Early Sunsets

135 pounds and 6'1". I'm a twig.

For good reason. It shouldn't.

For being the homeless pony.

Maybe if I wasn't straight. A fan of Rainbow can't be a bad person, at least.

I agree that the plot is good, and also that it needs editing. Something like the browser extension Grammarly can catch quite a few errors. A word of advice though, it tends to make the text editor on FiMFic unbearably slow, so I'd recommend writing a bunch with Grammarly turned off and then turning it on to fix any errors. I hope you don't mind, but I copied the prologue of your fic into Grammarly's text editor and this is what came up. I don't know what the premium alerts entail since I don't use the paid version, but even so, that's 13 less errors that an editor has to fix and 13 less errors for a reader to see. I've already got a lot on my plate between my job, BronyCon coming up soon, and the three fairly large fics I'm currently working on. I don't have time to do a lot of heavy editing in addition to all of that. I could do a little bit for you here and there if you want, but it won't be fast progress.

It's between long, curly red hair and freckles. Both together are even better. Same?

I use Cricket, and my only real complaint is the coverage. It's acceptable, but it could be better. They give you extra data the longer you stay with them, so I'm up to 5 gigs of LTE and unlimited 2G for $35 a month. Their customer service is really good, too.

There's the obvious stuff like hugs and cuddling (damn how I miss cuddling), but yeah there are other random times where it would be helpful to have another person around. I cosplay a bit too, and putting on some costumes is a bit tricky alone (one of mine takes nearly half an hour to get into by myself). Having another person you can always trust with your problems is great, too.

I live in a house, and I don't plan on ever living in an apartment. Two semesters in a dorm was all I needed to know I hate living around other people.

8/10 actually not too bad. I know this song isn't all that exciting or good, but it's one of my favorites for nostalgia.

I'm not joking when I say my dad is among the five most annoying people I've ever met, and I've met some really irritating people in my life. He doesn't even have to open his mouth to annoy me. Every little thing he does is irritating. One of my half-sisters and her family are pretty annoying, too. She's not too bad, but her husband can be pretty loud and their children are unbearable. Or maybe I just hate children. I don't know.

For being very gay (not meant offensively)

"Welcome to the wild, no heroes and villains Welcome to the war we've only begun, so Pick up your weapon and face it There's blood on the crown go and take it You get one shot to make it out alive"

Seven adult babies who were raised by a narcissist have to save the world from one of their own, who went evil when one of her friends suffocated her. Also there's a really weird side character who falls in love with someone a good thirty years older than him.