searching Bangcolt Arena! (Fighting/Sol) -OOC- (Never closed)

[Jack Baker 698]

Yes, I know this is bad writing. Just... go with it. At this point, most of what I'm typing is just gibberish anyway.

 

Screw it, I'm editing it again.

 

Actually no. I don't know what I'm doing anymore. I've put my character in such a low position I'm basically making him do things to make him look like a good person. Even though right now, he's not.

 

 

I'm falling apart here...

Edited July 17, 2016 by Detective Adachi

[Unicorncob 5,679]

Yes, I know this is bad writing. Just... go with it. At this point, most of what I'm typing is just gibberish anyway.

 

Then stop typing. If nothing you're posting makes sense, then where does that leave the rest of us?

[Jack Baker 698]

Alright alright, I'll fix it.

 

I'm sorry again guys.

[Unicorncob 5,679]

I'm just thinking about everyone in this RP, yourself included

 

The RP is like a machine, and the posts are its cogs. One bad post can shut down the whole system, y'know?

 

Just... put a bit more focus into what you're posting, that's all I'm saying.

[J.R. 3,183]

I hope you're sincere.

[Jack Baker 698]

Well, I fixed it.

 

He'll be rounding a corner instead.

[Hazard Time 1,127]

@

 

Just as a suggestion, in order to prevent something like this from happening again, I'd reevaluate your character's motivations and think your actions through.  Raze seems to be mentally stable, so I don't see why he'd seek to complicate matters when there are much simpler and less violent means of doing the exact same thing.

 

It's the biggest reason why Carnelian isn't doing anything.  Why risk revealing herself as the demon-worshipping blood mage she is by seeking a rematch with him when she could continue playing the victim and let society do everything for her?  Currently, Raze is providing her with ample material without even having to lift a hoof.

 

I'm not saying you have to completely overhaul him, just think your responses through before you click post.  What is your goal?  What are the possible consequences?  Turning everything into a conflict isn't always the best option to take, especially when the logic involved bears no semblance to something any sane person would actually do.

 

Anyway, I'm off to bed, hope to see Raze and Carnelian meet again in the future 

Edited July 17, 2016 by Hazard Time

[J.R. 3,183]

@

 

Just as a suggestion, in order to prevent something like this from happening again, I'd reevaluate your character's motivations and think your actions through.  Raze seems to be mentally stable, so I don't see why he'd seek to complicate matters when there are much simpler and less violent means of doing the exact same thing.

 

It's the biggest reason why Carnelian isn't doing anything.  Why risk revealing herself as the demon-worshipping blood mage she is by seeking a rematch with him when she could continue playing the victim and let society do everything for her?  Currently, Raze is providing her with ample material without even having to lift a hoof.

 

I'm not saying you have to completely overhaul him, just think your responses through before you click post.  What is your goal?  What are the possible consequences?  Turning everything into a conflict isn't always the best option to take, especially when the logic involved bears no semblance to something any sane person would actually do.

 

Anyway, I'm off to bed, hope to see Raze and Carnelian meet again in the future 

 

Basically. I mean, in a city like Bangcolt, attracting unnecessary attention to yourself is a bad BAD thing to do. I mean, with all of what Raze has done so far, he's better off leaving and never coming back.

@,

And sure, I get it, you're trying to make him seem like a good guy, but even I know that in a city like Bangcolt, no one cares about heroes. Straight up. Nobody cares about heroism or its perks. No one cares about villainy or its perks. Everyone just wants what they want, whether it falls into the world's common assumptions of good or evil or not.

 

​But one thing's for certain, everyone has a GOAL. And objective. Something they want to do with themselves. So far with Raze....it seems like he has no clear objective running around in circles after foals and stuff. To reiterate what Hazard said, please take your time, and think through what your character is about to do before they do it to avoid everyone wanting to burn them at the stake.

 

Just please be more thoughtful, ok? It's all in good fun.

[Vae Victis 742]

Won't go any further than that with Lorec yet, because I know a few have to be asleep. Didn't think I'd get lolnope'd though. XD

[That One Techpriest You Used To Know 2,286]

@@Unicorncob, @, @@Hazard Time, @@Amorphous,@@J.R.,

 

I wish you people understood the concept of sleep.

 

Rosalia's currently going into shock at all of this going around her. This'll manifest itself as her becoming very... squishy, appearance wise. She's also starting to get tinted red, but other than that, she's half-conscious and woozy. She less needs to go to the hospital now, and more needs a comfy bed with relaxing music.

 

If the stress keeps up, she's going to melt into her pool by the end of the day today and then blitz out of here, or, if cornered, fight no-holds-barred against whoever's cornering her. So... take that as you will.

 

((Although you keep no-selling people, Raze, those people will be much grump. You should try talking to them the next time you get cornered. They'll understand your intentions better if you actually let them know what they are. it won't prevent salt on BB and DP's part, but it might generate some sympathy.))

[Jack Baker 698]

First off, what is this "sleep" you speak of?

 

Second, as of right now, he's pretty much in panic mode. Too much has happened for him to process, from gaining a persona to being provoked and chased by a couple of kids with sports gear. And now he's being questioned by a Minotaur. I'm planning on having him spill the beans later, much to his dislike, but not now.

 

Besides, Benny Hill chase scenes are nice. Jk.

Edited July 17, 2016 by Detective Adachi

[J.R. 3,183]

@,

Ok, I have to come out and say this. Myself and the Co-DMs have been discussing what has been going on, and we've noticed something else. I specifically said for us to wait for Guts in the RP, and you posted anyway. I don't know if you noticed it or not, but I know I said that so Guts wouldn't be left behind. In addition, you never mention Unicorncob in any of the posts that involve his filly OC Double Play. It makes her feel useless when you ignore her, and Cob takes issue with it considering he wants to be included too. It's like the only one he pays any attention to is Jack, and if Double wasn't there it wouldn't matter.

​Not to mention, even after we spoke to you last night about this, you still had Raze just leap over Lorec as if he wasn't there. Guts came to me, and felt like the work he put into making that post was just glossed over and not cared about. Honestly. Every single one of us has been discussing this, and tensions are rising heavily. I am merely trying to simmer them down before anything bad happens.

There's a saying: It's not what you do, it's how you do it.

​We've already discussed where you've made mistakes, and I don't plan to repeat myself as I'm sure you know about what we've already brought forth to attention. However, I'm merely talking about the issues that have rose since then--less than a day later.

Between all of what has happened in the last day, and the complaints I've been getting, I have no choice but to issue you your second and final warning. Keep in mind, it's only due to the boiling point at which some other players have came to me about that I am telling you this. Do not be afraid or wary of posting. I just want you to understand that everyone involved in an RP scenario matters and that "no-selling" players is not appreciated. This is your final warning, Adachi. Please try to be more welcoming to other players and their OCs. 

[Jack Baker 698]

If that's the case, I'm just gonna take a break from this for a while. Like a week, probably. Get myself sorted out with this whole mess.

[J.R. 3,183]

If that's the case, I'm just gonna take a break from this for a while. Like a week, probably. Get myself sorted out with this whole mess.

...And leave everyone else stranded in the process?

If that's the case, I'm just gonna take a break from this for a while. Like a week, probably. Get myself sorted out with this whole mess.

 

You know what? I think it'll be fine if you decide to take a break. That's how most problems get solved anyway. Go right on ahead.

[Hazard Time 1,127]

Before I respond to @@Amorphous, should I ask @@J.R. or @@Fractured or someone else to RP the receptionist or guard or what-have-you in the arena lobby, giving Zoisite and Ametrine the information on Carnelian?

[J.R. 3,183]

Before I respond to @@Amorphous, should I ask @@J.R. or @@Fractured or someone else to RP the receptionist or guard or what-have-you in the arena lobby, giving Zoisite and Ametrine the information on Carnelian?

 

That would be up to fractured, yes. XD

[Fractured 2,684]

Before I respond to @@Amorphous, should I ask @@J.R. or @@Fractured or someone else to RP the receptionist or guard or what-have-you in the arena lobby, giving Zoisite and Ametrine the information on Carnelian?

Yes, though I do have to ask if she actually registered in the competition; that's the only way the receptionist would have information on her. Otherwise, I can just use one of the guards that chased down Raze earlier on in the RP, though understand he'll be very frazzled, considering that s(he) just witnessed a giant, multi-headed, undead alicorn...

[Hazard Time 1,127]

Yes, though I do have to ask if she actually registered in the competition; that's the only way the receptionist would have information on her. Otherwise, I can just use one of the guards that chased down Raze earlier on in the RP, though understand he'll be very frazzled, considering that s(he) just witnessed a giant, multi-headed, undead alicorn...

 

That's...actually a good question.

 

I don't think she actually got the chance to register before Raze assaulted her, so...no, she's not registered.  The guard would probably be the best bet, though I'm sure that on top of witnessing that abomination, they might currently be busy with an interview by a certain detective, so I can guess that they would be very hard to talk to. ;P

 

Then again, when Zoisite's got a voice like below, I don't think that'll be too much of a challenge X'D

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FiPDV9L5qpQ

 

[Jack Baker 698]

Ok, I know I said a week, but... I feel like I'm confident enough to do this again without screwing up somehow... Is it alright for me to come back?

@J.R.

Edited July 19, 2016 by Detective Adachi

[Dust and Memories 557]

Big real-life things that were happening are over. I finally have a new computer, though it's sadly not backed up yet, as the old computer can't turn on and therefore needs to have its hard drive ripped out and the data put in the new one.

 

Still can post, however, and I'm finally catching up with all my RPs here.

 

@@Fractured, I have to apologize for stalling in the middle of a character interaction. I'll try to keep to a more regular posting schedule, and I'm sorry if I caused you any inconvenience or offense.

[TerminalObsession 250]

@@Hazard Time,

 

I apologize for the long post. I desired to put Dust in this storyline as organically as possible, because I like both the storyline and you.

[Hazard Time 1,127]

@@Hazard Time,

 

I apologize for the long post. I desired to put Dust in this storyline as organically as possible, because I like both the storyline and you.

 

That's fine XP  And I'm glad to hear that!

[TerminalObsession 250]

That's fine XP  And I'm glad to hear that!

Thanks! I was wondering, when will you be able to post? I'm not really the most patient when it comes to this sort of thing.

[Hazard Time 1,127]

Thanks! I was wondering, when will you be able to post? I'm not really the most patient when it comes to this sort of thing.

Whenever I can, honestly. I think I'm waiting on @Fractured, though.

[TerminalObsession 250]

Whenever I can, honestly. I think I'm waiting on @Fractured, though.

Fine. I'll give Fractured a poke and see if that does anything. Because impatience.

 

@@Fractured,

 

So... yeah, reply to Hazard's comment and stuff. I'll be waiting.