Lyric suggestions for "Pony Rock Anthem"?

[Squeaker 89]

My deepest apologies if this is the wrong board for this, I am new to this forum and this one made the most sense.

I'm a fast speaker, and have had people told me I would be a good rapper, and thought I could give a ponified (adds "ponified" to Firefox dictionary LIKE A FAUST) Party Rock Anthem a shot. A couple parts are giving me trouble, though. Any suggestions of things anypony might like to hear are also greatly appreciated, though no promises. I know somepony did this before on YT, but I'd like to put a spin on it, with a little more "oomph." Though all I have is WLMM. XD WARNING: Don't expect anything too awesome. I'm very monotone. LOL.

So, first question: Should the part where it says "shufflin'" stay "shufflin'" or should I say "gallopin'" or "canterin'?" The latter two would be very equine, but the first one is deeply rooted in pop culture, and there's always Discord's lil' jig. Any thoughts?

 

Second: This whole stanza is giving me trouble-

One mo’ shot for us (another round)

Please fill up my cup (don’t mess around)

We just want to see (You shake it now)

Now you home with me (You’re naked now)

Edited March 13, 2012 by Squeaker

[GrooveBroove 680]

Hmmmm I would say keep it shufflin.

Based off the lyrics it'll probably fit better over all.

 

 

 

As for that second stanza, yeah off the top of my head I can't think of anything to really fit without changing it a lot.

I'll have to think about it.

[Swordfishtrombone 384]

I reckon canterin'. Its got a smooth vibe to it.

And the lyrics should be something like this:

Come watch the show with us (Sch-wag)

We never gonna stop (Ponies for life)

Give a brohoof to me (Brohoof)

Now you be brony with me (Brohoof? (again?))

I'm working on it for ya.

Alternatively all the brackets could be brohoof.

Anyway I'm sure someone else will give it a shot.

Edited March 13, 2012 by Swordfishtrombone

[Victoria and Co. 782]

Would this work?

• More friendship for us (you're bound)
• Will you be my friend? (see you around)
• Hey there Princess C. (here's a letter now)
• This what they learned with me (your students now)

[Squeaker 89]

How 'bout this?

A lil’ more cider for us (another round)

Please fill up my mug (don’t mess around)

Brohoof is the word (Raise ‘em now)

Welcome to herd. (You’re a brony now)

Still torn between "canterin'" and "shufflin'," though. HNNG! *facehoof*

 

Canterin'... shufflin'... canterin'.... shuffl---GABAH! I think more votes have been for shufflin', and it makes sense because Discord does it, and basically everypony has been shown in a Party Rock Anthem song doing pretty much any dance during the shufflin' bit, so it should be fine. Maybe if I have the time and the willpower I will make a version of each. With my crappy editing program. *sigh of a ninja pirate*

[Zekira G. Drake 50]

If you want, substitute the "shake that" part with "drop it" please

Edited March 20, 2012 by Zekira G. Drake

[Squeaker 89]

If you want, substitute the "shake that" part with "drop it" please

 

Hmm, maybe, or maybe for just some parts, it happens several times. I'll see how often it fits. ^^

[Evilshy 5,089]

Hmm...

 

*goes off to ponify "sexy and I know it"*

[Squeaker 89]

Hmm...

 

*goes off to ponify "sexy and I know it"*

 

I thought about doing that one, too, but I hate that song too much to force myself through it, though. LOL Can't wait.

 

A new problem has come to my attention. This stanza... what should the bracketed part be... I've got basically everything else down, but I'm coming up blank here. :/

In Canterlot, Pony Rock

Lookin for ya filly?

[she on my jock. (Huh.)]

Nonstop when we in the spot

Flank movin’ round like own the lot.

Edited March 20, 2012 by Squeaker