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"The Cutie Map" First Impressions/Analysis, plus thinking of getting into video analysis


Dark Qiviut

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I must say, this impressed me. There's no bombastic One Scene nor the overreliance of Twilight to save the day. Other characters had the chance to shine, and it was a team effort to remove the fraud. Starlight doesn't have the mysterious past or whatnot. She's just a normal unicorn with an evil philosophy, but one she believes is right. From a technical point of view, the dialogue is fantastic with a lot of clever jokes, including nicely done meta references.

 

Pinkie's slip-up is also how you execute her obliviousness correctly: She was oblivious, but got called out for it. She realized it (being the only time this time), and they all suffered the consequences.

 

This is easily Sonneborn's best episode. Does it overtake Return of Harmony as Larson's best episode and best two-parter? That remains to be seen.

 

Source: S05:E01+02 - The Cutie Map

 


This was from a little while ago. Now I'll get a little deeper into The Cutie Map.

 

Even though I was a critic of various executions of Season 4, one of the bigger pluses is how much they approached maturer and grayer morals. Rarity Takes Manhattan talked about how you shouldn't quit your most positive qualities because someone took advantage of you. Pinkie Pride delved into the very mature theme of jealousy over an individual who can not only do the same talent you love and work on, but are also better at it. Everyone here knows how much I praise Testing Testing's excellently executed moral and approach to it.

 

Season Five commenced it with one of the most mature conflicts of not just the entire show, but family TV altogether. It's an entire episode where the conflict between how two ponies approach what friendship is about. Is friendship supposed to be about agreeing with one another? Or is friendship about where despite having serious disagreements, you can still be friends? Can friendship work under the philosophy that conformity trumps all?

 

Earlier today, I mentioned how The Cutie Map had a very eerie similarity of George Orwell's Animal Farm, a storybook criticizing the way the Soviet Union was governed and politicized. Starlight Glimmer's goals run through very similar propaganda. She continued to spread the idea that in order to be true friends, you must be equal. Give up what makes you you. The song, In Our Town, is revealed by Ingram himself to be heavily inspired by WWII propaganda music. This is a really bold direction that hones in the criticism of how strict communist countries had or currently run such as the USSR and especially North Korea. The fact that they explicitly describe the area it's located as "East Equestria" (an implied allegory of the old Eastern Bloc) confirms this powerful message further.

 

One of the cleverest directions Sonneborn, Larson, et al. induced this skewed opinion of friendship equating conformity is how the show never told the audience the name of the town. If you give this town a name, you risk breaking apart the theme of conformity and how the only way to thrive is to be like everypony else in Equestria. The lack of name retains that mystery behind the history of the town. More importantly, it reinforces Starlight Glimmer's skewed opinions of how the only way to actually be friends is to not conform to the rest of society. Keeping it nameless makes this drab village very inviting by teasing about how despite its dinky appearances, it could be one of the best places you'll ever run across. It's a very tiny thing quantitatively, but it really established credibility in Glimmer's propaganda.

 

Undoubtedly, Starlight Glimmer's a fraud. By not conforming to the very same messages she claims to celebrate (not sacrificing her cutie mark while forcing everyone else to do so), she becomes a major hypocrite. However, don't let that mean her beliefs lack any level of sincerity. As a character, she's incredibly sharp with a sense of how she can be one step ahead of the others. With the ReMane Five locked up, she manipulated FS into trying to out her accomplices. Even more, Starlight doesn't act like some magical being who reigned in terror æons ago. She's a unicorn with very strong magical powers, and we have no idea what her past is. There's no doubt that her lack of past is intentional; it makes her feel both relatable and real.

 

Unlike the other villains, she does believe in the magic of friendship, but not the MoF that the others believe. Instead, she sees the concept of individuality as a hindrance of both growth and triumph. Her idea of the cutie mark doesn't translate to being someone of equal potential, but how you must conform to Equestrian matriarchy/patriarchy. By telling everyone to give it up, force them, and hammer it in, she's making them believe that her totalitarian opinions will lead to an eventual Equestrian revolution. Not "revolution" as in warfare, but "revolution" as in how a new ideal of Equestria can be legitimately established. Even after she was revealed to be a hypocrite, she never relented that belief. Consequently, this further legitimizes her gray opinions on Equestrian society.

 

Starlight Glimmer is a very credible, three-dimensional villain. She has very legitimate motives that back up continuity from not just the whole series, but also Magical Mystery Cure. One big problem from that finale is how it conveniently changes the whole definition of the cutie mark from being something you innately like and look forward to for the rest of your life to how it's forced upon you. Starlight Glimmer — and the two-parter's theme itself — openly critiques the very structure and magic of the cutie mark. Surprisingly, SG's political assessments and critiques of the cutie mark system not only opens up further discussion and history of the cutie mark, but it also closes the continuity gap that Magical Mystery Cure opened. Her angst over the cutie mark isn't plucked out of thin air. It's an ongoing discussion in the fandom, including Pinkie Pride itself. There's legitimate backing to it, and she has very good reasons to tell passersby to abandon the practice. By being a very slick motivational speaker, Starlight Glimmer becomes both imposing and very threatening.

 

A common problem in two-parters is the lack of naturality in the dialogue. Only Return of Harmony had much conviction in the dialogue. The Cutie Map's dialogue is incredibly believable. Sure, there's some repetition in Rarity's "divine" comments, but that's me being a little picky. Pinkie Pie was incredibly on point throughout; if you're a very big brony of her, you will like her here. She retains that same zaniness that we grew to know and love, but she's not a random idiot. Her comedy has purpose, and her obliviousness isn't exaggerated. She was acutely aware of how forced the ponies were acting, and it creeped her out. When she wasn't liking how Fluttershy bobbed to the propaganda, her glare snapped her out of it.

 

Honestly, the disagreement the Mane Six had with their impressions over the town was awesome! Pinkie Pie was extremely apprehensive over the town, Starlight Glimmer, and the townsponies. However, Fluttershy had a completely opposite opinion of the town. Despite Glimmer's scary predisposition, FS wasn't willing to quit on the town and believe there were some good intentions behind everything here. In Bats!, FS's skewed opinions of how to handle the bats was completely wrong, yet treated as in the right despite Applejack having more justification to get rid of the vampire fruit bats. Here, both FS and PP had very solid opposing opinions of the village. This establishes not just the gray morale in this whole episode, but also Starlight Glimmer's politics. They were a driving force in the conflict, but neither side was one-hundred-percent right. Each of the Mane Six had strong, solid, differing convictions of the town. None of them were right nor wrong.

 

There's one bugaboo that I must talk about: "The Staff of Sameness." Not the staff itself, but the naming. It's extremely blunt and very anticlimactic. It gives off that feeling of evil before SG confronted them. While the rest of the episode had extremely clever writing, the name of the staff comes off as extremely convenient. If there was more cleverness in the name, like "equalibrium," "The Gate to Freedom," or something else (if you can give me other names in the comments, feel free to), it would make SG's morale even greyer. Fortunately, Sonneborn and Larson were able to overcome this stilt and deliver a story that was extremely solid from top to bottom.

 

@@LZRD WZRD mentioned this in his analysis, and I'll do it here. "In Our Town" is an accurate, yet creepy, tribute to WWII propaganda songs. There's a sick stench of utopian creepiness that will make you shiver down your spine. But one meter really hones in Glimmer's justified philosophies: "You can't have a nightmare if you never dream." What makes it scary is how there's truth into this line. The idea that dreams are describes as an inherent nightmare; in order to have a true good night's sleep, how about giving up the ability to dream? It's a scary question to ask, but how the song's written and delivered creates a mirage of how this may be one of the best ideas out there. The line offers serious implications over how you can tackle this internal conflict. (I'm thinking of breaking down the entire song in a future analysis.)

 

I'll do more at a later date, but for now, it's safe to say that this episode ranks as one of the best at this point. There are very good reasons why The Cutie Map has so much intrigue in this fandom. The conflict concept is bold and fantastic. But what it did was tackle this dark theme, merge the concept of the cutie mark in both MMC and the rest of the show, and approach it very naturally. It's extremely believable, and its execution is utterly fantastic. A very bold direction like this is extremely needed, and to have it done and done well in TV-Y programming is revolutionary.

 


Now, I want to talk about the idea of getting into video brony analysis. Like I said on here in public and PMs, one of the reasons I don't go into video analysis is how I don't have the wherewithal in the technology to get into it. I'm a huge novice into the video-making and audio-merging equipment. Plus, I'm a major perfectionist, and written reviews are much more forgiving than video analysis, especially since YouTube doesn't allow you to reupload and keep the URL. However, now with season five here, I'm starting to think of tackling this rich field, possibly during the summer break. What I want to do is create a video setting as well as create an actual screen where I can get people's attention. There are two ideas in mind:

  1. Inspired by Winnie the Pooh's "Thoughtful Spot" and the storytelling from Pocahontas, I'm thinking of creating a campfire scene. The background will be a dark, rich blue. With a simplified version of my ponysona on the left-hand side (while sitting down, BTW), there would be a campfire. The logs burn as I talk. Either above or in the campfire, a screen will periodically appear to show clips of the show, comic, or imagery. They will fade in an out as I narrate the analysis. Depending on the tone and character's face, the fire will change color, from yellow out of surprise to blue out of anger (blue fire is the hottest) to red out of coldness. The fire comes on when starting, ending, or transitioning in the analysis.
     
    Another spinoff idea from this is how the background stays dark, basically a very dark brown shade of my ponysona's stroke color. However, only his head, horns, and maybe legs will peak out as they're near the campfire. When the campfire lights up, his head's visible. Once it goes dark, he vanishes.
  2. I'm thinking of keeping my ponysoan as is. However, what I'm thinking is tinkering it to make my ponysona's head as the screen. As the screen plays, the background changes color depending on my tone and mood. This, however, feels really incomplete.

If anyone has more ideas, feel free to give me a comment or two below.

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What do you think Starlight Gilimmer's actual motivations were? I'm honestly thinking that she might have some kind of inferiority complex or something similar, especially when she says "You'd all still be living your miserable lives thinking you're better than anypony else if it weren't for my magical abilities." 

 

She says "better with anypony else" with a lot of contempt in her voice. This makes me believe that perhaps throughout her life, she has always felt inferior to the ponies around her. This might be because she didn't get the cutie mark she was hoping for, or perhaps she felt that she wasn't as powerful as the unicorns around her. 

 

In any case, she ended up finding a way to make her magic useful by conforming an entire town into a state of mind where they would not feel any superior to each other, but she would (secretly) feel superior to them, thus making up for her feeling inferior her entire life. 

 

This is just my guess, anyway. 

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This analysis gets the LZRD WZRD stamp of approval. Bravo sir, 10/10

 

I love your first idea for an MLP analysis format. It's like something I would think of and then be too lazy to do. Go for it bro! If you need any help or advice with the technical aspects or anything, I'm here to help (that goes to anyone else on here looking to do these things).

 

I'd love to have a community of video analysts here and I'm sure you'll represent us well Dark Qiviut :D

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The complete lack of clarity on Starlight Glimmer's true motivations can be summed up in one question: if she had a special talent, why did she use it for this purpose? Did she really believe her own stuff even if she knew she was being a hypocrite? She did justify her motives in saying that the retention of her magical power was necessary in order to enforce her doctrine.

 

The WWII propaganda connection just did it. MLP has officially hit stratospheric levels of intellectualism.

 

Video analysis is off-limits to me for the moment but will become a future consideration of mine if enough people from this community seem to be crossing over into it.

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You'd be interesting doing that. I remember a while ago I heard your voice and thought you sounded like VoiceofReason. Let's just hope I don't mix you two up. I'm also trying to get into the analysis stuff. Only made like a few vids.

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The complete lack of clarity on Starlight Glimmer's true motivations can be summed up in one question: if she had a special talent, why did she use it for this purpose? Did she really believe her own stuff even if she knew she was being a hypocrite? She did justify her motives in saying that the retention of her magical power was necessary in order to enforce her doctrine.

 

The WWII propaganda connection just did it. MLP has officially hit stratospheric levels of intellectualism.

 

Video analysis is off-limits to me for the moment but will become a future consideration of mine if enough people from this community seem to be crossing over into it.

Come on Wind Chaser, do videos! All of the cool kids are doing it! Me, DQ, ChikoritaBrony, probably someone else I'm forgetting. Damn we'll be freakin legit if we can coax you and Nuke into doing some B)

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Excellent review as always, DQ, I tip my hat to you.  Can't wait to read more of your reviews as the season continues and exchange thoughts on future episodes. :3

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As great as the episode is, the most amazing thing is that they're doing it under TV-Y.  It's astounding.

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Personally, I got an enormous Star Trek vibe from the premiere. In particular, it reminded me of "Patterns of Force" (an admittedly loopy episode where Kirk and Spock end up on a planet that has adopted Nazism, only to join an underground resistance movement and get captured), "Space Seed" (Starlight, like Khan, is ruthless and utterly convinced of her own role as an enlightened despot), and "Balance of Terror" (where the Romulans are introduced under heavy allegories to the Cold War). Like a good Star Trek episode, "The Cutie Map" touched upon philosophical and political themes whist retaining the personal charm of the main cast.

 

The episode probably featured some of the smartest and most subtle writing in the series. My only qualm at present is Starlight could've been presented in a slightly more ambiguous light, that is, her brief Hannibal Lecture about how cutie marks and unique talents create painful divisions can be readily dismissed by the resilience of the Mane Six throughout the series. I feel as though Starlight had the opportunity to make a legitimate point but readily lapsed into a "you crave subjugation" mini-monologue.

 

Conversely, as Wind Chaser said, maybe it's better that Starlight's true motives remain opaque for the time being. The lack of answers whets the appetite.

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Personally, I got an enormous Star Trek vibe from the premiere. In particular, it reminded me of "Patterns of Force" (an admittedly loopy episode where Kirk and Spock end up on a planet that has adopted Nazism, only to join an underground resistance movement and get captured), "Space Seed" (Starlight, like Khan, is ruthless and utterly convinced of her own role as an enlightened despot), and "Balance of Terror" (where the Romulans are introduced under heavy allegories to the Cold War). Like a good Star Trek episode, "The Cutie Map" touched upon philosophical and political themes whist retaining the personal charm of the main cast.

 

The episode probably featured some of the smartest and most subtle writing in the series. My only qualm at present is Starlight could've been presented in a slightly more ambiguous light, that is, her brief Hannibal Lecture about how cutie marks and unique talents create painful divisions can be readily dismissed by the resilience of the Mane Six throughout the series. I feel as though Starlight had the opportunity to make a legitimate point but readily lapsed into a "you crave subjugation" mini-monologue.

 

Conversely, as Wind Chaser said, maybe it's better that Starlight's true motives remain opaque for the time being. The lack of answers whets the appetite.

 

I was reminded of the episode The Return of the Archons myself.

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I was reminded of the episode The Return of the Archons myself.

 

I haven't seen the episode personally, but the synopsis and critical reaction prompt me to agree.

 

Given how the MLP writers have proven themselves savvy geeks, I'm willing to bet at least a few of them were under direct influence from Star Trek. I can only hope Twilight will soon encounter godlike aliens before wrestling with a Gorn.

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Excellent review as always, DQ! I didn't like the staff's name either, but everything else was spot-on. I think this is your best analysis yet because you cover so much ground that other people haven't: a possible reason and meaning for the town being nameless, the significance of such a mature theme being presented so well on a kids's show, Starlight's rejection of the cutie mark system itself echoing ongoing debates in the fandom, and how MMC's idea of "stolen/wrong mark = stolen/wrong special abilities" that took a wrecking ball to continuity and helped destroy that finale from the inside out, was actually used well and worked to the show's advantage here.

 

I'd be very interested to see video reviews from you, but I understand your reasons for not doing them as yet; they're the same as mine. But you already have good ideas for how to do a video review, and that's the first step. I welcome a further analysis of the song 'In Our Town', because it's easily one of the most well-conceived in the show's history.

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Excellent review DQ! Very well thought out, and it provided a lot of food for thought. If you feel like adding to this already lengthy review, I'd be very interested to hear more about your thoughts on Fluttershy. I felt like she was pretty liable to come off as extremely naive to those who don't suffer from social Anxiety and thus might not be able to extrapolate her motivations as well, or who might have a very different interpretation of her motivations, but that might just be me reacting as someone with Anxiety who is often mislabeled as overly trusting or naive.

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Favorite episode of the series. Had a real Phillip K. Dick feel to it.

I like this.

I like this a lot.

 

And the more you think about it, the more absolutely creepy this entire episode is. Kind of have some fears on the show's direction, though...

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What do you think Starlight Gilimmer's actual motivations were? I'm honestly thinking that she might have some kind of inferiority complex or something similar, especially when she says "You'd all still be living your miserable lives thinking you're better than anypony else if it weren't for my magical abilities." 

 

She says "better with anypony else" with a lot of contempt in her voice. This makes me believe that perhaps throughout her life, she has always felt inferior to the ponies around her. This might be because she didn't get the cutie mark she was hoping for, or perhaps she felt that she wasn't as powerful as the unicorns around her. 

 

In any case, she ended up finding a way to make her magic useful by conforming an entire town into a state of mind where they would not feel any superior to each other, but she would (secretly) feel superior to them, thus making up for her feeling inferior her entire life. 

 

This is just my guess, anyway. 

are you SEEING how much we are THINKING and DISCUSSING what some people STUPIDLY CALL a LITTLE GIRLS SHOW?

 

Yeah.

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Hmm. Since SG is so entrenched in her own ideology, I'd say "Staff of Sameness" is precisely what she would call it, "sameness" being the ideal she purports to follow. Rather than the writers making an error in the naming, I would say it's perfectly in line with where they wanted the character to go.

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Dude, you should definitley get into Video Analysis! I was thinking of doing the same thing (Like taking my blogs and putting them into a video format). The only real problem is tht I dont know how to do anything like that. But dude, definitley do it!

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I do believe you have a 7th game world series walk off with this review. That includes the Staff of Sameness naming which is the only small flaw in an near perfect story. My opinion is skewed a little from the BABS screening, but I personally adored the episode.

 

You already know my opinion on you doing videos reviews. Campfire!

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I haven't seen the episode personally, but the synopsis and critical reaction prompt me to agree.

 

Given how the MLP writers have proven themselves savvy geeks, I'm willing to bet at least a few of them were under direct influence from Star Trek. I can only hope Twilight will soon encounter godlike aliens before wrestling with a Gorn.

 

Keep in mind that the Star Trek (TOS) episodes you folks are naming were written during (and heavily influenced by) the Cold War, so in many ways they share the same ideas and tropes and are properly linked back to many of the same sources (eg. Animal Farm, general criticism of communism/socialism, etc.). :)

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