Pony of Shadows enters

[GoldenCal 52]

This is my First Music piece and is only the first draft just curious what you think of it 

I found some nice sounds although the arrangement has probably let me down #

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jszrCVQ9MqM

[OrangeRiff 45]

I presume the metronome is only left in because its a WIP, but the lack of clean and high pitched instruments kills this song.

It has soo much bass, that you can't hear anything else because of it.

It has a kind of chaotic feeling in it, but I can't say anything for sure, because I couldn't make out any melody from the overpowering mass of of low sounds gushing out of my headphones.

Please, try to do something about this, and make a reupload if possible, as I don't think I can give you any more advice with how the song is right now, besides what I've already written above.

[GoldenCal 52]

Cheers yeah the bass seems more louder through the export I'm working on fixing it 

Thanks for your opinions they really help alot