Silver Stream.

Last time I posted here, I stated I was bisexual but due to a moment of empathy I had over a month ago, I know I'm pansexual. Meaning I don't mine dating transgender and such....doesn't matter to me at all. If I like and attracted to you, then you're good. Which is weird since it goes against my religion but I'm pretty accepting to all people.

Haha, I love it. It seems your attempt turned out as a success. Great work c:

Went to the gym with my roommate at 6am (man I am so out of shape!) Finished all the poetry requests and added up the new ones. Cleaned around the house. Did staff work on the side too but not much

Amaaaazing! <3 I really like the style on these two!

I really love your character. She seems sweet but strong willed all the same. Her back story is short but quite touching. At first, I was going to make this more "aggressive" but your OC didn't seem like the type. Instead, this is about her longing for freedom and understanding it's price....but at the same time....she doesn't hate her father or anything....but more so pities him and is sad that her decision will forever break them apart. When reading your backstory, I tried to see from both sides....he seems strict but at the same time, simply scared and overbearing. I hope you like it and I'm sorry I took so long to get started on this. If you don't like it, PLEASE let me know and I will start over c: Freedom isn't free; At one point it was barely available for me Grounded by the chains of caution and driven by a wondrous dream: A life bright with sunlight and an adrenaline rush as I take flight Instead, I'm here protected by a father's love and a life he must oversee Freedom isn't free; My mother had to give up a family to buy hers Leaving us alone and bewildered as she pursued whatever life she preferred How could she depart for a fresh start but leave us both with shattered hearts? I learned fast to accept the truth and move on from the departure that occurred Freedom isn't free; Truth is, the price will only increase higher and higher Through time the bond with my father dwindled because of our different desires We didn't see eye to eye; I yearned for the skies while he feared future goodbyes Such an intelligent guy incapable of accepting the risks my freedom would acquire Freedom isn't free; But the time has come to pay the ultimate price To escape this sheltered love and go live! My grandma's place should suffice And the price for this mission is being in a position where I'll never be forgiven Because my departure will lead to his shock and a heart that will break twice BUT I AM TIRED OF THIS FIGHT! With this loss, I will gain There's a life full of "what ifs" out there that's calling my name! Must pay this price if I am to live my own life and take it with strife It's time to take flight and look forward with the wind in my mane Freedom isn't free; But that doesn't stop me from possessing it by spirit I will take advantage of this new life with it's consequences and benefits Once I'm at this sweet cottage surrounded by beauty, I shall gain irreplaceable knowledge And experience this paid freedom my father never had a chance to get There you go! Tempest sounds like an awesome royal guard...and from what I read, he seems to have been a pony with a purpose to protect those who cannot protect themselves and takes that to heart. Also, it seemed as if becoming Luna's royal guard was a VERY important life goal to him.....so this is written by another guards point of view....A recruiter and trainer to oversee the tryouts. And this recruiter simply notices great and powerful potential in your OC. Everything that's colored red basically highlights your OC c: LEt me know if you need something better You stand with a commanding presence and eyes hard with a purpose Head held with pride and a stance mightier than those lined beside you Such an impressive first impression but is there more beneath that surface? What's hidden inside that powerful physique; what makes you a special recruit? There's more to standing still and giving salutes. This sanction require leaders Real soldiers with hearts of fire and armored with both brain and brawn You protect without payment; there's no room for princely praise seekers Be a storm! A raging force that our Princess of the night can depend on Face danger with a fury and serve as if you have everything to lose! Attack the threat and bring forth all your power to keep this kingdom safe Bravery, diligence, loyalty, strength, and intellectual skill are your tools to use Train hard great stallion; For I sense becoming her highness royal guard is your fate Added to the list since slots are now open! You have been added as well Shop just opened up! You've been added and thanks c:

Apologies for going MIA...or more so neglecting my shop. Been having bad lucksoon these past few days, but i will finish up the last few members and the shop will reopen soon

Aha These are super entertaining all the while driven from a good cause. Makes me want to join in despite the fact I'd sound terrrrible. Can't wait to hear more c:

welcome to the forum <3 I know how you feel. And that does sound annoying. "Nevermind" drives me crazy in general.

Please note anything said isn't a direct attack towards your opinion But if I'm to be honest, I don't understand how having no genitalia would promote Equality xD But this is certainly an interesting thought?

Oh! Oh well I'm glad you like it *nervous laugh* And sure c: do whatever you like with it as long as you credit the work towards me c:

Okay so this was REALLY REALLY short. And I truly apologize if it's not what you expected or hoped for. But honestly? I was given very little to work with Most of what I know is what you gave me which was his appearance and the brief fact of him enjoying flying and computer games. I had no backstory or personality to use when creating this. So basically it's a short thrill of a poem about your OC racing through the skies so he can play his games. I tried to incorporate that what he enjoys requires good values? I could have went wild with my imagination and shape your OC myself that way I'd have more to work with, but I feel as though I would have been overstepping my bounds. Now if you don't like this poem, I'll be more than happy to work harder on it and extend it to your liking. I completely understand that this poem seems to a have a forced flow and you was hoping for something...more xD But for the moment, this is what I have: The Mandarian orange alicorn raced through the sky with a heart set to one destination strong winds carry him faster; no cloud blinding his way His presence a blur as he soars with a speed that exceeds any pony's flying expectation would you believe it's all because of the games he would play? Yes all for the game. This stallion lives for flight and the thrill of the cyber sport No pony can best him in either, his skills are unbeatable His game level too astounding to reach as he conquer the skies claimed as his resort what better place to visit frequently to feel invincible? "I'm unstoppable!" he cries; boisterous voice piercing the chilly air Fly faster good prince of the skies! No time to lose This Wiz of a kid flaps harder for home in order to start his gaming affair almost there! He's ready to engage with his wonderful muse Don't underestimate him; there's a reason he was sworn to this thrill he must fulfill One would think such talents were a waste of time To fly with a fury is as important as the next talent! And gaming requires unfathomable skill This alicorn is a natural. Nopony can compare when he's in his prime

Trust me, I know the feeling xD

Sorry this took long. Actually.....this really didn't take long at all. I just had to take a break after the last two and took a long nap. After waking up, I got started on yours with a well rested mind. Basically, your OC is speaking with a colleague. This poem is meant to be like a "spoken word"....where she recites this with confidence. The flow is well paced when recited right. I imagine your OC saying this in a way that I can truly appreciate her. Hope you like it. BUT!! If it's something you don't think will fit her, please tell me. From how she is described, she is a super intelligent klutz, but has hidden potential. If she was ever offended by someone or was ever pushed to come out of her shell, this is how I'd imagine it'll go. If you want it changed in a more passive direction, I will be happy to do it! "Knowledge is power" A common phrase used by the typical idealist with flawed logic How ironic, that I as an intellectual being oppose this theory Is it not the knowledge I obtain that strengthens the magic with me? And what of this magic within me that "credits" the Knowledge I gain? HA! As if I'd measure my power based off of the size of my brain How insane! Tell me my fellow colleagues as studious as I, In what way does knowledge make me more powerful than the next guy Of course, we would not see eye to eye, but why? My vast knowledge of a spell would surely surpass his skills would it not? No, it would not. For this simple minded fellow trained in ways quite silly Inspired by folk tales and myths, driven by faith and "what ifs" And the journeys he took! This stallion gained knowledge we could not give! How impressive Is this thought that larger minds are on par with essential simpletons You see, I know of the benefits every page has to offer That some words hold secrets one might never uncover otherwise Indeed, knowledge is quite the tool to have over a common fool But the common fool has gained what some scholars will never find: And that's the journey and experience gained to stimulate the mind How powerful is that mind as well as mine! And with this in mind, I'll study abroad Books as my inspiration, but my heart as my compass For you see, Knowledge is not the source of power to an extent It's the journey to obtain and use it. And though I'm the last pony you'd imagine to have a head in the clouds Where focus is a struggle, and physique "weak" My ability to appreciate the lesser intellectual surpasses your inability to I not only gain knowledge, but I engage in it to create spell brand new And it's because of this, that makes me more powerful than you There you go! This was a bit difficult. I wanted to integrate your OC's purpose for making a toy and give it a heartwarming meaning. Toy making is an art, but it's not the toy that makes it perfect, it's the joy it gives others right? Plus, after reading up on your OC, that seems to be the goal anyway c: But please let me know if you don't like it and want it longer/shorter/revised completely. To be honest, there was another direction I could have went with this. Where it was focused on the detail of how a toy was made. I could still revise this to where it focuses more on a detailed description of making a toy rather than the story and reason about making the toy. Here ya go: See, I'm what you would call a perfectionist; I strive to create the perfect toy The fresh smiles of fillies and colts is the source of this toy maker's joy Each toy I create is created with excellence; my hooves are careful and swift Since the age of six, I knew I was made for this! Born to create the perfect gift Here and now, I work on this doll that a sweet little filly could not afford to buy She stood at my window gazing at my creations with a sad longing in her eyes A good pony informed me her name was Kate; she was only the age of eight Never got what she wanted due to her family's poor living state. I work with precision to ensure young Kate receives a gift from the best Silk ruffles the color of her ice blue eyes would do nicely on the doll's dress Got to stitch with finesse! This snowflake pattern shall be a wonderful addition Jade buttons, some stuffing, and white hair for the mane the must be in perfect condition Her gift shall be beautiful! Each color must complement one another I'll even ask a good unicorn to cast a spell to ensure her gift will last forever Oh, I must not take forever! Maybe a final tweak with the stitching Tail full, mane styled, dress worn, doll stuffed. What more needs some fixing? THERE! It's perfect! But not because of it's appearance as the perfect "plaything" It's perfect because it's for a special filly and the smile my creation will bring

I think it was meant as a harmless joke guys xD

Sure thing. The poem is yours, so you're free to do whatever with it as long as t's properly credited c:

You're fine hun! c: You'll still have a spot for the next round no worries. And a tip on how to do spoilers. Simply use the code "(spoiler) TEXT HERE (/spoiler)" instead of using parentheses, you use brackets and in place of "TEXT HERE" you can put anything and once submitted, it'll be in a spoiler