request need a proofreader/editer/helper/OCs for a fanfic

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Well I need a pony to proofread and edit and to also help bounce ideas around here is a short preview of my fic

 

Chapter 0 prologue

 

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Heat... A large amount of heat so hot you feel like your gonna melt inside your armor that's what being dropped from a celestia class battleship in orbit feels like you do get used to it after about 4 5 drops but the rookies always scream inside their helmets it was funny at first now it annoying.

 

Maybe I should explain who I am before I continue I am sgt corrigan of the 501st galactic marines a part of the Equestrian galactic navy I help keep the peace in Equestrian controlled space just like my comrades.

 

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So what do you think if your interested in helping me or would even like your oc to make a appearance let me know I'll take humans and ponies.

 

The Lone Wolf 1735

[Delernil 952]

I can edit it.

[repsol rave 2,963]

i can both edit and proofread. tell me what you need and i'll do it

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Hmmm I'm not sure who to pick okay this story will involve some gore (a lot) space chaos and a load of bullets are you both sure your up to the task

[repsol rave 2,963]

@,also, is this gonna ge a ODST/MLP crossover?  

definitely up to the task! you want some examples of my work?

Edited January 31, 2014 by repsol rave

[Delernil 952]

@,also, is this gonna ge a ODST/MLP crossover?

 

I was thinking the same thing and I was excited. Feet first into hell.

[repsol rave 2,963]

@@Delernil,maybe we can work together? get like a small editing crew together! 

[Delernil 952]

@@Delernil,maybe we can work together? get like a small editing crew together!

 

Sure.

[repsol rave 2,963]

@, you okay with having two editors? 

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Slightly leaning towards a mlp/odst/40K sort of thing you know I am up for getting a crew together for this if you guys are sure your up for it also I need OCs.

[Delernil 952]

Slightly leaning towards a mlp/odst/40K sort of thing you know I am up for getting a crew together for this if you guys are sure your up for it also I need OCs.

I was about to make a human OC if you can accept him. I know ALOT about Halo so my vote is for something more ODST themed.

[repsol rave 2,963]

my vote is for something more ODST themed.

i second this. i love ODST!

i have no human OC's tough, but i have three pony OC's. is that any help? 

Edited January 31, 2014 by repsol rave

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Its less of a crossover more of a...

 

Let's take their stuff and whatever else that's awesome

 

And yes I'll take your OCs pony or human

Edited January 31, 2014 by lonewolf1735

[repsol rave 2,963]

so do you have any ideas on a plotline as of yet? 

or any main foes, main characters etc.

[Anon In Equestria 57]

Well I want to make three parts. The first will be character building and getting to know the universe the second one more major battles and maybe a crises part three the last stand of the good guys

 

The main bad guys the chaos empire a gathering of evil and savage races that love destroying stuff just for the sake of it and to please the chaos gods.

[Delernil 952]

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/geoff-burns-human-r5699

 

There's my human OC. I like you're idea for the plot line. I'm good with it.

[repsol rave 2,963]

 

 

to please the chaos gods.

sounds like those covenant religious maniaks! should be good for some developement.

so yeah, should we start a group PM to discuss this further?

[IRegretThisWholePartOfM 58]

I might be a bit late on this, but any chance i could help with details on the story aka. the surroundings, chatacrets emotions