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Lyrics:

From Haywaii-i, Haywaii-a

There's a mare so happy-y

Who's lucky, and glad to be

of family with hospitality

So intelligent, with witty remarks

She's a pony with a heart so strong

She loves humming, and dancing,

Through all the days and all night long

She owns a shack to the west, and does what she's best

She makes drinks like you wouldn't believe

Around the beaches, with crystal seas

That's so beautiful, you won't want to leave

She loves all her friends, until the end

and she'll be happy to make more room

There's no pony that's quite like her

You should meet her she's Hibiscus Bloom

I love it! It would have been fine if you didn't want to go through with the Hawaiian theme, but it turned out great. The lyrics are especially awesome, thanks!! :D

I'm going to be humming this all day XD

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So I was thinking maybe we could do something kinda like the one you did for the Hawaiian pony, ya know, like how you don't know her name until the end of the song. Sorta like this (as the ending): hanging out with friends, she'll always like,

Many know her as Lightning Strike

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1 I wouldn't call myself an expert...

2 It's pretty good, I could use that in the song as well as a starting point for how the song plays out

3 sorry I didn't reply earlier, was working on another request

 

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I tried...using two different tones of voices from one person in one song is harder than it seems for me, and trying to use them together at the same time just creates an echo (at least with the way I'm trying to it)...also I'm not sure if it's possible to sing with a british accent, as even most british singers lose their accents when singing (from what I just learned) so I don't want to create a song, forcing an accent into it...sorry 

Lyrics:

 

 

Jam:

I was young and I was hopeless

Abandoned with out a home

I couldn't ever see the light 

For a long time I was alone

But you were there when needed

You stood by next to me

When I knew you were there

I was happy as could be

Plot:

You were kind and so charming

In ways I was yet to know

I was foolish to ignore it

Afraid and just said no

But now I truly see you 

As the one that I shall love

And there is no other pony

That I will treat more above

Both:

Our love will conquer all 

No matter what we face

As long as I have you

I'll have something to embrace

Jam:

Some may call it strange

Plot:

While some may just hate

Both:

But when I look at you

I will always say it's fate

Jam:

You always stayed with me

Plot:

As well as you did too

Both: 

Nothing will ever break us

That is always true

So far we will go

We will never stop

There is no competition

As we will always be on top

 

 

 

Yes.

You get an A.

In fact, you graduate from school

 

*gives you diploma*

 

Seriously, though, that was a good song.


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Yes.

You get an A.

In fact, you graduate from school

 

*gives you diploma*

 

Seriously, though, that was a good song.

well this involved using new elements for me, like trying to put two different voices into one song, so I'm glad I managed to come up with something you like.

 

Sorry you had to wait a week for this, but it was a subject that I'm not used to getting so close to, so I kinda put it off to let it sink in. Sorry if I sound like a jerk for doing that, but I guess I'm not perfect...though I managed to put my differences behind me and get a new idea of things, so I should probably thank you

 

thank you for this suggestion of a song

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Oh my gosh I just realized your sig spelled Humble Hymn, I thought it was just a bunch of music notes before XD, anyway, not to sound impatient or anything, but have you come up with any lyrics for the song?

Actually wait, never mind I kind of want it to be a surprise

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well I'm giving myself some time before I work on another song, as I want to let you continue on contributing to it. Normally I would let inspiration flow through me and do what I can to finish my songs in one sitting, but this is my first time actually working with the person who requested a song so I'm taking these steps cautiously. I'm sure I could finish your song with the information I have, but with everything that's happening, I want to be sure you contribute with whatever you feel is necessary.

 

Though this could turn out like that mlp episode (don't know the name or feel like looking it up) where Rarity wants to make dresses for the mane 6 and wants them to contribute, but that just makes it worse...eh, I'm sure it'll work out    

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One more thing, think u could use the picture that's currently my profile picture instead of the painting (it's a little easier to see her), but if u cant thats alright ^-^

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