music Critique for my song please

[El Duderino 879]

So this isn't a new song, but I re-recorded it recently because I wasn't happy with the original. It is an original song written by me. I am going for a kind of folk punk style (this one is more folk than punk). I am looking for some critique because I think this song has potential, but I'm still not completely happy with it. I think the vocals could be louder, but it's fine for now.

 

https://soundcloud.com/colton-paul-crawford/california

Edited November 3, 2015 by McDude

[FlitterFlutter 1,583]

You know, I quite like this despite the fact I am not normally into this kind of music.

One thing I will say to improve is make the vocals louder!!