions on the other houses maybe or just expand and go more in depth.

I approve of his plan of only just joining. The details of him joining Everfree will be covered in the RP. At the moment, he's not a member, although you may as well register him as one. 

 

I do agree, though, that his bio could use some more detail. I think he said something about being a freelance intel peddler or something in our private chat. Standoff's probably lying low for most of those fifteen years, dispensing valuable information for cash and information in return. Its true, he should spend more time in Filly. 

 

He needs to have feelings directed towards the houses. I'd imagine a grudge against Earthborn, since they were the ones targeting him. Was Whitegold or Stormwing behind his being exposed? Seems like the kind of thing a Whitegold spy would do. Act in his own self-interest by eliminating a competitor.

 

Got all that, Buttmad?

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I approve of his plan of only just joining. The details of him joining Everfree will be covered in the RP. At the moment, he's not a member, although you may as well register him as one. 

 

I do agree, though, that his bio could use some more detail. I think he said something about being a freelance intel peddler or something in our private chat. Standoff's probably lying low for most of those fifteen years, dispensing valuable information for cash and information in return. Its true, he should spend more time in Filly. 

 

He needs to have feelings directed towards the houses. I'd imagine a grudge against Earthborn, since they were the ones targeting him. Was Whitegold or Stormwing behind his being exposed? Seems like the kind of thing a Whitegold spy would do. Act in his own self-interest by eliminating a competitor.

 

Got all that, Buttmad?

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YO DEZZIE BABY POO!

I was talking to Scholar and he said okay to add Violet, so reserve me a space in Everfreeeeeeeee. I'll edit Violets Bio riiiiiiight..........when I'm done watching this movie.

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It isn't a bad bio, its just as I said minor problems that can easily be fixed.

 

First is if you want to keep her backstory that way, she can't be 17. That would mean she would of been 2 when the Sisters disappeared since they have been gone for 15 years. I might also want you to expand on the Whitegold army bit just a tad. Like is she a guard or something? Does she know how to fight?

 

These are just some comments on her backstory. The a bit of knowledge on magic struck me as odd, but its fine, as long as she can't do spells, but I suppose knowing a little about magic isn't bad. Also those dream you mentioned were also a bit odd considering Earthborn hasn't formed yet, but I suppose that is just foreshadowing the future. That also made me wonder if that is gonna to happen to her in the RP.

 

Otherwise, it isn't bad really isn't. Do as I said and I will approve. but if you are dead set on her age being 17 and not older then you will have to change her bio since the sisters were gone for practically her whole life. However, Scholar might point out somethings and say somethings on the bio when he sees it so don't get discourage if he tells you to change something.

 

 

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And with the fifth member of Whitegold reserved, I now pronounce Whitegold full. Damn we have so many more OCs than last time! This is great! But it might also be more chaotic...

And Honestly after Mr. Butz OC, Epics, and I guess Crystal's new OC, are approved I don't think we should be allowing anymore people. We already have a TON. This is more than I expected. So sorry Master but i think you are stuck with two players lol. Though I suppose we can accept anyone willing to join Stormwing but if they want to join someother house we may have to turn them down for now at least. They could probably still join later on. (Since I suspect some might leave... they always leave...)

 

(Meaning any new OC's form here on out should join Stormwing. But I think we have enough OC's as it is)

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It isn't a bad bio, its just as I said minor problems that can easily be fixed.

 

First is if you want to keep her backstory that way, she can't be 17. That would mean she would of been 2 when the Sisters disappeared since they have been gone for 15 years. I might also want you to expand on the Whitegold army bit just a tad. Like is she a guard or something? Does she know how to fight?

 

These are just some comments on her backstory. The a bit of knowledge on magic struck me as odd, but its fine, as long as she can't do spells, but I suppose knowing a little about magic isn't bad. Also those dream you mentioned were also a bit odd considering Earthborn hasn't formed yet, but I suppose that is just foreshadowing the future. That also made me wonder if that is gonna to happen to her in the RP.

 

Otherwise, it isn't bad really isn't. Do as I said and I will approve. but if you are dead set on her age being 17 and not older then you will have to change her bio since the sisters were gone for practically her whole life. However, Scholar might point out somethings and say somethings on the bio when he sees it so don't get discourage if he tells you to change something.

 

 

@Everyone 

 

And with the fifth member of Whitegold reserved, I now pronounce Whitegold full. Damn we have so many more OCs than last time! This is great! But it might also be more chaotic...

And Honestly after Mr. Butz OC, Epics, and I guess Crystal's new OC, are approved I don't think we should be allowing anymore people. We already have a TON. This is more than I expected. So sorry Master but i think you are stuck with two players lol. Though I suppose we can accept anyone willing to join Stormwing but if they want to join someother house we may have to turn them down for now at least. They could probably still join later on. (Since I suspect some might leave... they always leave...)

 

(Meaning any new OC's form here on out should join Stormwing. But I think we have enough OC's as it is)

I see, I can edit that easily... But um, things weren't a full-brown war the second the Princesses disappeared, right?

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Hi, guuuys...yeah, I got some explainin' to do. So, you know how I said I was gonna' be more active in the reboot? It turns out I actually can't be active at all - dang you, school and afterschool stuff and stuffs! I'm really sad to leave from this RP, BUUT I don't think I'll fully be leaving. Thought you could get rid of me that easily, huh? I don't have time for the full-on RPing Equestria Divided deserves, but I still would like to help a bit with the RP in general, like planning and such, so I'll poke my head into OOC occasionally, and I'm of course going to keep reading this whole thing. If anyone really desperately wants me to stay for some reason (such as lack of OCs in a House) I'll stay, and I'm totally fine with that, just don't expect me to be online much. This is probably my favorite roleplay, and I'm sad to leave, but...I am... So, have a nice life, guys! Actually, I'm probably gonna' be online on Saturday, so, yeah..

((P.S: Nuuuuuuuu!!))

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Not right away. It started with the initial shock and all, but things began to get really messy when the sun and the moon kept going with their usual cycle. Many ponies lost faith in them and the Mane Six struggled to hold the country together. I suppose that went on for a little over a year before Twilight's parents got killed and she began the allicorn experiments that eventually got Pinkie killed and the Mane 5 scattered.

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Well since you are the mod for Everfree, I suppose this means he is close to approval. I was gonna say add more about joining Everfree but since he just joined I can't really ask that.

 

Its needs more though, more detail. I can't really specify what. I will say this though. Since you made there is a bit of an issue. You said he he went to Everfree a year after the disappearance. Yet you also say he just joined. That's a contradiction seeing the sisters have been gone for 15 years. He must of done something in that 15 year time span. Maybe he stayed in Fillydelphia longer or something. Just expand more on what hes done after the princesses disappeared and what lead him to go to the Forest. Other than that just add more detail. Maybe his opinions on the other houses maybe or just expand and go more in depth.

I hit the problem with a large stick, could you go see if it's fixed?

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I see, I can edit that easily... But um, things weren't a full-brown war the second the Princesses disappeared, right?

No, first came the shock and confusion. Then came the riots and rebellion. And that resulted into the splitting up of houses. This all happened within the first couple years. 

I hit the problem with a large stick, could you go see if it's fixed?

Hmmm... not bad, Not bad at all. There is a bit more to be expanded on but I don't want to keep asking just for more detail. I will leave it up to Scholar for approval since hes usually wants more detail and I'm not sure if he wants anything specific in your bio. He will probably ask for more me but as for me, I say you are good enough for now but Scholar does have the final say on your approval.

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 *le sigh* My work is never done... jeez there is a lot here I will try to review it when I can. (filler) (filler) (filler)

You don't need filler in OOC topics anymore, darlin'

And you can take your time. If there's anything I can help with with other OC's or something I'm happy to do so.


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You don't need filler in OOC topics anymore, darlin'

And you can take your time. If there's anything I can help with with other OC's or something I'm happy to do so.

There is still a character limit darlin' lol

 

Also the bio is well done. Since you talked to Scholar already I'll assume he knows shes a Naga so I'll assume hes Okay with it. That said, no problems, very well done, Approved. smile.png

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There is still a character limit darlin' lol

 

Also the bio is well done. Since you talked to Scholar already I'll assume he knows shes a Naga so I'll assume hes Okay with it. That said, no problems, very well done, Approved. smile.png

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