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Courageous Thunder Dash

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Her design looks really awesome. But I have to agree with LittleMissBloo, that her mane is a bit murky. What backstory do you have in mind?

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Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeWg-TtBRMfqketa1ELyKGg

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/menelik-david-kenneth-cannady

2nd SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/thunder-dash-alternative/tracks

Pony.fm: https://pony.fm/thunder-dash

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Skylar

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Looks good, though maybe adjust the mane abit so it's off her face a little? :) 

                                                             

 

Character Backstory: http://mlpforums.com/blog/1210/entry-7077-a-life-without-limits/

 

 

  

 

 

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You are stardust that’s beaten the odds and combined perfectly.

 

 

You are both the moon you walk under and the ground you walk on.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                        You are a part of it all, neither big nor small.

 

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Frosty Flurry

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I like her colors, she's simple, but not plain.  Although her mane looks a little...murky to me? Maybe brighten it up a bit ^^

K is this better? I may of not seen the colour properly...

Looks good, though maybe adjust the mane abit so it's off her face a little? :)

Nah it's supposed to curl over her face lke that! :yay:

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Skylar

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K is this better? I may of not seen the colour properly...

Nah it's supposed to curl over her face lke that! :yay:

 

Fair enough :) In that case it looks fine! :D 

                                                             

 

Character Backstory: http://mlpforums.com/blog/1210/entry-7077-a-life-without-limits/

 

 

  

 

 

BornPegasusSkylar_zpsd5c5718b.png

 

 

 

 

 

You are stardust that’s beaten the odds and combined perfectly.

 

 

You are both the moon you walk under and the ground you walk on.

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                        You are a part of it all, neither big nor small.

 

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Her design looks really awesome. But I have to agree with LittleMissBloo, that her mane is a bit murky. What backstory do you have in mind?

She's a shy pegasus and i didn't really think of flutters when thinking up this chracter.

She can fly and sneak up on people silently and can do alot of aerobatic tricks. despite this she cannot fly that fast.

Thats all i've really thought of currently. but i'm brainstorming! :wacko:

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She's a shy pegasus and i didn't really think of flutters when thinking up this chracter.

She can fly and sneak up on people silently and can do alot of aerobatic tricks. despite this she cannot fly that fast.

Thats all i've really thought of currently. but i'm brainstorming! :wacko:

Definitely a better pink, if that's what you're going for :3 Bright colored ponies hooray!

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Courageous Thunder Dash

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Okay, that's a good start. Also, how did she get her cutie mark? That's one thing that all backstories need.  

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Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCeWg-TtBRMfqketa1ELyKGg

Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/menelik-david-kenneth-cannady

2nd SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/thunder-dash-alternative/tracks

Pony.fm: https://pony.fm/thunder-dash

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