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  1. No problem. But if need it revised, let me know. I went a into a musical holly direction with him on impulse but if it's something you don't like, I can do it another way
  2. Alright first one done. Please let me know if you want another one. Apologies it's a bit short compared to others, but your OC doesn't seem like the chatty type anyway. Basically I created something where he describes his own paradise compared to the fantasy of others. Hope you like it: The warm rays of the Sun beaming on your sleek fur; Compiled sound of crashing waves and singing seagulls The peaceful scenery makes good thoughts within you stir And the confident knowledge that the world is free from evil Fine granulated white sand beneath hooves soaked by the sea Your significant other pressed close as you bask in the moment Happiness fills you as you internally scream "I'm free!" This alone is your communication; no words needed to be spoken Your paradise is a fantasy The night sky decorated with speckled white lights and a full moon Shadows hugging my frame as I breath in the cold crisp air Life sworn to ensure those I love are safe from uncertain doom Shoulders heavy with a responsibility no stallion or mare should bear Basking in dark chilly nights with a sword of eternal ice and heart of fire Unknown enemies, dark memories, and one brother left to remember me His happiness and serving my princess of the night are my only desires And I bear these desires alone; carrying them with extreme expectancy My paradise is my reality Drago is added! @FlutterFly761 sorry it's closed until I finish the orders. But I'll add you for the next wave @Hibiscus Bloom Thanks you so much for abiding by the rules c: I'll definitely add you to the next wave once I'm done with the others I hope you like this. It was a bit difficult since I don't make a lot of "happy go lucky" poetry. But it got easier the more I wrote. Inn Keep is s adorable and I imagine him in this Broadway play as some jolly optimistic Innkeeper who breaks out in song xDD. And that was pretty much my inspiration to write this: COME IN! COME IN! And welcome to the Inn of dreams and satisfaction! Where heartache isn't allowed but more so your joyous reactions! I bring exceptional service to make your stay worth your while Because nothing is better than a wondrous uplifting lifestyle Just trot right in here and forget that huge load that you carry I'll take good care of your things, there's no need to be weary OH! My pleasure to meet your every demand. good pony All I ask from you is to enjoy yourself and get cozy! CHECK IN! CHECK IN! And take this key to the room I know you'll adore I am certain this is a paradise you've yet to explore! Here! Drink a hot cup of cider to put your mind right at ease I'm just a jolly old pony with a purpose to please! And though your stay here is more temporary You'll leave with a mindset my Inn is legendary We have hoof-stomping dances to get those hips shaking! And beautiful scenery that's simply breathtaking With drinks of plenty that I shamelessly will indulge in And a toilet that backs up every now and then (hehe) BUT so what, I pride my Inn with all it's imperfections And it's here where many ponies learn powerful lessons: Life is too short to waste it with war, stress and hate I was victim to that once, but broke free from that fate Plus Ironbreak and I will ensure you a safe vacation He's my trusty old buddy who never abandons his station! ENJOY! ENJOY! Go mingle with the others who seek peace as well Let my Inn be your heaven to escape other hells Ah how joy feels my heart when I see smiles on your faces Oh no worries for payment, just accept my good graces I see how you bounce like a filly so eager! I welcome you wholeheartedly as your fellow Innkeeper! please let me know what you want changed or you simply want a brand new one.
  3. My roommate made me fresh hot chocolate with a candy cane in it. I am in heaven

  4. @Summer Breeze Added! I'll start working on these now
  5. Before I launch this off, there are a few things that must be covered: 1. PLEASE refrain from targeting. Meaning pointing out individuals or a certain group rudely. For ex: "UGH I HATE PEOPLE WHO START THREADS ABOUT HOW SUNSET IS AWESOME!! SHE ISN'T" 2. I want this to be a civilized conversation. Not a hardcore rant about how much you hate certain things. Forum Discussions: - I dislike having to repeat myself a lot. Then again, I am not surprised a lot of what I say is skimmed. At times I find it more amusing than annoying when a reply is trying to prove a point that I've already expressed xD - Lack of understanding between two parties including myself. I've mentioned before how I will purposely stop speaking with a member if the direction of the discussion is going a way I feel isn't worth my time. I don't expect for everyone to agree with my points, but debating when we are NOT ON THE SAME PAGE AT LEAST is tiresome - I never understood why the moment you say "bad writing" or express the flaws of a character based off your own observation, you're deemed a terrible person and the discussion goes from trying to gather opinions and have an engaging conversation to defending yourself against accusations. - Controversy - Inability to hear their tone. It's frustrating because at times how things are typed sounds rude and targeted towards me. Even outside discussions, it feels as though "shade" is thrown everywhere. In another forum I feel the same way. My pet -peeve is more directed to the fact I'm PARANOID when it comes to not hearing the member or seeing facial expressions. I am a social person who appreciates a "face-to-face" so whenever I am online, it's almost as if I am half-blind. - When criticism or disagreement is mistaken for negative shots towards someone. Personally, if you give opinions, I think it should be expected people will have different opinions. Sometimes it's annoying when a discussion turns into a full on argument because something is not agreed upon. I think peeps should keep in mind, criticism towards anything and everything is basically half of what makes up a fandom forum. I will admit to a few nearly making me forget that. Real Life Discussions: - When the next person is getting too loud for my liking. Whether they are loud from anger or loud from excitement....it's SUPER loud and mechanically, I get annoyed. (I'LL ADMIT I'M GUILTY OF THIS AT TIMES) - Constantly being interrupted. Just....oh God my eye twitches when that happens. And eventually I stop talking - Repeating myself.....again - Lack of knowledge towards the topic. I REALLY hate when something is being discussed and I have no clue about any of it. Especially when it seems to be an educational topic because then I feel super super super stupid. Which is how I feel 95% of the time xD - When I mispronounce a word. It's a huge pet-peeve like no other.
  6. Alrighty!!! Added you guys up <3 After two more, or if I don't get anymore within the next hour or so.....I'll start these today!
  7. Adding to the list! The shop is now officially open. Feel free to look at examples. After a few more requests, I'll get started on them c:
  8. Silver Stream's Poetry Shop [insert clever slogan here] Welcome to my first shop where you request literary art instead of visual art. Due to the kind suggestion of a friend, I have decided to offer my poetic services to you guys in exchange for a small price: pure satisfaction. I will be creating poetry in relation to your OC's where you'll specify desired tone, theme, and type of poem. If you don't really care HOW I write your poem, more than likely I'll make it a free verse with whatever structure I see fit. Not every poem is required to rhyme, so if it's not specified, each outcome will be different. Along with your request, be sure to link me to your OC's Background or provide a description of what they are like or other details you want me to know so I can integrate them throughout your poem. I will be taking on 7 requests at a time and like many shops, I do have simple rules: 1. Do not nag. Writing poetry isn't a very easy task especially during a stressful era. Depending on how busy my schedule is or my mood, some poems will take longer than others. 2. When the shop is closed, it's CLOSED If you wish to still post your request for in the future, you may but please put them in spoilers to avoid confusion. Simply quote them once it's announced the shop is open again 3. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE let me know if there is something about your poem you don't like. I will do my best to revise them and since I am not good with it, I welcome constructive criticism. ​4. Once your poem is done, you're free to do whatever you want with it as long as you credit the work to me. 5. No extreme NSFW stuff people. I don't mind creating poetry consisting of strong language and mildly gore scenes, but anything beyond that isn't allowed Examples: For Lunar Echo For Prophet (More examples of my poetry are in the link within my signature and under the completed list.Take a look!) SLOTS: Wave 2: 1. Flutterfly761 2. Hibiscus Boom 3. Inspector VinylWubs 4. Stormlight 5. 6. 7. (completed requests) 1. Shadow Strike 2. EnzoAquila 3. Flearia 4. Artemis Whooves 5. PyroShark 6. Summer Breeze 7. Drago Ryder
  9. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

  10. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

  11. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

    1. Inky Well

      Inky Well

      Seems there's a lot of snow...

  12. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

    1. RyaN_

      RyaN_

      Sounds wonderful! I wish I could join you D:

      It's not..nor has it ever snowed here:(

    2. RyaN_

      RyaN_

      At least we don't have to do Winter Wrap up XD

  13. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

    1. Lunar Echo

      Lunar Echo

      I see, you've commented 50 times I think xD

  14. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

  15. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

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    1. Shadaira T.N.W

      Shadaira T.N.W

      I'm jealous now its clear skies here

    2. Silver Stream.

      Silver Stream.

      I moved to Ohio from Florida not too long ago and this will be my first snowy winter c:

  18. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

  19. IT'S SNOWING IT'S SNOWING. MY FIRST SNOW DAY

    1. Inky Well

      Inky Well

      You can take all my snow. I don't need it anymore.

  20. Could you do my OC Silver Stream? I don't mind sacrificing her to you oh great one. white unicorn with an extremely long tail and she usually wears her mane down or sometimes in the "Sunset Shimmer" style depending on her mood Here are some examples c: (You're free to put her in whatever pose you like..information about her is in my signature if you need any ideas).
  21. I think the reason why I don't see Luna as having a "temper tantrum" is because I'm aware how miserable one can be when living under the shadow of another or feeling unappreciated. Had it been LUNA attacking.....then yes a temper tantrum would be a more appropriate term. But this was Nightmare Moon. She wasn't throwing a hissyfit......she was trying to defeat Celestia and take over the kingdom. Even in the episode "The Cutie Re-Mark" we see the aftermath of her "temper tantrum" and that aftermath is her ruling Equestria for years like a motherfucking boss And Celestia did shed a tear at one point. The scene was short, but it said enough to me. A battle of two sisters....when Celestia saw Nightmare Moon was far too gone to reason with, she brought out the elements. You say most people used their imagination as to how the battle went on....I believe even with the scene....crappy or not....it shouldn't stop from imagining further. We only saw a small part of it and it seemed to be only the climax to the whole thing. In one of the quotes I have provided in my first post, I had already briefly covered something about how Celestia "managed" before the Mane 6. People would use this as a strong back up as to why Celestia isn't a bad ruler as others may think....though I never understood why. Calling someone incompetent (imo) doesn't mean you're deeming them unworthy of whatever. Anyway, I mentioned this history exist because for the sake of the show or plot. Who doesn't appreciate a good villain returning for some revenge? Celestia using the elements.....AND Starswirl the Bearded.....is a lazy way to basically "explain" why and when on certain things. I am going to be honest.....I skimmed the rest. Because the more I read, the more I was seeing support to their Incompetence since. in my opinion, most of what you described is pretty much it's definition to a certain extent. Get this: Writers are far from perfect. Some things are badly written. Some CHARACTERS are badly executed........but notice I say only "some'. Honestly? I believe it's simply imbalance within the show. Which isn't surprising to me. I'll love the show regardless.....but will continue to be unsatisfied with certain things and Celestia as well as others....are part of it. Sorry if this post sucks compared to previous responses. Had a looooong day and sort of too tired to carry on for the moment. BUT YOU GUYS FEEL FREE TO CONTINUE!
  22. Rarity in general. JUST......RARITY!! <3 Pinkie Pie and Applejack's are a close second
  23. My personal opinion of Cadence is simple: a static character. A Disney princess with a love story many want to have and a "personality and title" people will forever envy. Not too long ago I started a discussion on it...how I like Cadence but she deserves the same thing I desire for Flash Sentry. Someone (can't recall who) pointed out not every character has to struggle with something or be imperfect. Which is a fair point. But there are ways to created a grounded character without giving them that aura of "perfection". With Cadence I see big sister seemingly compassionate and whatnot. But never have I seen her show the same compassion for those outside her inner circle. It may happen "off screen" but that doesn't matter. To overlook her own loyal subjects who perhaps would have done a better job to welcome Harshwhinny (is that how you spell it?) wasn't fair imo. But again, this supports my opinion on bad decisions and incompetent rulers driving a show forward which led to there being an episode like that in the first place because it HAD to involve our main characters even if it doesn't make sense to those who look at it from a logical standpoint. Celestia....I like the way she is. Because I pay close attention to the LITTLE we are given. For example, one cannot express the admiration I have for that small scene with her battle against Nightmare Moon. How she struggled battling with her own sister. And in the mist of that struggle, she was also making a very difficult decision to use the the elements of harmony against her and banish her. THAT shows a competent ruler. Who tries out all other options in hopes to avoid the inevitable outcome of turning to something more powerful for help. And to me, she lost that the moment Twilight and friends showed up. Along with that scene a few others many wouldn't even care to take a second look at, Celestia, in a way, is more of a character than Cadence. (DANG IT I SHOULD ADD THIS IN UNPOPULAR OPINIONS). Now the guards.....is another story. I sometimes pity the role they are meant to play. They are an army of incompetent characters....and I'm not calling them idiots. I only mean they lack ensuring effective security and fail at their job all the time. I've already expressed how it's not the fault of the characters why they fail to keep their kingdom safe which leads to the Mane 6 to save the day. I also mentioned it's an unintentional method that allows the show to exist in general. Not just with FiM.....but with many many many other shows/movies/books/etc. But you misunderstand.....I don't desire for these ponies of power to be the ones to SOLVE the problems. I desire a more competent approach to the plotline on their part which is rare to see because Celestia and a few others are rarely given the opportunity. EDIT: No....they are given opportunity. It's just not being taken advantage of Once awesome example of a competent character with power or official authority is Officer Gordan from the Batman franchise. Where he is far from incompetent but still requires the help of Batman...a win/win situation in my opinion. But as you said, it is a kid's show....perhaps it's me having high hopes to see more from Celestia and the others. Where I have high expectations. But honestly, it's me only expressing how they deserve better. Is it unfair to have such expectations? Mm....meh probably. I'll admit that. But still it's something I felt the need to express
  24. "King Sombra is best villain" is an unpopular opinion? I always thought is was the most popular opinion in the fandom since I rarely see people who think otherwise. and interesting opinion. But criticism.....both postives AND negatives....are inevitable in a fandom and ubiquitous within forums. If it's the soul reason why you left...it'll be the same reason why you'll leave again and again and again because it's something that'll never change. My opinions that might seem unpopular: - Mysterious Mare Do-Well was a brilliant episode - The Equestrie Girl movies are great despite the bad writing and plot holes - Discord has been the ONLY character within the series who's been perfectly executed consistently - Applejack isn't very interesting to me - The writers make mistakes within the show and some episodes have badly written - Flash deserves to be developed LIKE PLEASE.....PLEASE GIVE THIS POOR GUY SOME FREAKING DEVELOPMENT. WHAT DID HE DO TO DESERVE THIS - Spike is awesome....give him better episodes instead of crappy ones - Sunset Shimmer is MINE
  25. Much better. And I can respect that you choose not deem Celestia as incompetent while I do. After all it is one's opinion which is why I try to keep an open mind. Though understand I never condemned her without listening to a defense. By saying that, it is almost as if you're condemning me without listening to my defense xDD I didn't deem her incompetent off the bat after many times of seeing her within the show nor did I say she was incompetent just because Lily Peet rudely expressed how incompetent she was. I take time before I ever make judgement on a character; trying to look at situations from the character's viewpoint and understand the "limitations" the show itself gives them. And as I said, I was in another discussion meaning there were plenty of others defending Celestia as to why she shouldn't be condemned as incompetent. Understand, the fact that I see her as incompetent doesn't mean I'm considering it canon....ruling out all other reasons and defense. IF you look closely, some statements are very much open ended with me keeping in mind that she isn't a plum dumb idiot with was the tone Lily Peet was using. Even in my last post, I make sure to add "if you agree she is incompetent or not". Within my first post, I'm merely expressing my opinion on her being incompetent through my perspective but I don't mean to rule out the perspective of others such as yourself who have a slightly different outlook. And towards your example of "Do Princess Dream of Magic Sheep".......exactly. Which is why I always felt Luna is somewhat more competent than Celestia because of what I've witnessed (or perhaps simply NOTICED) from her....I've yet to notice from Celestia. That point you made about it's possible for competent rulers to be writtern but simply need help sometimes?....I'll agree it's a case with Luna and Cadence but I fail to realize it's the case with Celestia. Perhaps it is the case? But I can't see it as of right now. I'm willing to listen if you have witnessed it. Oh and even though I see Celestia and others as incompetent...I don't think they are idiots or anything. Never that xD
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